Disciple, Don't Break Through

The novel uses the selling point of recruiting mediocre people to gain a lot of experience, and recruiting talented people to gain less experience. The setting is similar to Mr. Pei, the pace is appropriate, and the refreshing points are continuous, which shows the author's business writing skills. However, the transformation of a mediocre person into a talented person is the core sublimation point of the novel. There is no mediocrity or genius in the world. There are only suitable and unsuitable ones. Finding the right thing to do well and making achievements are the marks that all living beings should have in their short life. If you think about it at a deeper level, this means that everyone is equal. I advise all suffering beings not to give up hope. We are all like dragons!

I finally found a different fantasy novel. Every time the protagonist thought he received a mediocre apprentice, but the apprentice turned into a high apprentice, it made people laugh. Especially the scene where the apprentice found himself despised by the protagonist after breaking through, it made me laugh to death. Hahahahahaha! So pretty!

My review is that there are some minor flaws. However, the rhythm is well written, and it seems to be getting more and more complicated as you watch it. As long as there is nothing unacceptable, it is still worth watching.

What are the latest two chapters about? If the apprentice is not allowed to follow the apprentice and still has to follow, then you might as well be a nanny instead of being a master.

Logically speaking, the system does not limit the number of apprentices. It is safest to accept one by one.

Haha, the first few chapters were so funny, I laughed out loud. It's really good to watch. I hope you'll have fun in the following chapters. It's so good to read.

The routine I read recently is too serious. Can the author change it to a new routine? Also, your martial arts gym is like a sect, and you don't teach any skills, which makes the apprentices so useless that the protagonist has to wipe their butts no matter what.

Is this Lingfeng's bad luck? Why are there new enemies every time he breaks through? Every time he fights the small ones, the old ones come.

An amazing book, so good to read😻! Update soon, I want to see the scene where the protagonist receives a peerless disciple! Hahahahaha!

I don't know if this way of writing is a problem with the original writing. It's just that you want to show off your coolness, but it doesn't come through at all. The levels you set just expand step by step. It's like you're in the first grade and you don't know that there's the second grade in front of you. You don't know that you're in elementary school until you're in the third grade. You don't know that you're in junior high school until you're in the sixth grade. Don't you know that there is a juvenile class in college? The occlusion of information is completely aimed at the readers. The resulting information, whether it is enemies or new forces, is completely confusing and the settings are conflict for the sake of conflict, and they feel comfortable with it. This is a flaw in the upgrade system. Failure to build the system well from the beginning resulted in nonsense throughout the entire process. Are you some kind of Burmese primary school teacher who teaches junior high school students and high school students step by step and sends them to Yunnan to study in college and study in the United States to get ahead? You have to give readers a relatively distant level from the beginning. You are not Oda, so you don't have the ability to retain unwilling readers. Besides, the other aspects of recruiting disciples are obviously repetitive, a bit dependent on the constant occurrence of small conflicts, and are not compatible with the excitement of farming development. You want to write about what level of talent you have reached at what point, just like what your mother always told you about other people's children, as they are spread in the world or on the fame list, who knows what kind of legs and feet you have practiced and what level you are in the world. All I know is that you are not good at leading.