Mercenaries: Start by Mastering American Iai

Let's see.

The protagonist's family is so rich, why should he be a PMC? The skills rewarded by the system are not immortality and invulnerability, so why should he risk his life? The logic doesn't make sense. The main character's identity and background are almost the same, or the system's benefits are attractive enough to form a reasonable plot advancement.

After reading this introduction, it feels like firepower is king.

There was no first order because there was no update the day before it was released. This guy just cut off the JJ.

The previous plot treatment of this book is very similar to the highlights of "Fire Power is King"

Now that it's cut, the author can finish it!

This book will be written slowly, so readers don't have to worry about the eunuch of this book. Thank you for your support🙏🏻

Write a training camp and cut the book directly

The author has some ideas and you can see if they are feasible for yourself First Change the family background of the protagonist. In his previous life, he was a rich second generation. In this life, he is a Chinese orphan born in Mexico. He was unintentionally involved in this battle for some reasons. Because of the accurate pistol marksmanship rewarded by the protagonist's system, he was chosen to be introduced as a mercenary. So do you think this would be better than a rich second-generation tourist like you being kidnapped and then having to join a mercenary life or death to cut into the main story?

The plot in the training camp could end earlier ~ the pace is a bit slow

Skipping the boot camp section doesn't detract from the reading at all.

Tip, although it's not much, but I still want you to add more 😁

Do you know why it doesn't work? The main reason is that it's a bit delayed. If you want to attract people, it needs to be more compact, and the description of the battle needs to be tense and exciting, and the enemies should not be too weak. The enemies should range from individuals to giants and terrors, and the national game should unfold bit by bit.

I feel like I need to nourish myself.

There are still too few authors

I see that your chapters are interspersed with a lot of expectations for collection subscriptions, maybe to make money, which is normal. But looking at the current number of reviews and collections, I decided to keep it up first, because I'm afraid that one day you won't be able to write anymore. In terms of the plot, the first point is that it is too redundant. You wrote it very carefully, but some places can be touched upon a little. The training plot is not exciting and does not have many ups and downs. It is still very long Then the system has a very low sense of presence. Is this related to the playback speed of the plot? It seems to have appeared twice so far Chapter 100 is still a newcomer. This seems to be a long time for your introduction. Maybe you need to write one or two thousand chapters? This is a bit contradictory to your current expectations. If you want to get good reading feedback, you must have exciting and attractive content. Your careful carving may eventually become a masterpiece, but it just cannot meet your current expectations. The beginning of your book is the same as the one I read before, and the detailed content and follow-up direction are different. The new content, I don't know if it is borrowed from it or the employment stream is like this. That book gave me the feeling that it is plain water. I have never read this kind of book and all I got was some popular science. The plot is very bland My suggestion is to either write it in a refreshing way and provide pure spiritual food, or introduce some cognition so that readers can decide the value. Various aspects, such as how to apply for a green card, what are the differences between the United States and China, can you tell me some knowledge about the underground world when it comes to black boxing, etc. Is the book Currency War enjoyable? In fact, it is not enjoyable, but it is indeed valuable and reveals another side of the world.

Very few people write like this. It's difficult for someone to write.

Don't be a eunuch😭

This book could use some revision.

Come on, it's a novel worth pursuing

Really nice. Read it in one go.