Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei Will Not Die in Shura Field

The little goddess in front is so sweet 😍 When there are more people in the back, she becomes sadistic 😭 This concubine is silly and scumbag 😡 The emotional line is so twisted 🙂 But she is uncomfortable and loves to watch 😁 I am crawling everywhere in the dark 🔪

To be honest, I felt that the writing was not very good, and some of the character settings in the book were a bit broken. After I saw A Song of Bronze and Fire, I didn't want to watch it anymore. What kind of plot development is this? The image creation of Lu Mingfei feels completely broken, and I feel that Lu Mingfei's feelings for other female protagonists are not like love, but more like a sick and twisted attachment. There was a very unnatural feeling, and I felt very uncomfortable looking at it. Of course, it cannot be said that this book is completely bad. Some of the details and psychological descriptions in the book are quite delicate and true. Therefore, I will rate this book. If it is a full score of 5 stars, I can only give it 2 stars.

Lu Xia, Lu Nuo, Lu Shi, Lu Ling, Lu Mayi, I want them all, please deduct 6

Since Chen Wenwen reads Western love novels every day, which are mixed with farewell, admiration, vanity, ⭐, green, giving and receiving nue, her three views are actually becoming less and less normal the more she reads such books. Maybe a good education can hide these things, but we all know that many things cannot be hidden. In short, judging from the background story, I really don't believe that she hasn't read the books written by the Marquis de Sade, such as "The Sin of Love" (The 120 Days of Sodom is a bit extreme and I guess little girls can't stand it), or to be more specific, sadism, which means sadism, is the name of this dear friend. All in all, I plan to write her in a yandere direction. Solicit everyone's opinions. If there are many people who oppose it, I won't write it. If there are many people who agree, I will write it.

Today I confessed to a school girl whose personality is very similar to Su Xiaoqiang. I learned from Teacher Lao Lu's skills and succeeded 🥺🥺🥺

After reading half of the book, I couldn't stand it anymore. The emotional line was a mess, and there was no progress in dozens of chapters. The contradiction between Liu and Su had obviously collapsed. The final explanation was forced to end with no follow-up (if you think the author left a blank to let the readers imagine that I obey you), and then played riddles with Lingda. What's even more outrageous is Xiami. When he first came to the United States, he didn't even cover his buttocks, so he drove people back to the country, calling it "for safety." He waited a few months for school to start before coming back, but he actually went back to the country. I could turn to Chen Wenwen again after writing this. The only reason I can think of is that writing about Chen Wenwen, a person with strong gravity, is in line with the emotional tone of the book within the comfort zone, so I decided to write it back. Therefore, in the whole book, the only one who has made some emotional progress is Chen Wenwen. The emotional tone is also gloomy + painful + depressive + negative energy. Can you really call this "love" if you are reluctant to give out some candy and torture each other in the harem novel? Watching this is really not as good as watching an industrial saccharine love story sprinkled with sugar. Although it is forced and deliberate, at least it will not ruin your mood. Watching the male protagonist and the female protagonist drag each other around for a long time, standing still and talking, torturing each other with great gravity, and still feeling better is a miracle. After watching half of it, I really couldn't stand it anymore and gave up. No matter how big the twist was later, I wouldn't watch it again because the first half can definitely be described as "a complete mess". Recommended by Shennong: Those who like to read sadistic stories can read it. Anyway, I always watch it and I can't help but want to start it again for Lu Mingfei.

