Family Cultivation: Start by Activating the Bloodline Scriptures

I have read several templates, they are similar to Baoshu

I've read a similar book. . .

I can't speak clearly, there are a lot of wrong words and sentences, and the bloody plot is quite embarrassing.

You have given birth to several children, and no cheating has appeared. Did your cheating start with your sister-in-law's child? Isn't it a bit ridiculous to write this way? What's the point of such suppression? Then you shouldn't write about how many children the protagonist has given birth to. It's no fun to write an online novel like this. Even if you are a group portrait or a family member. But who is the main protagonist of your profile? You should rewrite the protagonist of the introduction to make the protagonist of the introduction more interesting

The writing is not good, there are many logical errors

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The father died of overwork, and the two brothers could barely survive starvation by cultivating more than 20 acres of rice fields. What happened to the multiple parents? It had to be written to death. The main character suffered from fetal miscarriage and just watched his father die of exhaustion. Your parents are dead. You two brothers will be awesome and rich in the future. Why can't the brothers die from exhaustion after working so much more? Why can't you die accidentally?

I just started reading it, and I got to Chapter 11. I feel that the author's writing skills are still very poor, the narration is unclear, and the writing skills are still shallow.

Zero points rating, Goldfinger has told too many people, it is highly toxic and full of loopholes, the writing method from 20 years ago is mentally retarded and outdated, just tell the exercises, a lot of people have to know

Chapter 81, another poisonous plot, another broken arm, the protagonist is suppressed, and a lot of bloody plots

After reading Chapters 85 and 86, I knew this book was useless. The main character is almost 60 years old! He has also practiced Qi level 6. The suppression is so extreme. How can he build a foundation? The protagonist has not practiced physical training or spiritual training. He has practiced Qi and suppressed him. His spiritual roots are not good and he has no resources. It is obvious that medicine can be grown in the book space, but he has to show off outside.