Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei Doesn't Want to Be a Love Monster

The author just went for self-pleasure in the early stage, without any outline, but his writing style is indeed not bad even at the starting point, which makes up for a lot. If it weren't for this writing style, I generally can't stand this kind of self-pleasure writing. When he signed the contract, he clearly stated that he was writing for high-level excitement, which caused the characters to be very separated, especially Su ooc is particularly serious. This is a serious problem for fan fiction. However, it has obviously been made up for after signing the contract, but the sense of separation is still very strong. If you are simply interested in the dragon harem, then this book will be given four and a half stars for you. You can read it if you like the original version very much. Yes, it is not recommended for those who pay special attention to the original work. The author is a chef, and he obviously mixed in a lot of them. Sometimes the separation becomes more serious in order to mix them in. This is also a manifestation of his self-interest. As far as I know so far, it was just written in Chinese and had no outline at the beginning. I thought Which ones, so it looks a bit messy. Maybe I don't know if he has a good outline now. Anyway, I personally think that if you put aside the writing style, it is worth two points. Even if you talk about the writing style, but it is a serious mistake for the fans in many aspects, three and a half points is the best. If the reader is Yun, it can be up to 4 points.

As of the latest chapter "If You Be Careful (Part 2)" I just typed a thousand words and posted it, but I didn't see anything, and I was so excited that I rewrote it. Going straight to the point, the protagonist Lu Mingfei has no goals. The goal is to "live an ordinary life" which is not a goal at all. First of all, the reader's sense of immersion will be lost because they cannot think. Secondly, the plot cannot be imagined and expected, and it cannot attract people at all. The plot at the beginning is very thoughtful. Lu Mingfei's goal is the key. Even a three-thousand-meter goal can shape Lu Mingfei's determination to change, describe Su Xiaoqiang's charm, and also take the opportunity to foreshadow Chen Wenwen's mentality. I think the author definitely has the ability and writing power to shape the characters while pushing the plot, but the protagonist cannot push the story forward without a goal. Can we expect Jiangnan's original writing to push the story forward? Are you writing your review of Dragon Clan? Even with the so-called youthful writing style, even after Lu Mingfei started to want to live an ordinary life, Su was fine when he didn't appear. There were no twists and turns in other characters. Of course, you should throw away the plot and setting of the Ke type. After all, it is foreshadowing in the middle. But Ke type needs a lot of foreshadowing and even needs the opening chapter to set the tone. Don't write it. I beg you. I will just mention a solution to the problem I raised. The threat of the bronze dragon awakening is ahead of schedule, but many mixed-race forces are temporarily suppressing it. In this process, readers jump out of the comfort zone of the original work's knowledge, the author grasps the direction of the plot and arouses interest, Lu Mingfei changes his mind and enters Kassel College, several supporting characters come to life to support their character, and one or two female protagonists advance their relationship. Isn't this good? This is just an idea I mentioned casually. Can't you make it more perfect? Now I can't see what I can expect from this book because Lu Mingfei doesn't want to do anything. The above, I am tired of coding, and I am tired of reading your winding words.

Why do Dragon Love fans always like to write about Chen Wenwen and Liu Miaomiao?

This is the love monster Lu Mingfei, the love monster who has been judged and sent to hell three times. Do you have such a love monster? Just tell me🤓🤣

Although I really want to tell everyone that this is a love story, when it comes to dragon elements, I have to mention the depiction of battle scenes. The latest chapter is a brand new attempt. Any old reader who has read the author's previous book should know that I am elegant, easy-going, never curse, and never fight. I have no criminal record such as fare evasion, theft, robbery, etc. I have been a serious and honest child since I was a child. The battle scenes I wrote can almost be condensed into one sentence. "A smashed B's dick with an ashtray." It's no good if I don't write it, because I have to get some of the dragon thing. But the writing is poor and extremely damaging to the perception. The previous book was tortured by this stuff. Coupled with the immature emotional drama, the plot collapsed and the characters were completely ruined. So, I made a difficult (laughing) decision. In the future, when writing about scenes that require fighting, I will focus on JoJo. I will not deliberately write about the story of the powerful bricks flying and Lu Mingfei frowning and the other party bowing to him (there will still be some if necessary). Change the depiction of the battle scenes from "wrestling" to "calculation". Take the latest two chapters as an example. When Lu Mingfei faced Mai Shutoku, he did not use things like "nobility in the soul", "power hidden in the blood", or "mysterious and terrifying golden eyes". Instead, when he was sure that Mai Shutoku was pressing him in the passenger seat with her whole body weight, and her attention was attracted to her right hand and neck, he pulled the handbrake with his left hand, stopped the high-speed car, and used inertia to throw Maitoku Mai out. Later, when I was desperate, I went to find Mai Shutoku's friend Potato Chip Girl through the contact information in the preface, and used exhaustive methods to successfully locate Potato Chip in the crowd. Although, it depends on the outcome. He defeated these two, but he just didn't win. But is the look and feel of this scene better than that of "A smashed B's dick"? The author is unknown, so I would like readers to give me some advice. Ps: Lu Mingfei's little cleverness was the author's idea of ​​the second and fourth Qiaos. Ps: JOJO2 and JOJO4 are really beautiful! Ps: Each of you are punished to watch "Lee Sin's Bizarre Adventure"!