I originally wrote a long list about the commonalities between the harem and Dragon Clan fans making up for regrets, about the joint creation between the author and the readers, but it turned out that I didn't save it. Maybe you don't like reading it if it's too long and lengthy, so I'll just analyze it briefly. The first is that this book is an urban romance novel that incorporates fantasy elements. The difference from traditional harem novels is that it is difficult to distinguish the emotional lines of the male protagonist and the female protagonists in terms of time and space. I don't know how many readers are harem party readers, just dragon readers, or both, but we can find that the biggest feature of this book is that the emotional entanglements are complicated and the conflicts are difficult to deal with. Among them, the growth of the prison road and the more or less morbid feelings between the heroines and him (especially Chen and Su) are reflected in the Shura Field, which is essentially impossible to separate. This is determined by the convenient communication and transportation in the modern background. Most of the traditional harem novels have the ideological color of machismo, that is, everything in the world can be taken and carried with them, and it has become an established fact that they can be possessed by strength or cooked rice. But the way of thinking of modern women like Su Xiaoqiang is fundamentally contrary to the development direction of harem literature. Therefore, the prison road must either ask the heroine to compromise, or require the heroine to indulge him. They had all reached out to him, so he didn't want to let go of any of them. Who says he's not a scumbag? He indeed is. Second, regarding the growth of Lao Lu, he was nothing at the beginning. Su Xiaoqiang was once his sun, but later he would also become Liu Miaomiao's man, Chen Wenwen's sea, Xia Mi's guide, Ling's green plum falling from the sky, and Hui Liyi's inspirer (guess). He has a different look in the hearts of every character and every reader. It must be said that the author forced him to feel guilty and weak most of the time. He has never learned to let go, so he refuses to let go of those good intentions. But in fact, this is just one of countless possibilities. We must distinguish what is the original design of the character and what is the creative need. Perhaps with normal thinking, I would have given up on it when I met Su Xiaoqiang, but after all, this is a story written by the author, and I personally am quite tolerant. Third, I have to go to bed early today and update tomorrow. I mainly promised the author today, and I feel like my brain is being drained of all my strength.

It is very embarrassing for the Dragon Clan to open a harem and leave out Nono and take Xia Mi. I'm not saying that Xia Mi cannot be accepted, I am a fellow Lu Xia Party member myself. But since you even snatched your senior brother's woman, and ended up leaving Nono to Caesar, then you are like this, a half-gift girl, and the original official heroine will not accept it (the original Jiangnan is slowly writing Lu Nuo, but you don't write it) In addition, the first 40 chapters of the free chapters are disgusting, but as soon as the paid chapters come, the writing gets better and better, and he is also a godly author after knowing that he is addicted. The front part won't attract people, and no matter how good or sweet the writing is, fewer people will read it. Those who said they were abusing the owner probably didn't see the payment. After paying, they started giving out candy.

The author's understanding of the Shura field and the knife went astray, which caused the novel to go from an excellent beginning to the current direction. The Shura field we are talking about now generally comes from the second dimension, and most of it has a light comedy flavor. If you write in a realistic and heavy direction, it would be cheating, the cheating man would admit his mistake in embarrassment, and the mistress of the first wife would fight. This is neither touching nor sadistic, only sad. The author chose the latter, so what we see in the Shura Field plot that takes up a lot of space is Lu Mingfei talking back and forth, and after that, he continues to recruit new people into the harem, and keeps repeating it. The viewers are not moved or sad, only irritated. As for the knife, taking My Girlfriend from the Future, which the author has read, as an example, do you think the most touching plot in this novel is the Shura Field where Ai Qing and Wenliang Hospital confront each other? Isn't it a one-line plot where He Tianran promised to forgive you, and there is nothing wrong with it, and I look like an adult now? This kind of foreshadowing, the gaze of memories brought about by echoing back and forth, and the regretful relief are probably the most impressive parts. So there is a big conflict between Lu Mingfei's character and the plot framework at the beginning of this novel. The author chose to write this way purely to intensify himself. The more he went off track, the more he wrote, the more unclear he became.

The first time I read a harem story, I felt guilty. I can only say that the author wrote that Su Xiaoqiang and the others were not on the same level. What was supposed to be an evenly matched Shura field turned into a kind of betrayal of Su Xiaoqiang by Lu Mingfei. This is sad. I am not very picky. This is the first time I think a single female protagonist would be better.

Why do they both like Chen Wenwen and Liu Miaomiao 🥵 It can be said that Su is a Muqiang who likes excellent people but not Zhao Menghua. I can accept it. Chen Wenwen's tea tastes like tea. Liu Miaomiao and Zhao Menghua broke Chen Wenwen's shoes behind their backs. It's hard to say what their character is.

