Wizard Origin: Fusion of Eyes of the Ancient God at the Start

Investigation object: "The Origin of the Wizard: The Beginning of the Fusion of the Ancient Gods" - Male Protagonist - [Richie] Investigation Result: [Reincarnation] Judgment Basis: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, investigates and adds information to the time-travelers' time-travel situations. With the occupation of recording, it aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all the worlds know in advance the traveling conditions of the travelers in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with fast travel information inquiry services If there are any mistakes, Wanwang will correct me ——Feast of All Souls Zhenjun Stay on April 23, 2025

The title is called The Origin of Wizards. I saw Chapter 13 and there was no trace of wizards. Then I looked at the chapter titles and saw the Knight Breathing Technique. I was tired of this routine.

There's nothing bad about it, it's just that there's too little content, and I feel like it's gone before I've seen anything.

After reading half of it, I can say that the writing is very good, and I can see that the author put some thought into constructing the world view. If I had to pick a shortcoming, it would be that there are too many Western transliterated names of people and places, which are a bit unclear and a bit like katakana hell. You must know that it is difficult for people to remember irregular things. It is difficult to distinguish whether a name that is incomprehensible is the name of a person, a place or a civilized race. It is completely different from the situation where you remember the settings thoroughly or there is a noun list next to it. There are two correct ways to do it. One is to reduce the frequency of occurrence, and the other is to make obvious features. For example, place names can use words with Chinese meanings such as Driftwood Town and Lvweilong plus administrative units. The same goes for countries. It can not only facilitate memory, but also have some allusions. For personal names, you can add some titles to important figures, and don't give names to minor characters. Of course, Champagne Street and code names do appear in the article, but they are not enough.

Attached is a rough world map. The paintings and characters are not very nice, but it should be possible to see the specific distribution of countries and regions