If You Are Asked to Cultivate Immortality, Have You Become the Ancestor of the Game?

The main line of the story is to cultivate immortality, so no matter what additional content it is, it should be in line with the cultivation of immortality. The early alchemy and flying swords all fit the theme. However, with the emergence of the barrage function, the element of cultivating immortality has completely disappeared. After that, the plot will not feel out of place if it is moved to a modern city. As a copywriter, the focus has never been on the original appearance of the things you copy. The focus is on how the things you copy will integrate into the culture of another world. Of course, integrating requires brainpower. If there are not enough ideas, you can only control the quantity, rather than copying a little here and there. Off topic, I still don't understand the charm of monkeys🍵

Is there any mention of how much it costs to copy Jingyu? It can't be tens of thousands each.

What readers have the most opinions? I just want to cut it off, and if I don't agree with the reader's comment, I will criticize you if you feel uncomfortable, just go to a female channel and don't stay here.

I have seen people blame readers for their poor grades. You, who has good grades, are blaming readers for cutting books. This is quite bad behavior. There is absolutely no problem with the idea of ​​adding the original game, and it is a good point to watch, but it is also true that you did not handle it well in these chapters. So it's not to blame that the readers don't like it, or that there's something wrong with the idea and the inability to choose a good entry point. The fundamental reason is that the author is talented but not ethical, and lacks basic professional ethics. It's not like I've never seen an author with a glass heart who refuses to criticize. But he has a good character and will insist on finishing the book even if his grades are not good. As for you, you are just simply bad.

You are in the first year of junior high school and everyone is in the fifteenth year. Who gave you the courage to think that you can be a big star? It's okay to cut books. If you refund the money, who cares which street you are on?

The same type of books include: Your Secret Game is Poisonous, and Development Xiaoxiaole, Earth War, etc. These two books are both good. You can check them out.

Personally, I think the main reason why these two books failed is that the author's first one was so good that he quit his job halfway through the book to write a book full-time. At the beginning, you can tell between the lines that the author has not yet broken away from his identity as an office worker. From the beginning of this book, it can be seen that the author has thrown away his identity as a player and an office worker. He is already a completely different person. An author, an author who focuses on data and readers, has completely forgotten about his love for games and the player's state of mind when playing games. He only thinks about how to please readers, how to cater to readers' preferences, and how to write a more exciting and interesting plot. Instead, he has lost the happy feeling of playing games and abandoned our original intention of reading this kind of book. I think that since you want to write what players want to see and like to see, at least you should be a real and sincere player.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​     But I refused to make any changes to the original version. I knew something was wrong when I had to move the original version online, so I ran away decisively, and as expected, the eunuch died, but I really didn't expect that the ​​eunuch died so quickly. I originally thought I had some talent, but most of the books I abandoned have been discarded. They either became eunuchs or their grades plummeted. Thinking about it now, it's not that I have talent, but that my tastes and interests are normal, so most normal people don't read the books I don't like. In the past, I would be criticized by some die-hard fans when I posted comments or posts saying something was wrong, "The majority are those who read silently, and the minority like you who constantly criticize are the ones who like to read or not. You are the only one who has more." Looking at it now, it is true that the majority of people are silent, but they are just like me. I just like to say something, and the others just leave.

New books must squeeze the author hard and squeeze out every drop of the author.

The third chapter just updated feels a bit like the way of the system's black technology Internet cafe, giving the cultivating natives a little game shock I hope the new book will give more plots about the players' lives, please refer to This game is too real or Super God Mechanic I hope to write about the state of mind of people from other worlds when playing games like the one we played in the first place, refer to the Almighty Game Designer It's just that Xin Yuan (what's the pronunciation of the word) in the last book was very well portrayed. I hope that there will be several or more scenes in various game types to portray the top players with fullness and depth. The kind that can impress people, and write the feeling of group portraits, refer to the reality. The boss is 43 years old and played the limited machine International Invitational Tournament. I really shed tears And please keep pure love, Laba Garlic! Laba garlic!

He wanted to do it all on his own, and the setting was confusing from the beginning. The world view was so small and customized, and in the middle he also came up with the setting of Destiny Child. In the end, he couldn't hold it in his head and it was ruined. As long as it is a world of cultivating immortals with normal settings, don't make those private settings. At most, add a Western Fantasy patch. There is not so much nonsense.

Damn it, it's more uncomfortable for this kind of person to make money than for me to lose it 😁

Isn't this the guy who permanently banned me after Titan was fully booked? I posted a comment about the heroine at that time. If I really had to pay how much money, it would be a bit poisonous (it's the one where others gave me the IP for free, but I had to pay how much to buy the plot), or I commented on the content, and I was banned forever.

Pure lung mist, the pig standing in the wind really thinks he has the strength? Poor writing style, poor character, self-absorbed, the author is really arrogant and conceited, this is what you should have achieved

As an old reader of at least seven years, I rarely make unbiased comments. This is also the first time I have encountered such a novel and I can't help but complain a few words. Let's start with an objective evaluation: This perspective on cultivating immortals + games can be regarded as a refreshing and innovative masterpiece. Moreover, the author writes well at the beginning, which makes me look forward to reading the book every day. When I looked at it earlier, I thought that if I could keep writing online, I might become a rich man again. However, I really can't understand the author's speed-cutting approach. A plot is not written yet? How many words did the reader say? Or simply can't write any more? Writing a novel is not a one-time deal, and you can't even handle basic responsibilities. Why should readers pay? If the writing is stopped due to uncontrollable factors such as family or personal health. I don't blame you, I even feel sorry for you. As a level 5 author who has written a complete novel with several million words, I think you are really not worthy of writing a book. (Looking at the comments, I'm still a repeat offender 😅) It seems that you are the first one to report this book for such a long time.

This book has great potential. You have to be a eunuch so easily. How can there be so many opportunities in life? This book is a peak once it is written.

I just found a reason to cut it

It's true. It's easy to take care of. The Twelve Heavenly Kings, who were the most confused, began to drift away. They did not treat readers as human beings, and their writing was not very good. Oh no, maybe 24 years is the coolest year

😅It's a good thing to keep it up, otherwise it would lose blood. The risk of pursuing reading is really high.

Do you know why the book has not been deleted now? Just to come in every day and see how many people scold you!

Is it really necessary for all of these games to be adapted to the world view of the world of cultivating immortals? This way it won't be too monotonous. I really don't want some games to be forced to change to the world view of cultivating immortals.

Medal of Honor, hee hee.

So the author is looking for a job? I talked about full-time novels before. As a result, I haven't seen any new books for five months Or did I change my account number?

Tsk tsk tsk

The first book was so lucky that I thought I was awake

The first one looked good and I ordered it at full price, the second one was like a twisted and awkward youth literature, and the third one just got out of here.

Just delete the post 🙂. To be honest, I thought your second book would be bad, but I didn't expect it to be like this.

He's already a level 5 author. Why are there two books on Eunuch?

You've written the same type of thing well 😭, please write more, it's not enough 😭

Is the author not writing books anymore or changing his vest? There is no new book after so long Didn't he say that he would write books full-time?