Disciple, Don't Break Through

The novel uses the selling point of recruiting mediocre people to gain a lot of experience, and recruiting talented people to gain less experience. The setting is similar to Mr. Pei, the pace is appropriate, and the refreshing points are continuous, which shows the author's business writing skills. However, the transformation of a mediocre person into a talented person is the core sublimation point of the novel. There is no mediocrity or genius in the world. There are only suitable and unsuitable ones. Finding the right thing to do well and making achievements are the marks that all living beings should have in their short life. If you think about it at a deeper level, this means that everyone is equal. I advise all suffering beings not to give up hope. We are all like dragons!

I finally found a different fantasy novel. Every time the protagonist thought he received a mediocre apprentice, but the apprentice turned into a high apprentice, it made people laugh. Especially the scene where the apprentice found himself despised by the protagonist after breaking through, it made me laugh to death. Hahahahahaha! So pretty!

My review is that there are some minor flaws. However, the rhythm is well written, and it seems to be getting more and more complicated as you watch it. As long as there is nothing unacceptable, it is still worth watching.

What are the latest two chapters about? If the apprentice is not allowed to follow the apprentice and still has to follow, then you might as well be a nanny instead of being a master.

Haha, the first few chapters were so funny, I laughed out loud. It's really good to watch. I hope you'll have fun in the following chapters. It's so good to read.

Logically speaking, the system does not limit the number of apprentices. It is safest to accept one by one.

The routine I read recently is too serious. Can the author change it to a new routine? Also, your martial arts gym is like a sect, and you don't teach any skills, which makes the apprentices so useless that the protagonist has to wipe their butts no matter what.

Is this Lingfeng's bad luck? Why are there new enemies every time he breaks through? Every time he fights the small ones, the old ones come.

An amazing book, so good to read😻! Update soon, I want to see the scene where the protagonist receives a peerless disciple! Hahahahaha!

Hahaha, it's this kind of contrast that's beautiful

I don't know if this way of writing is a problem with the original writing. It's just that you want to show off your coolness, but it doesn't come through at all. The levels you set just expand step by step. It's like you're in the first grade and you don't know that there's the second grade in front of you. You don't know that you're in elementary school until you're in the third grade. You don't know that you're in junior high school until you're in the sixth grade. Don't you know that there is a juvenile class in college? The occlusion of information is completely aimed at the readers. The resulting information, whether it is enemies or new forces, is completely confusing and the settings are conflict for the sake of conflict, and they feel comfortable with it. This is a flaw in the upgrade system. Failure to build the system well from the beginning resulted in nonsense throughout the entire process. Are you some kind of Burmese primary school teacher who teaches junior high school students and high school students step by step and sends them to Yunnan to study in college and study in the United States to get ahead? You have to give readers a relatively distant level from the beginning. You are not Oda, so you don't have the ability to retain unwilling readers. Besides, the other aspects of recruiting disciples are obviously repetitive, a bit dependent on the constant occurrence of small conflicts, and are not compatible with the excitement of farming development. You want to write about what level of talent you have reached at what point, just like what your mother always told you about other people's children, as they are spread in the world or on the fame list, who knows what kind of legs and feet you have practiced and what level you are in the world. All I know is that you are not good at leading.

Very well written, first starting point.

After they have cultivated to a certain level, let them go out and explore the world, or can the male protagonist let them practice by themselves and then choose a place and open another martial arts gym?

Become the richest man with a loss, start from the game😍

Oops, don't write a book. This is just a eunuch. The total number of words is not as much as someone else's outline.

It's very well written. I need to improve it in some places. Don't make too serious mistakes in grammar.

Why is it updated once a day now😅

Wu Daming should be written as a late bloomer. He can't be the same as the previous ones. He will understand it after studying for a few days.

I have opened a new book. Will this book be cut?

See Chapter 97. The rhythm suddenly quickened. Something seems wrong. Is it the rhythm of a eunuch?

See Chapter 38. The writing is good and fun so far. If you want to go down the road of happiness, it is essential to turn your martial arts school into a kindergarten. The old man can't write it down in the early stage, he can leave it until later. The old man was quite amused. As for the heroine, I suggest marrying someone who is extremely mediocre or even a bit useless but is beautiful and bear-sized. Later the heroine can also awaken and become a genius.

The original talent is higher, but after being taught by the protagonist, the lower the achievement, fame, and strength, the better the rewards. In this way, the protagonist will find a disciple with extremely high talent, blindly teach him, and then let the disciple use his amazing wisdom and magical talent to kill the protagonist, causing the protagonist to lose blood.

Keep writing, I'll order them all! There are no monthly passes this month. I will give them all to you next month.

Nice!

Your updates are not very effective either. Please update more.