Disaster Dragon: Starting by Raising a Knight Family

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Have you ever been a dragon? Some of this is just random writing and assumptions.

After reading the first dozen or so chapters, I noticed a major problem: the game has almost no gameplay; it's all about luck. The protagonist doesn't have any real power either; he just clicked two options, possessed someone, said a few words, and then got adored by a bunch of people as a big shot. This is so jarring, I can't understand it.

Have you ever been a dragon? Then write whatever comes to mind, just random, presumptuous things.

I read a novel called "Giant Lizard of the Forest" more than ten years ago, and it's still relevant today.

The idea is brilliant, but it feels like the author's writing style can't quite handle it, which is a shame.

Have you ever been a dragon? You're making assumptions and writing nonsense.

Have you ever been a dragon? Some of your writings are random and based on assumptions.

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