Food Disaster

It is a very interesting and imaginative book with a weird style. However, I feel that the title delays the book a bit. It should be better. This book doesn't have any systems that I hate, and it's worth reading. Although the writing style is not everyone's, it can be considered excellent, and it's not a novice. I hope it won't start too high and start too late but will continue to be weird and mysterious, and don't let readers easily guess the plot. That would be boring.

It's a pity that the early stage is very good, but the later stage becomes more and more biased, until it completely falls into the cliche. The idea is very good, and the hospital chapter is well written. But after leaving the hospital, it became a cliched script about fighting monsters and upgrading. After arriving at medical school, it completely fell into the cliché. Revealing the identity of Nightmare Eater was a big failure. The atmosphere created in the early stage was completely washed away, and it became an ordinary fantasy novel.

If the theme of this book were still the path of killing monsters and upgrading, it would become very boring. The first attraction is fear + comedy. Wandering in a terrifying atmosphere, coupled with the contrast between the protagonist's abilities and the bizarre reactions of the parasitized person. Instead of eating food that the reader cannot tell the size of, barely showing the lack of time, and no sense of tension, okay? Later, there was a team of teammates early on, and it became a team-fighting mode.

I give you a monthly vote, your writing is good, just be careful not to be nervous, don't be too stressed, and control your mentality. Rhythm is very important. I feel that your rhythm is not very stable recently. In fact, the horror genre at the beginning of this book is a big selling point. However, the genre has changed a bit since writing, but it doesn't matter much. Just keep a good rhythm. Later, you can try to incorporate some gruesome elements and horror elements into it, and make it a little scary, with a little bit of madness and comedy, it will be great Of course, it is also very good now, if you keep the rhythm stable, it will be great if you stick to it until the end.

Come on! This idea is really interesting. I hope the author will write better and better. I give you all my five recommendation votes.

It's a pity to start high and go low. If the author reads the comment area, he should be able to find out what the problem is. The weird opening of Cthulhu and the comedy are really well written, otherwise I wouldn't subscribe. After seeing Chapter 110, it seems to have directly turned into a flow of killing monsters and upgrading. The rhythm is also very tight. Mainly I don't have any rest time with the team, and my style has completely changed. In addition, the author explained too many things at once, which made me less interested in subscribing to the later chapters. I fell directly into the cliché. I hope the author can work hard. It is really a pity.

It's very creative and well-written, but there's a problem with the food. A mature author should be able to put pictures on his own. Is it this kind? It takes about three to five minutes to eat.

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Awesome, this is my evaluation. The plot is over-the-top but also of a good level. I am not the kind of author who applies mechanical techniques. And the subject matter is too arrogant. I have never seen anyone with this subject matter. I will give recommendations in the groups I have added. I hope the author will write better as he writes.

What a shame. As of Chapter 83, it has been completely reduced to a re-skinned urban supernatural novel. Replacing the parasites with some cultists and villain names such as underground organizations do not feel out of place. The dozens of chapters in the mental hospital were clearly written so well. This book once had the chance to become the second Dao Weird Immortal, so why did it end up like this? Maybe Sun Xuechao in the book is the incarnation of the author. What a pity.

It feels very good at the beginning, but after the introduction of the nightmare-eating setting later, it doesn't feel right. Personally, I feel that it would be much better to write Cthulhu directly as a certain rule or simply a weird and polluted Cthulhu. However, it would be inferior to turn this kind of Cthulhu-style monster into a logical and communicable monster, which would make the subsequent plot become a very ordinary monster-fighting and upgrading story. Of course these are just personal opinions.

The author's approach to the subject is very novel, but the content demonizes mental hospitals to a certain extent. Let's put it this way, in reality, even if you are really mentally ill and wandering around in front of doctors, no one will catch you. Psychiatrists treat patients just like ordinary doctors. They are normal people even if they take off their white coats. If you don't pay money to the hospital, you won't be able to stay in the hospital. On the contrary, even the inpatient doctor is definitely the one who worries more than you. They think that public hospitals are state-owned and have various rules and regulations. The above is to hope that the author will not demonize psychiatrists, making it seem as if darkness has great power and can determine a person's life or death; on the other hand, I hope that this book can survive, stop being 360, and just write a good book. It is difficult to become bigger and stronger when dealing with these things.

It's a pity. The author's imagination and creativity are very good, but maybe the way of presenting the world view is too direct, which makes the readers lose interest, and the clear numerical reinforcement makes the entire article monotonous and boring. Good luck to the author for his next book, I will pay attention.

Have you ever been a pica? Just write and take it for granted.

