Period: Starting with a Spatial Ring

The first chapter directly persuades you to quit. You are 16 years old and in the third grade of junior high school. You let your mother push a unicycle. You and your sister ride in the car. Your sister is 6 years old and there is nothing wrong with riding. You are 16 years old and the car overturns once. You can still climb up with your sister. You are really talented. The author in the city has never seen rural life? When rural children enter junior high school and start working at home, they are at least half as old as adults. Even if they can't do it, they won't do things like your mother pushing a cart while you sit on it. That's 16 years old, not 6 years old or 96 years old.

There is a reason for poor grades, Chapter 1, rural area, male, 16 years old, one o'clock in the morning, a wheelbarrow, and crops such as lotus roots and beans on the wheel. The protagonist actually felt at ease and was lying in the car with his sister and being pushed away by his mother. Not to mention helping push, just walking beside. I just read the first chapter, and I don't know if there will be any twists later on. Anyway, I ran away after reading the first chapter.

Write more about starting a business and less about the shit about your relative. Readers will lose patience if it is too long. There is no reason for villains to defend themselves. It's best to kill him with a stick

The 16-year-old protagonist has the nerve to sleep in a wheelbarrow (with cargo) and let his mother push it? Is the protagonist mentally retarded or paraplegic?

Maybe the author has thought of it but didn't write it out, so I think the author is not good enough. The first point is the issue of relationship building. The connections I made in the city were not rewarded to the relevant people. People took care of him, except for the normal sales, and I didn't see him return the gift. The child gave me a few bunches of gourds and some wild fruits, but showed no intention and did not establish a community of interests Second point, I paid the supply and marketing cooperative, but no receipt was even written. My feelings after seeing the latest chapter

Under normal circumstances, the first pot of gold should be taken from the enemy's house. If there is space and hatred, you can get revenge and get rich. The readers will be happy after reading it.

Reading the first chapter makes people feel physically uncomfortable. The protagonist feels extremely selfish.

There is room and there is trouble. He actually didn't take revenge on the person who killed him and beat his mother. He used all kinds of dirty tricks at the protagonist's house. The protagonist's sister and niece all know how to use firecrackers to blow up bad guys. He was indifferent. He is too bastard.

Many people think that there is everything in the countryside and mountains, and they can make money by selling it in the city! In fact, people are not stupid. We were poor at that time and the common people had already eaten almost everything they could eat in the mountains! I am also from a rural area. I was in the 5th grade of elementary school in 1985. Not to mention the lotus roots in the bamboo shoot ponds in the mountains, you can't even dig up many wild vegetables when they are edible. There are a lot of people in the mountains! When my mother and I were digging wild vegetables, there were seven or eight people on the top of an acre of land! Also, city people were not fools at that time. Most of them had relatives in the countryside. Although many of them looked down on rural people at that time, they were still willing to associate with poor relatives. Therefore, mountain products could be sold, but they could not be sold at high prices, unless they were rare products! So I guess you may not have experienced that time. Although people who have experienced that time miss their childhood very much, if you ask them to go back, almost no one is willing, because it was really not as good as now!

Don't embarrass yourself and find a factory to work.