Rebirth in 1998 Begins with Young People in a Small Town

If Aunt Li were to be so sarcastic and angry every day in real life, she would be beaten to pieces. She looks so useless and makes her angry.

The writing is very good, the plot is rigorous, the emotions of relatives, friends, and lovers are expressed delicately, and the description of the environment and side effects are spot on. There are minor flaws, such as typos, the sudden addition of the word "I", and confusing paragraphs. You can avoid these mistakes by reading it again and uploading it yourself, which will not affect your viewing. Thank you for your support! ! Author, please persevere, you have the talent to become a god, but your current results are not ideal, so don't be anxious.

The author has a good writing style, and I could read it easily, and it was quite comfortable to read. The parents, dialogue, and sense of time are all good. It's strange that there are only 29 collections for 40,000 words. This is the number of collections on the first day of the Chronicle. It's so strange. I think it would be better to abbreviate the paragraphs that start the headache, simply explain it, and make the inner dialogue a little more stable. The old readers of Qidian will think that you are from Tomato, which is a bit jumpy. I think it would be better to lay the groundwork in advance for the method of breaking the game in Chapter 6, and then write a detailed introduction of 150-300 words. I think it will be good. One family's opinion, for reference only.

What do you want to do when you add the word "I" in this article? Very dramatic