I knew it wasn't long after I guessed it. The writing style was childish and the thoughts were simple. The protagonist was too weak. When I made suggestions and was criticized by others, I knew it wouldn't last long.

Have you ever been mentally ill? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

I came across the video on Douyin. I really had the talent to become a god in the early stage. It's a pity.

I ate a pancake at the beginning, and it was watery for three chapters. Can you believe it 😅😅

I have always been curious about why the protagonists insist on using French sticks as weapons... They always say that sticks are hard, no matter how hard they are, they are not as strong as steel bars... Does food have a special attack on monsters? I missed it 🤔

The author is not good at naming names. I have helped you find a few good names that are guaranteed to be hits, such as "The Weird Pancake" "The Story of Mu Pancakes" "Speed ​​and Pancakes" "The Story of Pancakes" "The Record of Unusual Roast Duck" "Fuchun Mountain BBQ Pictures" "Qin Shi Barbeque" "Hot Pot Tour in the Snow" As long as you change your name, you will be famous all over the world.

After coming out of the mental hospital and contacting the so-called supernatural organization, the suspenseful and terrifying atmosphere plummeted.

After seeing the concept of eating nightmares appear in Chapter 58, there is no longer that faint sense of weirdness, and it has become a monster-fighting and upgrading article. You can probably guess what the plot will be next. However, some places are quite interesting and a bit boring🐢

Give me a suggestion. Don't write so fast. The opening chapter is super good. The atmosphere is created very well. The ideas are very novel and can be read. But as soon as I got out of the mental hospital, I started to plummet. This kind of writing really doesn't need such a fast pace. Writing slower and creating more atmosphere and more imagination is better than anything else. Especially the unveiling part. As long as you don't reveal the secret, readers will never leave. You have defined a nightmare and ruined the story. In fact, readers only want to reveal the secrets and don't want to know the secrets. You write slowly and throw out the settings. Once you reveal the trump card, you can start to see something. If you lose the concept of nightmare, the number of readers will at least double. Write it according to the plot of this mental hospital. If you can't continue, just change the city. Open your mind a little wider. Pattern, pattern. It's really a good book. Imaginative, good atmosphere, good rhythm. Unfortunately, it ended abruptly when I went to the mental hospital to get a cake. It would be better for you to let that man die in a mental hospital than to have him come out and explain. Let the protagonist group decipher it themselves and delete that person's plot. Look at the diaphragm.

The Nightmare Tribe is really a bit of a failure. Before this, the setting was interesting enough to cover up the blunt plot. But once the Nightmare Tribe came out, it became boring, and the previous shortcomings were infinitely magnified.

It's very interesting and creative, and it creates a good sense of suspense and horror.

The author had a problem with whether to write a chapter of 2,000 words or 4,000 words, which caused the whole book to collapse. For this book, rhythm (cool arrangement), atmosphere, and character creation are the top priorities. Whether the number of updates is one chapter or two chapters, why should you care so much about such a trivial matter. I believe that most people who give up on books, including myself, give up because the plot arrangement is not good enough, the reading is not interesting enough, and the taste is not interesting.

The author didn't grasp it well and started it too quickly.

It's a pity that I really liked it in the early stages and couldn't stop at all. When Sun Getou set it up, he felt something bad. When he went to medical school, his suspense was completely dead. The mystery was completely revealed, and there was no mood to follow up. . . I ordered three chapters and gave three monthly passes. I hope the author will write better and better. . .

Let me tell you someone who has seen it. I really like the early setting.

I took a look at the author's previous works. The first book was an imaginative essay that could add 1 inch of length to any place. I also read a whole book at that time. I remember my later evaluation of the abandoned book was that it had plenty of imagination but not enough logic. You are serious about logic, how can one person defeat thousands of readers? There will always be loopholes and fallacies, and some key and secret logic and loopholes are quite fatal to a serious imagination article. I still like the beginning of this book, which is similar to a secret room on an isolated island, with a bit of suspense and weird elements. Although I know that this kind of atmosphere will not last long, and it will definitely fall into the cliché of a long series, but I still want to see what I like go further. So in my humble opinion, the author should either be more precise and rigorous, like Japanese mystery novel authors, who use this concept as the core and close the entire logical details, or simply give up rigorous logic and simply write a little more crazy. When the logic of the character's behavior crosses the line of normal people, everyone will suddenly realize that this character is not a normal person, and the number of readers who use normal people's thinking logic to criticize you will be greatly reduced. Just like a weird fairy, no one will ask whether Brother Huozi's behavior is logical or unreasonable. They just want to see what other tricks he can do. Come on, author, I will give you a monthly vote first. I hope you can find a way to balance your style and market demand as soon as possible. I hope you write better and better.