Bad News Comes from the World of Immortality!

The author is too weak, so that's the end of it? I cut it off at the beginning. The author spent too little time on this book and there were so many typos. It was enough with this grade, but it turned out to be cut off. I just don't understand what some authors were thinking. Do you want a book to bring you wealth and freedom? Do you think it's possible? No matter what you do, the small group of people at the top make the most money. Are you among that small group of people in your daily life and work? You are like a eunuch at every turn. If you don't write it step by step and accumulate it, how can so many people read it? No one is born with a skill, and besides, our time and energy are also very important, okay? We are willing to read your book and support you. One is that your writing is okay, but your writing is not bad or even good. The other is to support you, write well and don't give up easily. The leading author is not short of us. You need everyone's support more in the beginning, but you are careless and have many typos. I have a small problem. They didn't say anything, but you didn't do the simplest thing, that is, you didn't pay attention to the book. You can only practice step by step to improve your writing skills. You didn't do anything about typos that could be corrected with a little time. Now, suddenly, you have to ask for leave if you have something to do. The eunuch is such a bad character, and it directly makes everyone uncomfortable. You should think about it yourself.

The writing is still good But after reading the latest chapter, it is still a bit uninteresting A little centipede spirit knows the reputation of the protagonist's sect I'm so scared that I dare not touch a mouthful of blood And this second king seeing the protagonist's dark soldiers, not the so-called magic sword should understand that the information is wrong In the end, he still did it hard , and he obviously didn't notice it when writing it Of course, the halo of the protagonist is understandable But compared to the previous plot, this paragraph feels a little bit worse Come on, keep the standard, this writing should be the reincarnation of the old author, you can still read it If you want eunuchs in the future, please wait a little longer to eunuchs, there are still few such writings

Bad luck, another poisonous article about panel attributes

Sure, why did you give up?

The writing is very good. I don't care about the main world, the time ratio of copies, and I don't care about the subject matter. As long as the writing is good, I don't pick anything. If the author writes well, I will give you the monthly pass at the beginning of next month.

I just finished all the voting, why did the update stop?

It's not like a newcomer, he must be reincarnated from the dirt. I think it's very interesting and refreshing. The protagonist is quite charming and the supporting characters are not mentally retarded. I feel that if this is the case, the results should be better. Can't such articles be published in Sanjiang? Not that much

Which boss is this reincarnation? I feel that the writing is very nice. As long as the rest of the book is not unfinished, it should be a good book.

Grandma's was pretty good. Why did you cut it?

The author's next book will still be about this theme. It will be faster, more refreshing, and smoother, so more people will read it. The copy of this book is too grinding and too slow. I hope the protagonist will still summon the Yin soldiers and gods. I haven't seen anyone write it well.

Five people are in a team, two teams are a team, and five teams are a team. A total of 50 people The second team is the official, and the second official is the song. 200 People in total. Two or five pieces are divided into groups, with 400 to 1,000 people. The subordinates are the school, and the school is the army. There is no fixed number, but the maximum number is ten thousand.

I like this kind of thing, keep writing

The setting of your Yin Soldiers and Divine Generals is not perfect. The protagonist usually upgrades very quickly. Now the Yin Soldiers that are hard to raise will soon be out of use. It is better to make the Yin Soldiers fusionable. 12 Yin Soldiers can be fused into one Divine General. The higher the realm, the more Yin Soldiers can be fused, and they can be fused into one or more Divine Generals according to the situation. In this way, the Yin Soldiers and Divine Generals can always accompany the protagonist to upgrade...

Well written. Come on.

Why did it suddenly appear on the shelves without even saying a word? Many people don't know why the first order was so good.

No wonder the name of the author of this book looks familiar

The author may have traveled through time, and the specific ways of traveling include car accidents, lightning strikes, fires, drowning, choking on drinking water, etc. The author will definitely overcome difficulties and come back to update.