Provoking Troubled Times: Starting from the Refugees, They Started to Kill Officials and Rebel

It's quite good. I took Li Zicheng's script, recruited Li Yan and Niu Jinxing, and used the refugees as cannon fodder. . .

The background is the ancient times when the demons changed the Ming Dynasty. At least the name was changed by the demons. The protagonist's golden finger has the power of an overlord, and his brain is the same as that of ordinary people. Anyway, he doesn't have the clairvoyance. The rebel army is used to promote the plot. It is still very weak at present, so it is not taken seriously by the court, so there are no responders in various places. The protagonist is the first person to rise up in this dynasty. The uprising started when a certain place suffered from a severe drought for ten years. Perhaps to round up the numbers, they explained that rain still fell occasionally, but not heavily, and stopped after a while. There was still water in the river to irrigate the ground. . I personally think it was a bit exaggerated at the beginning. The background was changed to 5 years of severe drought, and 5 years of minor drought would be better. There is still water in the river after ten years. How big is the river? If it comes all the way from the source, won't the water source be intercepted?

A truly enjoyable novel should be one in which the protagonist is invincible and in control of everything, knows everything, and is not aggrieved at all. In other exciting novels, in the early stage, the protagonist is short of money and lacks everything. Then, he makes money in various ways, equips the army to the teeth, and has a strong will to fight. In the middle and later stages, no one can beat him, and all kinds of grievances violently torture the protagonist. Fighting depends on all kinds of grievances and the aura of the protagonist.

No matter what book there is, people who don't have 500,000 yuan won't read it very much! Unless you are a great person, if a newcomer wants to write a book that is interesting, it is best to write more before publishing it.

Nowadays, in historical writing, I hate the kind of people who study science and technology and farm. This one is biased towards organizations and is different from others.

Many landowners and gentlemen were robbed. As a result, I still couldn't get enough to eat.

It's well written, and persistence is victory. I followed a similar movie that was very well written, and it turned into a eunuch after 250,000 words 🙂

The story is very well written, I have collected it and look forward to it.

Even if the refugees have no weapons and can chop down thousands of bamboos to form a spear formation, will a few hundred cavalry dare to attack you? Do you still have city cavalry and dare to attack the city? Have you seen any cavalry used to attack the city?

It looked good at first, but it turned out that Song Jiang, the founding emperor of the country, was really worthy of him? Does he have the qualifications to rely on selling his brother's things to become an official?

🙂🙂🙂How could this author think of an alternate history in which Song Jiang was the founding emperor? ? ?

The male protagonist will really die if he keeps doing this, causing hatred everywhere

Don't you think of your own name? It's a mess, a hodgepodge of names from various dynasties. It feels so dramatic. If you want to be parallel, then do it completely. Such a mess.

It is said that the force is unparalleled, but it turns out that I have never seen how unparalleled it is. Anyway, every time I encounter a setback, I run away, and I never see the commander-in-chief and the force of force make a comeback.

How far can you run with more than 10,000 refugees? If you have to run, wouldn't it be faster to abandon the refugees and lead a few dozen people? No matter how many people are given to you without a base, you will not be able to develop. If you still want to fight guerrilla warfare, you have a base to fight guerrillas, right?

I don't think this article is exciting enough. He is born with supernatural powers, but the protagonist basically doesn't go up to kill him. This is an unpleasant point. The team is not that big yet, but the core members already have some ideas. It's too fast. If you want to write a good online article, it is very important to be happy

It seems that I have seen it before. Maybe the eunuch is resurrected, and the advantage is that he has a reckless attitude. . The shortcomings are that the setting and outline are confusing, the character creation is a little green and innocuous, and the plot is too tight and relying on war to promote it is not a long-term solution. The characters are adapted from history, and the world background is unclear, which creates some hidden dangers. . Overall, I give it a 6 out of 10. I suggest that the author completes the book and accumulates writing skills and readers. The next book will be even better. . .

The county seat at the beginning was the base area, but because there were only 500 people, they had to go to the wilds to fight on the plains with other people's cavalry. They were speechless. Directly recruit a few big families, collect the land, and then mobilize their people to farm the fields, invent waterwheels, open canals, irrigate the fields, and then send out news to attract refugees to open fields for you. Isn't it better? This is a proper base camp. You have to take tens of thousands of people around and rob everywhere. Is this a long-term solution? ? Besides, if you rob the common people, don't the common people resent you?

Persistence is victory, and there are a lot of foreshadowings so far.

Quoting historical names is really easy. You can use the framework, but change the name. This is so inconsistent. It is not like fiction, and history is not like history. .

If you want to rebel, first, the people will not be able to survive. Second, you have food in your hands. Third, you have prestige. If there are no others, why should you rebel?

This Song Jiang really persuaded me to quit.

This book is definitely good at the beginning, but the author makes it worse later on.

Can't you write it well? Give Song Jiang the title of emperor and all 108 generals become officials and knights. I get annoyed just by looking at Song Jiang