The overall tone is too depressing and heavy with negative energy. The positioning of this book should be biased towards light novels. It is so painful and the hatred is deep. A harem novel is not sweet. In the early stage, Liu Miaomiao used Lu Mingfei as Chu Zihang's meal replacement. It was even more abstract and boundless. The portrayal of Chu Zihang It makes people not like it at all, and it even makes people feel that adding this character has no purpose. I have said a lot but can't get to the point. The plot advancement seems to be non-existent. I suggest you learn more about how other fan fiction is handled. The writing is too raw.

This book is just like the title of his book. He is not talking about how to make up for the regrets of the Dragon Clan, but telling the story of Lu Mingfei and his woman in the way of a youth idol drama. And this part of the emotional scene is exactly how it was written 10 years ago. It is a painful literature that kills people, and an emotional dispute that makes people feel stomachache. There are also a lot of verbal modifications and psychological descriptions that are really unbearable. After reading almost one chapter, I only analyze the psychology of the characters, and the actual plot advancement is not very big. If these are foreshadowing, then I can only suggest that the author streamline the text. There is no need to give so much content just for a foreshadowing.

After reading 100 chapters, I still feel like I am holding my breath. Now I understand that there is a very important characteristic of male protagonists in harem novels that is not reflected in this book, that is, the male protagonist should be like a treasure given by God to every female protagonist, but in this book it is the other way around. Instead, Su Xiaoqiang is a treasure given to Lu Mingfei, a loser. At least in the first hundred chapters, Lu Mingfei really did not feel sorry for Su Xiaoqiang at all. The first step of confirming the relationship, the second step of announcing cheating and starting a harem is really explosive. And the lack of the main line of the original work further aggravates this feeling. It stands to reason that when writing about the part where Lu Mingfei and Su Xiaoqiang accidentally enter the Nibelungen, we should focus on the description of Lu Mingfei's unusualness, and the description of Su Xiaoqiang's unusual psychological changes and her subtle acceptance of the harem. However, the author took it over in a very abstract way. He was about to watch a wonderful highlight but ended up inexplicably finishing it, and then rushed out. At that time, his face was really full of question marks. Coupled with the performance of Lu Mingfei's character in the author's writing, it looks even more depressing than the original work, making people feel that Lu Mingfei is not worthy of Su Xiaoqiang's love.

Third, this book is actually suitable for reading after reading, rather than fattening it up and then killing it. I followed it all the way through the long summer, taking far more time than I would have needed to read it at my normal pace. The reason is that the author's strength lies in reflecting the character's psychology through actions, demeanor, environment and other aspects, and in arousing the readers' emotions in the conflicts between the characters and the plot. These two points determine that during the entire reading process, the reader will be overwhelmed by the distortion or depression, and have a long aftertaste in the daily life of peace and joy. Naturally, the reading speed cannot be increased. This is of course not a shortcoming, but the reason why the author can stand out from the crowd of dragon fans. Fourthly, as a senior harem party and dragon reader, I would like to say that the slow development and warming of feelings in this book, especially the process accompanied by ups and downs and labor pains, are very rare in similar works, but are more common in urban or campus romance novels. Either fight and kill and sweep across the world; or take and carry beautiful women with you. Now that Lu Mingfei's "Returning from So-and-so" is so popular, I will cherish more realistic and gentle books. Just like Lu Mingfei in this book is gentle to the world, I think the author has the same feelings for him.

Looking at this plot compared with the character plot of the original work, the heroines changed their minds and fell in love with Lu Mingfei through sheer intelligence. Before, the girls in the original work didn't pay much attention to him, but suddenly they changed their minds and wanted to understand and care about him. It was purely through sheer intelligence that they changed their minds.

Inexplicably, I was tricked by your title into trying Jiangnan's routine of torturing the male protagonist again. This dog-licking male protagonist really has that kind of sword flavor. Guess why I read the fanfic?

I thought Chen Wenwen was crazy enough as she was written, but the other heroines turned out to be more crazy than the other, often mutilating themselves😥, The Shura Field was also poorly written. It was originally a relatively light concept, but when the whole story involved the competition between several female protagonists, it became particularly heavy and depressing, and there was a tendency to abuse the protagonist. Then the author made the role of Su Xiaoqiang too important, much better than Nono did in the original work. Almost everything that can redeem Lu Mingfei was done by her alone. Generally, a harem has several female protagonists with different importance, which makes this harem seem like no one can let go. There is a feeling that I got high in the middle of the writing and never came back. Now that we have officially entered Kassel, let's take a look first. I don't know if we can go back later.

