Period: The Time Train Conductor

The protagonist is too arrogant. It will be difficult to hide it from the people in the future time and space in the long run. After all, there are differences in clothing, cultural differences, and there is a strange conductor suddenly added. How is it possible to hide it? Then we will contact the officials there, and then...

For those who have followed the previous book, let me first talk about the previous book. The previous book was pretty good. Although there is nothing exciting about it, it is still relatively realistic as a historical novel, and there are no major poisonous points. As for the last dozen or so chapters, I couldn't stand it, so I stopped subscribing. Let's talk about this book again. As a period novel, people who read this kind of novel are generally older and pay more attention to family relationships, so the family relationship aspect still needs to be written well. As for the issue of plug-ins, this time the plug-ins are relatively large, much larger than the previous book. As a plug-in involving time and space, it can affect people around you at a small scale, and it can affect the entire country and the entire planet at a larger scale. If the protagonist's cheat comes into contact with too many people, sooner or later it will be impossible to keep it a secret. If he can keep it secret, what about other time and space? The author of this plug-in needs to think carefully about making an outline and how far he is going to write it. The above is just a personal suggestion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

What I'm talking about is daily life, but it turns out to be a mistake. Is it interesting? Do you think everyone around you is stupid?

Is this going to make the protagonist schizophrenic? Is it possible for a person in the 1960s not to tell others what he saw? The protagonist doesn't understand cheats in his consciousness. Who would use cheats nowadays when the period novel is really popular?

Just one question: Will those who get off the bus erase their memories? The protagonist only travels through time and not through space. If you don't want to be a guinea pig, you'd better pay attention to this.

Don't repeat the poisonous points in the late stage of the previous book, support it first

I hope the author will write well and the monthly ticket will not be less. Please keep it first

I feel like the setting is quite new, but I can't see it anymore. I asked myself why I haven't seen the update. Should I publish the next book under this account?

The hook is too big, and it's hard to explain. The author himself doesn't understand how to set it up, and the logic doesn't make sense. I suggest you consider what the hook function is and how to use it.

The first two chapters were average, and the third chapter was a bit interesting. However, after the third chapter, the author was a bit hasty in writing, and many things were not written clearly, so he hurriedly ended the plot of the first space-time train. The subsequent connecting plots were also average. Maybe the author could refine it while the word count was still small.