Beginning from the Fetus to Become a God

It feels like there are a lot of settings and it's tiring to watch. And I thought Daojun was a majestic person, but it turned out that he was a loli and didn't hold his nerve, which was a bit of a drama.

It's quite interesting, but it has a bit of a pornographic feel to it, and there are too many emotional scenes. I still need to adjust the proportion to the main plot.

First author, please consider switching to light novels. The works you write are really not popular in fantasy. The character setting is incompatible with fantasy. It's fine in light novels, but it's really hard to get over in fantasy. The second setting is too complicated. I personally feel that the author is not the reincarnation of an alien demon or an old monster. I doubt that the author can grasp it? Thirdly, this book lacks something eye-catching, and feels like it is tasteless and a pity to discard. Of course, I read it as a light novel. If I read it as a fantasy, I would probably run away. Seeing the author's positive response, I wrote this post. I hope the author doesn't mind. Finally, I wish the author a fortune.

No, if you write about a fetus, just write about the fetus, and control the mother's body before she is born. Why don't you just turn on the mecha?

Not bad. It has new ideas and a power system. It was a bit too much when I first watched it and I couldn't remember it, but it's still very good to ignore the plot. You can take a good look at it, it has potential.

I stopped watching it when the so-called father appeared in Chapter 18. I don't know what happened. It was fine at the beginning, but I lost interest in reading it.

Some are too procrastinating. In more than 100 pictures, the main character is still in the infant stage. How to write the teenager, adolescent and young adult stage later. Moreover, the world view is very grand. There are so many professional settings to describe the Star Realm, the Imperial Road, and the Ten Thousand Races, and there are also some shadows of group portraits. I will definitely focus on describing the growth of my parents in the future. The difference between you and veteran authors is that you don't control enough time. You write too detailedly and you describe every aspect. If you want to write about a young genius, it's okay to write a protagonist who is too awesome. But during the genius test, the character of the young genius was already established. Why do you want to add a scene where he helps people catch the ghost mother? This scene that forcibly depicts the protagonist as being awesome is really too much. But I probably guessed the general direction of this scene, and it probably has something to do with my sister-in-law. Also, the baby stage is really too long. Even if you write about this stage, we will find it boring. The people who read the book are adults or teenagers who cannot understand that they are very awesome babies.

It's hard to stretch, and it smells like a light novel at the beginning 🤭

The author takes a trumpet and re-reads the first fifty chapters from the reader's perspective. The reader's main perspective is the fetus. This is a fantasy theme. I will make my own choices when reading sweet articles. I read chapters 1-20 page by page. Chapters 20 to almost 50 felt so awkward that I didn't even want to click on the title. The main focus of your book is the fantasy fetus. After chapter 20, you jump to its many aspects and parents fall in love. It feels very strange.

Whether your book will become a god, I don't know, but your system will leave traces.

You're not the author. Why did you write down some very disgusting plots in such detail? This is a novel. It's disgusting if you write it in such detail, isn't it? 🤔🤔🤔

I skipped through almost fifty chapters. I didn't see the plot, I just saw the setting.

Who is the protagonist's father? I've read it twice and still don't see it.

There will be a review of the previous chapter in the next chapter, 6666. I am really afraid that too many people will read "Blatant Water", not to mention a lot of other messy perspectives. I feel that I want to work hard to write a good sense of substitution and create a world view, but the actual perception is a mess. My writing skills are not up to standard. Don't be too stubborn. Writing a refreshing article is better than this. I am stuck here 🙂

My question is that it was too harsh and was deleted too quickly. I apologize. After reading the author's reply in the post, I realized that he is really a newbie. If you are not afraid of the discomfort, check out Lao A's slice of Seattle's Rainy Night in Seattle. It will help you understand what you wrote.

After reading 7 chapters, it seems like a novel for screening readers. I guess there will be a wave of people who can't stand it in the first two chapters. I was attracted by the title of the book. After a few chapters, the setting is a bit too much, and the sense of anticipation is fading. Based on my personal experience of reading online books, I feel that this book will be quite tiring to read, so I stopped and put it on the bookshelf for now.

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My grandma is a Taoist master and a goth lolita, and my grandpa is a time traveler and copywriter. Alas, I don't know how to express a lot of complaints. I can only say that those who can read it are blessed.

Oh my god, I'm getting tired of watching this.

The writing is quite interesting and fresh, but it feels more like light novels and female videos. I originally thought it was a traditional fantasy.

I finished reading it in one day. It is very well written. I am someone who writes books seriously. Although I am a newcomer, my writing style is good, which is rare. Obviously there are some plots that the author wanted to write after adding his own thinking. The writing is very careful and very good. But these episodes sometimes feel abrupt. It's probably similar to the feeling of wanting to write a golden sentence in an essay, but failing to connect it well. I don't know if the author has an outline. You must have an outline first. Without an outline, it will be more difficult to write later.

Awesome and awesome, the posture of Sanjiang!

As the title says, the author's own writing skills are not good enough. This book should be used as a training exercise. There is nothing to take away from you. Chapter 20 and the rest of the writing are a bit confusing. Please hone your writing more and strive to be better in the next book.

I wrote nearly 60 chapters during my pregnancy, so talented 😄

The author's writing style is quite good, but the writing style is rather quiet, which leads to the "depression" part being written in a very immersive and a bit too depressing manner when writing some plots that are first suppressed and then elevated. The "upward" part is okay when viewed alone, but it is not enough when compared with the previous "depressed" part, and cannot offset the emotions that the "depressed" part brings to people. So when it comes to this kind of plot that first suppresses and then improves, I have to wait and see again, otherwise I will be too frustrated. Of course, the author's overall writing is still very good.

A bit too girly, but otherwise okay

Use the skeleton as muscles, and the muscles as cerebellum and nerves???

The new chapter is depressing, even if it kills people, it will make people feel uncomfortable.

Some plots are written in too much detail, and the details are inappropriate.

In the past, many novels that started with babies were also about exercises. The only difference in this one is that it has a new system. This kind of writing is very elegant. Although I have subscribed to all of them now, it is really the same routine. Usually, this kind of novel will be unfinished.