Lu Nuo, Lu Xia, Lu Shan, Lu Qian, Lu Yaji, Lu Isabel, Lu Victoria, Lu Mai, Lu Ling, Lu Potato Chips, Lu Liu, Lu Wen, Lu Xiaotiannu, if you want to build a Shura field, then build a large Shura field. That will be exciting! ! !

Isn't Lu Mingfei still Lu Mingfei who doesn't want Nono? Anyone who has watched Dragon Clan knows how important Nono is to Lu Mingfei. He gave up half of his life. Nowadays, all kinds of fan fiction abandon Nono. This is the biggest destructive design. Many people will have opinions on Nono because they are unhappy, but Lu Mingfei will never forget his senior sister no matter how long it takes. , He may watch Nuonuo getting married, send blessings and guard him secretly, but he will never let it go in his heart. Nowadays, various fandoms like Lu Mingfei are so mature and awesome, so why is it not as good as the original work where he was a weak child? When it comes to fan fiction, we still have to fulfill Caesar Nono's destiny. Why, do we have to carry out love without permission even more thoroughly?

What the hell plot are you writing behind this? There is no saying that you should treat other people's love for you as capital for indulgence and get involved in women's affairs. Every time Shura Field said it was solved, it was solved. As for Su Xiaoqiang, just hurt her. She is already engaged, so why do you think the male protagonist is a loser? What have you solved? A few promises that nothing can be fulfilled? I see that you were looking forward to it when you gave me sweets, but later on you wrote the protagonist as a scumbag, the kind of mentally retarded and good-for-nothing scumbag. What kind of god is this? Isn't your writing power unable to withstand the harem? Moreover, the transitions between chapters are abrupt and the plot is inexplicable. I have a cerebral thrombosis and am almost pissed off by you. I will see how your new book goes later. If you write such an inexplicable story about a mentally retarded scumbag, you and Jiang Nan go and sit at the same table.

This book, as a whole, is based on the sadomasochistic writing techniques that were used in the online writing era of a few years ago or even a few years ago, and I didn't see the back part. The emotional lines are all too twisted, and it feels like torture for the sake of torture. The overly complicated and detailed psychological descriptions are all for the theme of torture. Everyone must be tortured from body to spirit. With such a tangled plot, it is difficult for me to imagine how it can have a happy ending.

The character of Lu Mingfei in the original work is disgusting enough. When you write a fanfic, you have to describe his character carefully so that he doesn't get criticized. I don't know which chapter Lu Mingfei can change. Anyway, I couldn't stand it after reading more than a dozen chapters.

I saw that there is no nanny group and Nono in the introduction. Shouldn't they all be included?

I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters, so forget about the green tea. I accepted all the cheating women. When I saw the comment section, Shen Nong decisively gave up.

The modifications in the original work are all meaningful modifications, but the modifications in most of the Dragon Clan fandom on the market are meaningless modifications, so the information density is very low, and it looks ridiculous.

The author's writing style is really not bad, but even if you put aside the self-interest element, the author's arrangement and control of the plot are at a relatively low level, even inferior to some fast food articles, because most fast food articles have a framework. I suggest the author write short articles. Really, just speaking from your perspective, of course I personally will read what I like to read.

Why are no fans willing to write the main story of Lu Nuo well? Breaking the family conspiracy, changing the fate of the Black King's container, breeding literary exes as stand-ins, stealing Ming Fei's honor and substituting Ming Fei's love. If you don't accept the heroine of the harem fan, it is tantamount to being a cuckold and sending No Nuo to the fire pit. I really don't understand what is going on in this environment. He is so malicious towards his senior sister.

Ah? There is also the Lu Chen line. You wrote Chen so disgustingly in the first two chapters. What did you think, author? I don't want to read this.

Abuse, you just read novels for pleasure, why the hell do you read this?