I feel like the author has a problem with his understanding of love. In the plots he described, two people who love each other torture each other when they are together 😅 The previous book was pursued until all three of Su, Liu and Chen exploded before abandoning it. Dude, what the average reader wants to read is a sweet love story. It doesn't matter if you engage in party fighting and have a private life, but at least it should be sweet when two people are alone. You... Either choose one and write it well, or just say that we are all Xiaolong people and don't need a monogamous and beautiful harem. It really makes my stomach hurt to read it now.

I saw that 80% had no idea what the author was trying to express 😰

Unknown chapter names + (numbers), this is what online writers are most afraid of, and they have no desire to subscribe at all.

I don't know which chapter I started from, but the author's Lu Mingfei gave me a strange feeling, very fragmented. After thinking about it, I finally understood where the strange point lies. That is the contradiction between Lu Mingfei's eagerness to show that he has grown and his failure to grow. With Su's help, Lu Mingfei's body strengthened and he also made some progress mentally. He no longer looked like a weak child and had confidence in himself. But the problem is that Lu Mingfei is too expressive now, his self-confidence is too inflated, but his behavior is very childish. It is a disaster to act with such childish behavioral logic. This is true whether he is trying to make a face of a little goddess or breaking through the disguise of a ninja in a taxi (even if he wants to save someone), his behavior is like a little kid wearing adult clothes trying to pretend to be a mature person. Unfortunately, Lu Mingfei hasn't realized this yet. If Lu Mingfei wants to continue to grow, he needs to realize this and find someone to train him in this aspect, just like Cassel did to Lu Mingfei in Dragon Four. Lu Mingfei of the original Long Si received training from Cassel and acted logically and logically. Unfortunately, he was still a weakling at heart and his efforts were in vain. But now that Lu Mingfei is not declining, this method can be used by the author Lu Mingfei.

Those who come to see love, those who want to see sweets, don't have a stomachache. Take making money as an example. People are very tired nowadays, but there are still many people who like to read cool articles.

I can't understand what's being written in this book. I'm confused. Give it to me.

The world line of the yellow-haired physical education students on the road (confident)

The relationship between Lu and Su described by the author is very deformed and negative. It does not feel like love, nor does it have the flavor of comedy. If the author wants to correct the course, he must restore Lu Su's abnormal relationship to normal. In fact, the author should quickly change Lu Mingfei's character back to the previous one. After all, the author has been paving the way for Lu Mingfei's current abnormality, so it is reasonable to let Lu Mingfei return to normal. Otherwise, if it continues like this, let alone a romantic comedy, I am afraid it will be like the previous book. It is still a sour love in the front, but it will be dark in the back.

After reading the first few chapters, why is Su's writing so strange? The characters have changed

Either don't accept it or accept it all. It doesn't matter if you accept some and leave out some. There are always people who like it or not. It's better to accept them all. There are not so many things.

Hey, why did Lao Da die again? It's okay, he was reborn again

Youth comes from blue and is better than blue. Of course, it is the youth of literary youth🤭🤭🤭

Lu Mingfei—original character: a stray dog ​​on the roadside. Current personality: kind-hearted Green Tea Su Xiaoqiang—original personality: straightforward and proud young lady. Current personality: The dark villain Miss Little Devil—Original personality: The strategist who controls the Riddler. Current personality: dark villain. I haven't read the paid chapters later.

It seems that the comment author is still the same.

Seeing Lu and Su suddenly change their personalities, I felt so separated that I gave up.

It's annoying to see the little devil jumping in the face. . . Has anyone written that Lu Mingfei is hostile to the little devil, instead of making Lu Mingfei look like the little devil's puppet?

The character has been modified and has masochistic tendencies, so it is not recommended to read (the masochistic plot is in Chapter 36)

I loved the author's last book very much, but I couldn't read this one before. I thought this one was very clear. But after we broke up, I thought it was really wonderful when I watched it again. So I dare to ask the author, did they also break up?

Is it in Chinese? I can't understand it at all. My stomach hurts even more than before. Falling in love is about guessing and torturing each other. Literary youth is so heavy that they are enjoying themselves.

You've already written about the harem, but you still write about missing girls, right? There are so few novels that include all Dragon Clan fandoms. They either include Shiran Mitsumi or don't include the nanny group. There are also some harem fanfics that don't remove the cp. How about this one?

The password leaks out of the harem every day, what's wrong with Chen Motong?

Now that I have seen Zero appear, I feel that Zero's behavior is very strange. I would like to ask the author if he has changed Zero's character.