Simultaneous Travel: the Result Is Only Swallowing the Starry Sky

I'm not the author, but I think one of your biggest shortcomings is that you can't control plug-ins. Too many plug-ins are too awesome and the role of the author will be ignored. It will weaken the influence of the protagonist in this book. How to put it this way, it's good if the protagonist basically has memories of two or three worlds. If there are too many memories, it will cause plot confusion. . Actually, according to my theory, it is almost enough for the protagonist to inherit the memory of a world that covers the sky. How should I put it? It is wrong to blindly suppress the protagonist. It's not good if the protagonist's plug-in is too awesome. The most important thing in writing a novel is to control the rhythm

In the original work, most of Luo Feng's resources were used to raise mother worms. Later, when his realm advanced, most of them would not be used.

The protagonist was obsessed with creating his own secret method during the Genius War? Have you learned a few secret techniques and then created your own? Slipping away

The most powerful thing to swallow is understanding. If you understand a lower law, you will become immortal. If you understand a higher law, you will become a venerable. If you understand the two higher laws of time and space, you will become the master of the universe. The original universe package will be improved before the strongest.

The background setting of Swallowing This World is too strict. Changing the setting of the original work will easily filter out readers. So I prefer to read fanfics of other themes. Most Devouring fanfics find it difficult to finish. In the new Devouring book at the same time, there is a work about the earth chapter where the apprentice level uses 40 times the power. Others saw this and thought it was normal. I was directly screened out by this setting. Although the natural gene multiplier is not so exaggerated, it is still a very prominent change. You can tell at a glance that it is a second design. Readers who can read the introduction before reading are readers who can accept the protagonist's tricks. However, cheating by the protagonist and changing the basic settings of the original work are two different things. Even if the reader is not screened out immediately, reluctantly reading it will lower the reader's inner evaluation. Readers are either being screened out now or will be screened out in the future by more accumulated problems, which will also affect their voting choices. This approach, which has only disadvantages but no benefits, is also an approach that outweighs the gains and losses.

Selling dog meat with a sheep's head, you can write a world with the same article

The writing is good so far, and as long as I don't add poison, I should be able to continue writing. There are many Devouring fans who wrote well in the early stage, but then they fell into the street, all because of poisoning

Collect it first, try to abide by the original settings, and don't make too many messy second settings, otherwise you won't be able to watch it.

Don't end your subscription. Book lovers should leave immediately after reading the free chapters, and don't spend a dime.

99 The hang-up is huge. In the early stage, the earth was too detailed and it was not good. I suggest you blur the strength growth, or go to the universe quickly. If you must write about the earth, you can have some original events. Luo Feng should not always appear around the protagonist.

You're not wearing the same clothes, it's reincarnation

If you look at the catalog and know that you will get a chance in front of the protagonist, it is better to read the original work.

What's the use of participating in the genius war? From the beginning, you're afraid that the higher-ups will covet the earth and look for trouble. You don't lack skills.

If you don't do anything else first, just give a good review, that is selling it like a sheep's head. Unless Zhu Tianliu, otherwise, swallowing the stars and writing about the cultivation methods of other worlds, then I don't see the point of swallowing.

Swallowing Starry Sky - Storm Realm What is this? ? ?

Foundation - subtlety, specialization - perfection, perfection - artistic conception - domain - lower law - upper law - the fusion law of the beast god's way - the source of the law - the law of chaos - a branch of the Tao - the fusion of the two branches of the Tao - the ultimate realm - the Semi-Hunyuan Dao - the Hunyuan Dao

So Babata cannot know the genes, and he can even say several times that the non-core force members of the original work are known by King Feng, and those who can even integrate the blood crystal to strengthen the genes are all old King Feng (such as King Feng Extreme, King Feng Peak and King Feng Invincible). The owner of Mo Yue Xing was a high-ranking monarch who was hunted down by immortals and eventually fell. He was unable to compete with the title of a reluctant prince. To sum up, even if Babata talked about genes, he could not talk about the topic of doubling the genes to become a king.

He is another person who feels nauseated when he kills a monster. To be honest, let alone other things, this kind of mentality is endless. Wouldn't he go to the slaughterhouse to adapt before killing the monster? In the wilderness area, if you are stunned and lose your life if you change your movements, make me feel sick, haha.

Another awesome golden finger wants to steal the protagonist's "opportunity" and "fate"

To summarize this book, I saw it in April and added it to my bookshelf, but I didn't read it because I didn't want to save it. Every time I opened it, I looked at how to update it, but the word count didn't change. The books I saved in May included more than 200,000 words and 300,000 words. It's been almost 2 months since you updated it. 100,000 Words and 3,000 words a day can't guarantee that my desire to read it is getting lower and lower.

Simultaneous Travel: Inherit the Copy of Ten Thousand Realms

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