Entertainment: Stop Planning! Brother Is Going to Die Laughing

It's a fun story that mainly focuses on comedy, the plot is not procrastinating so far, and there are no obvious poisonous points.

How many years have you been on horseback and are you still writing about the underworld? Or a gang of thirty people? Are you afraid that the police's first-class merit is not high enough?

I'm not Shennong, but I want to talk about the plot The protagonist was singing in a bar and was surrounded by fifteen people. The protagonist fought back and was beaten down by all of them (the protagonist's previous life as a dragon and tiger martial artist and the bar's terrain was narrow). As a result, he was sentenced to fifteen days of squatting and was deliberately put in a dangerous cell (detention center). The second time he was beaten by thirty people, the protagonist and his boss's female bodyguard fought back (the female bodyguard beat half of them). In the end, guess what, the protagonist was warned by the police to be honest, saying that he was doing this to the protagonist outside the law... Note that in the eyes of others, the protagonist fucked thirty people with his bare hands, and those thirty people had weapons such as sticks in their hands.

It was quite interesting originally. Once the background of the male protagonist was revealed, there were three escape routes and so on, and the misanthropy of stupidity came out. You are so busy, why do you add so many unnecessary and annoying settings? The author wrote about a very awesome parent and a very awesome sister, who are very strong in everything. Do you think it will make people think that this family is very awesome? No, it will only make the male protagonist look stupid.

Think of the heroine as Zhang Jingyu 🙂

It's okay, some parts of the logic, plot twists, male protagonist settings, etc. Are a bit stiff. Mainly because of the planning, I had fun for a while, and I followed it all the way to the latest. At least it gave me the emotion. It's a bit interesting. I hope I can finish it, and it won't be unfinished. Although the results are not good.

I saw more than 30 photos. This man is a talent show singer. Because of the 20-year liquidated damages of 30 million, he chose not to sign the capital contract. The protagonist is somewhat famous because he copied Anhe Bridge after time traveling. After he was asked to sign a contract but failed to sign, he sang An Heqiao and was eliminated. After being eliminated, he went to a bar to sing and was targeted by someone. He entered the game in 1v13. After he came out, he went to be the female lead (not sure but I think it should be the female lead because the salary was 3q2. I gave him a 3q suit the next day because she was a fan of the male lead and liked Yan and Anheqiao). In the middle, he planned two live events, one was a funeral car and the other was Liuliumei, and he met the ym stand-in version and the female lead sister. The male protagonist has a strong b-feel, which is difficult to describe because (he was in a bureau and earned 3w2), I can't put it into words. It feels like a rich man pretending to be poor, and a sense of separation. Anyway, I don't feel comfortable. The heroine, the author of this heroine tmd did not say it clearly but hinted a lot. She is the kind of person who is rich, beautiful, and well-connected, and is an official and businesswoman in the family. The author writes that a person from this kind of background is a little white flower who is ignorant of worldly affairs and has no brains when he meets the male protagonist. The heroine gives the male protagonist a copy of the book to do, and then because she is a copywriter, the male protagonist feels that she is very powerful, and then starts some sermons, inexplicable sermons, full of erotic feelings in the mist. After thinking about the title, I remembered again (for the job of Liuliu Mei, the hero and heroine did not agree at first to be scolded by someone (a director or something, who came in person. I don't know why he came here)). Later, Liuliu Plum Factory called and informed him that he wanted to cooperate. The director came back to find the hero and heroine, and then after the male protagonist analyzed the formula and asked for 38, it seemed that he accepted 32 and then got the points back. To this director. And this rich and well-connected heroine is so awesome that he talked about 38. It's my personal opinion. Maybe my understanding is not good enough to misinterpret the author's meaning. (The man who pretends to be a B is a fool and spends a lot of money.) It's not good to have too few adjectives. Anyway, this male protagonist is a bit pretentious, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger.

Good looking 😃, but not many readers

Like the title, it seems that the male protagonist may still want to go into the entertainment industry, which is a bit boring. I feel like it's just food so far, so I'll collect it first and take a look.

To say something slightly unpleasant, the writing style is slightly worse. The plot is good. There are also many memes. It can be seen that the author is very careful in portraying the characters and content, but the connection and details are a bit stiff. Come on, author💪!

The writing is very good, the writing is novel, easy and fluent. Why do you only have 5,000 collections? There are tens of thousands of collections of those that are like chewing wax.