The Tree Ancestor Hiding in a Blessed Land of the Dharma-Ending Age

Who is to blame for the higher the level of advancement, the harder it is to have a baby? Does it mean that men become impotent when they advance to a higher level? Aren't tadpoles more active? Do women have shields on the outside of their ovaries? ? ?

The setting is very novel, but Zulu talks too much and creates conflicts too deliberately. He kills Tiezhu and buries him in his own home. . , The roots of the tree are not destroyed and attract the moon vine

He has been forced to get promoted for various reasons, and he was marked by a bug. The top leaders of the human race also have ideas. He is almost the enemy of the whole world. Where is Gou?

After reading the first 25 chapters, I couldn't help but subscribe to one chapter and wanted to post my feelings and suggestions. It's already 25 chapters, and the plot progresses too slowly The plot can be summarized as the Yu family discovered that the protagonist sapling in the yard is a rare species. The protagonist sapling can practice cultivation, and the Yu family uses the spirit stone borrowed from the second child to assist. The protagonist is practicing, a storm comes, the three brothers enter the blessed land, and Father Yu stays to guard the little tree. The other plot that can be seen is that on the way to the blessed land, a monster attacked and lost some people Then the rest of the chapter is about the wheel of a car. The discussion and actions of several members of the Yu family took more than ten chapters in total, which may be The author wants to reflect the personality characteristics of the family members through dialogue, but without the advancement of the plot, it is too thin to rely on dialogue to establish the characters. To establish the characters, a few distinctive dialogues can reflect the characters' personalities. Too long-winded will easily make the characters have no characteristics. You can learn from how to write characters in Xuanjian The current plot volume can be reduced to half the chapters and can be completed in ten chapters I hope the author will stop talking about character ideas and dialogues later and enrich the plot The advantage is that he did not throw away a large part of the setting at the beginning, but expanded the setting according to the progress

The author wants to write about a symbiotic relationship, supporting each other, but this is not good. As a result, the protagonist runs too fast and has built his foundation. The symbiotic partner has not yet practiced Qi. It is too embarrassing.

No, I haven't lifted it up yet. I write like this every day and people are too lazy to follow it. Is it interesting to delay it like this?

This book seems to be relatively good, but it is a bit watery and the early stage is a bit unsatisfactory. The content looks very novel, and the Fudi Cave Sky and Black Disaster were the main reasons for me to read it in the early stage. I hope the author will not forget these two points later, otherwise it will feel like he is reading two books. After a comprehensive evaluation, this book is still readable, but some settings feel like they are just for this, so they appear like this. To put it simply, they are blatantly cheating.

Farm, recruit people to farm, continue farming, more content, author, your point of view has not changed yet.

I will reward you with a golden alliance. Can you change the Yu Zu to the Durian Zu 🙂

Have you ever been a tree? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted