Dimensional Invasion: From 055 to the Solar Fleet

The writing is okay, it's a story about a commander and a ship girl exploring a different world and fighting monsters together. But there are outrageous things like Warhammer Orcs in the different world. I don't know if I can hold on to it in the future. Suggestion: It's best to get more ship girls. The big ones are still too small for expulsion. Just play with blue.

Why not give priority to awakening Akashi, Chkalov, Leonardo da Vinci, Yubari and other ship girls with scientific research capabilities? If it is based on the setting of Azur Lane and is not a trick, they know more about ship girls and how to strengthen ship girls, and their scientific research capabilities are not weaker than or even stronger than human scientists. Awakening one or two first for research, and then waking up other ship girls, can also make better use of time. Of course it's just a lie, pretend I didn't say it.

There is no need to read the introduction. You should write it on the female channel. On the male channel, your way of writing will only attract scolding.

This book should be classified into the cesspool of female videos or light novels

No? Do you really want to write about Warhammer stuff? Why did you think that with your book title, no one would come here for those things?

After reading the first 2 chapters, I found it surprisingly good, but the "national destiny" in the title of the book doesn't really reflect it, and it might be too early. Another thing to mention: The title of this book... Its ability to attract people... Is somewhat lacking... (I, just myself! When I saw the beginning of National Destiny, I didn't really want to click on it...) (This is for reference only, I don't like to welcome corrections)

Are all shipgirls heroines? I won't watch it if I don't. I mainly watch Ship Girls and secondarily Dimension Invasion.

Is Warhammer traffic good now? Many authors have started writing some Warhammer stuff regardless of whether it suits them or not.

Which country's national destiny is Bismarck and Tirpitz? Do you want to add the Yoshino ship later, and do you want to add the Sino-Japanese War of Sino-Japanese War? Is it worthy?

The author really had to consider changing the title of the book. The National Fortune was almost wiped out at first glance, but then he remembered that he was not a tomato at the starting point, so he came in to take a look.