The Secret Record of Slaying Corpses to Attain the Dao

The progress is accelerated, the Qi training period can be passed quickly, and the Zifu Golden Pill can be written longer. Many books now have this problem. When the early stage is weak, the writing is too long, the world is not unfolded, and it is not attractive yet it is written too long. Some books written directly from Zifu are probably more attractive.

Book quality: Gray, the self-evident plot is too exaggerated. And very deliberately. It's a bloody plot before the plot even begins.

From the introduction, I feel that the setting of this cheat is too deliberate. Only by killing zombies can you obtain the energy of the cheat? Isn't it okay to kill other creatures? Goldfinger was designed specifically for this world? It would be better to write that as long as you kill animals, you can obtain the golden finger energy. The protagonist's moral values ​​will not be provoked and he will not kill people at will. There are many ghouls, so killing ghouls is the right way, isn't it?

The writing is quite smooth and the characterization is okay. The foreshadowing is also recovered quickly. It borrows the setting from The Walking Dead that people transform into corpses after death, and it tells the story of cultivating immortals. You can look forward to the follow-up

Time has passed, has the length of life been consumed at the same time? I had this question before when I saw tomatoes speeding up time.

This introduction is not very attractive, and the subject matter is quite non-mainstream, and Goldfinger is also very low-key. You have been holding back this for so long? I hope you won't think about running away as a eunuch when your grades are not good.

The departure of each new book is like a small boat sailing towards the magnificent sea. Some of them ran aground on the rocks, some were torn apart by wind and waves, and some of them were captains who abandoned their ships. I am not a talented writer, but I cherish every plot I write and hope they will be welcomed. So if there are obvious errors or omissions in this novel, or bugs in the plot, please point them out and I will work hard to correct them. Of course, it would be better if there is a reasonable and interesting plot development direction provided to me. Maybe I can collect those scattered thoughts and turn them into various realities in the plot world. Above, thank you readers for your strong support. I am very lucky to be able to let you read the novels I wrote. I am very grateful.

Not bad, there is nothing wrong with the book and you can read it

After reading it, the writing is pretty good, and it counts as food and grass +. But the amount is still a little bit low, and I lost my enthusiasm just after I looked at it. Also, the title and introduction of your book have something to do with the content, but it feels weird and unattractive.

The previous one had the apocalypse of the world, and this killer monster was upgraded?