I Told You to Cultivate Immortality, Not Become the Gaming World's Ancestor!

What kind of reader feedback? It means you want to quit, and you start attacking readers for the slightest disagreement or dissatisfaction with their comments. If you're going to work in the female-oriented fiction genre, you shouldn't be here.

I've seen authors blame readers for poor sales, but for you to blame readers for good sales in order to cut your book's losses is a terrible thing to do. Including the original game is a perfectly fine idea and a great selling point, but it's true that you didn't handle these chapters well. So it's no wonder readers don't like it, no wonder the plot was flawed or the angle wasn't chosen well.

You do one thing and everyone else does the next; who gave you the audacity to act like a big shot? Cutting the book is fine, just refund the money and nobody cares which street it is on.

Similar titles include "Your Secret Realm Game is Addicted," "Developing a Match-3 Game," and "Earth Wars," both of which are quite good and you can check them out.

Personally, I think the main reason for the failure of these two books is that the author's first book was so successful that he quit his job halfway through to write full-time. At the beginning, you could still see between the lines that the author hadn't completely detached himself from his identity as a working professional.

I cut my losses, though it was only two chapters. I knew something was wrong when they refused to make any changes and insisted on releasing the original version. So I decided to quit. Sure enough, it was abandoned. But I really didn't expect it to be abandoned so quickly. I used to think I had some talent, but most of the books I abandoned ended up being unfinished or my grades plummeted.

A new book must be ruthlessly exploited by the author, squeezing every last drop out of them.

The first three chapters feel a bit like the kind of high-tech internet cafe mode with a system, giving the cultivation novices a bit of a gaming shock. I hope the new book will include more player-centric storylines; please refer to this game for its incredibly realistic gameplay or the godlike mechanic.

Pure lung mist, the pig standing in the wind really thinks he has the strength? Poor writing style, poor character, self-absorbed, the author is really arrogant and conceited, this is what you should have achieved

He wanted to cut it himself, but the initial concept was a mess. The world-building was so small and custom-made. They even came up with the concept of the Chosen One. In the end, it couldn't hold back the mess and it all fell apart. If it's a normal cultivation world with no special settings, and you just add a Western fantasy patch, there's no need for all this fuss.