Period: Starting with a Spatial Ring

Chapter One is enough to make you want to quit. At 16, in the third year of junior high, your mom pushes a wheelbarrow while you and your sister ride on it. Your sister is 6, so it's fine for her to ride, but you're 16. The wheelbarrow tipped over once, and you still managed to climb back on with your sister? You're something else! Has this city author never seen rural life?

There's a reason the grades weren't good. The first chapter: rural area, male, 16 years old, 1 AM, a wheelbarrow loaded with crops like lotus roots and beans. The protagonist is comfortably lying on the wheelbarrow with his sister, being pushed around by his mother. Even walking alongside them would have been better than helping push. I only read the first chapter; I don't know if there's a plot twist later. Anyway, I stopped reading after the first chapter.

Write more about starting a business and less about your relative's messy affairs. Too much length will make readers lose patience. There's no reason to guard against a petty person. It's best to kill them outright.

How could a 16-year-old protagonist have the nerve to sleep on a wheelbarrow (with goods on it) while his mother pushes it? Is the protagonist intellectually disabled or paraplegic?

The author may have thought of it, but didn't write it down, so I think the author's skill level is lacking. First, there's the issue of building relationships. The connections he made in the city weren't reciprocated. People helped him, and aside from selling his goods, he didn't give them anything in return.

Under normal circumstances, one should take their first pot of gold from their enemy's house. There's room for revenge, a chance to get rich quick, and readers will be happy to read it.

The first chapter alone made me feel physically uncomfortable; the protagonist seemed extremely selfish.

He has a special ability and a cheat code, yet he doesn't seek revenge. They beat up his mother and used all sorts of underhanded tactics, even going so far as to use firecrackers to blow up the bad guys at the protagonist's house. He just stands by and does nothing—what a coward!

Many people think that the mountains and countryside have everything they need, and that they can make money selling it in the city! But people aren't stupid. Back then, people were poor, and they had already eaten almost everything edible in the mountains! I'm from the countryside myself.

Don't make things difficult for yourself, find a factory job.