The Void Invades My Daily Life and Prevents Me from Fishing

To be honest, it's not good to watch. The plot is all watery. The key is that if you're so watery, why don't you advance the plot? More than 20 to 30 of these chapters are devoted to those four women, where are they having an affair? Why can't I continue writing without women? I was really convinced. At first I saw the latest chapter, and later I thought you might make some progress. But after waiting for the update for so many days, I barely saw the plot. There was too much promotion, and it was all written around the four women. Anyway, I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up. You want to say it is a lump, but you cannot say that, but it is not 💩, and it is unlikely.

Why are so many people who time travel are fools? If they live again or time travel and don't want to change themselves, they still act like shit. They are speechless. If they are talented, they should hurry up and make money to make themselves stronger. They still act like shit and are speechless.

I think the author can switch to a female channel. You don't need to change your writing style, just switch all the genders. I definitely don't mean to insult the author. I just think you might be able to earn more royalties this way.

The description of growth feels a bit like I can devour growth infinitely

Actually it's the author's problem. If the protagonist is a native, there will be no sense of déjà vu like being a second-generation person but being stupid and sweet. Just like Tian Can Tudou when Xiao Yan rubbed against the time traveler

Is the protagonist Xiao Nan Niang? Looking for wormwood later? 😃

Throughout the story, the author did not grasp the sense of security. Readers will feel that the protagonist has become stronger, so it feels good. Similarly, readers will also feel unhappy when they feel that kind of weakness. When the problems encountered by the three girls are shared with the male protagonist, will the male protagonist be able to protect them? No. To put it bluntly, I don't even have the ability to protect myself. The risk of exposure far exceeds one's ability, but the author keeps hinting it intentionally or unintentionally. All kinds of beasts and horses are plotting secretly. Is the protection provided by the dean important? For people who are not familiar with the protagonist, sudden kindness is also a burden. To put it simply, the author should not overthink the enemies with different abilities to slap in the face. The risks are obvious and the mastery of the refreshing points is poor.

You are a void monster! The big bugs and cockroaches were all eaten. Superimposing body size and blood volume, I eat, eat, eat, eat, eat, eat, Gao, Li, and Liu. And all the national treasures were eaten. Directly travel through infinite time and space, I am a book reader, I have this ability, I will eat it all.

It's a little childish and a little embarrassing. The main character doesn't look like a college student but a junior high school student.

After reading Chapter 12, I don't know what the author wants to write.

In reality, lack of resources can be understood as not wanting to be too involved with the country, but the reply is very pretentious, and the way of doing things: very pretentious, pretending to be a brother, a second grader, having an affair with a college instructor, because political correctness has a tendency to be cut in half.

It's okay to write about daily life, but your daily life is too much, right? Too lazy to chase

Showing off is forced by reality. If there is a chance, who would want to show off. So this kind of protagonist is not very likable.

Next time, please be more direct and write the title of the novel as ✍🏻The story that the protagonist and 1-♾️ have to tell.

In daily life, everything with great benefits will be coveted. This kind of oppression and calculated daily sense of substitution will only be counterproductive in cool articles, and readers will be lost at the speed of light. Unless the supporting character suffers an unexpected loss after the calculation, it will be a loss on the spot. I don't know how to write conflicts, but it is definitely unwise for the author to use the losses that readers may suffer in life as material. Only those calculations and conflicts that normal people would not encounter are suitable as material. That's why materials like Dian Lao, all kinds of strange people, monsters, and aliens are so popular. Compared with the plot of boxing power, it often exceeds the limits of human beings in reality, so there is no sense of being oppressed. However, ordinary people are really likely to encounter the official oppression plot, so writing such plots is unflattering and sensitive, and it is easy to be taken away. I read this book for the monster clones, and I found it quite interesting. But now the author's painting style is becoming more and more realistic, and it's not as interesting as before.

The plot didn't advance at all, the protagonist was too effeminate and bloodless! The description of the protagonist is not as vivid as the description of the heroine.

After reading ten chapters, I felt that it was just average, nothing outstanding, and boring.

Obviously this book is good overall. I've also read about multiple female protagonists in the harem, etc., But I just can't like the protagonist.

It looks good. Let's have more interactions with the heroine.