I Told You to Cultivate Immortality, Not Become the Gaming World's Ancestor!

What readers have the most opinions? I just want to cut it off, and if I don't agree with the reader's comment, I will criticize you if you feel uncomfortable, just go to a female channel and don't stay here.

I have seen people blame readers for their poor grades. You, who has good grades, are blaming readers for cutting books. This is quite bad behavior. There is absolutely no problem with the idea of ​​adding the original game, and it is a good point to watch, but it is also true that you did not handle it well in these chapters. So it's not to blame that the readers don't like it, or that there's something wrong with the idea and the inability to choose a good entry point. The fundamental reason is that the author is talented but not ethical, and lacks basic professional ethics. It's not like I've never seen an author with a glass heart who refuses to criticize. But he has a good character and will insist on finishing the book even if his grades are not good. As for you, you are just simply bad.

You are in the first year of junior high school and everyone is in the fifteenth year. Who gave you the courage to think that you can be a big star? It's okay to cut books. If you refund the money, who cares which street you are on?

The same type of books include: Your Secret Game is Poisonous, and Development Xiaoxiaole, Earth War, etc. These two books are both good. You can check them out.

Personally, I think the main reason why these two books failed is that the author's first one was so good that he quit his job halfway through the book to write a book full-time. At the beginning, you can tell between the lines that the author has not yet broken away from his identity as an office worker. From the beginning of this book, it can be seen that the author has thrown away his identity as a player and an office worker. He is already a completely different person. An author, an author who focuses on data and readers, has completely forgotten about his love for games and the player's state of mind when playing games. He only thinks about how to please readers, how to cater to readers' preferences, and how to write a more exciting and interesting plot. Instead, he has lost the happy feeling of playing games and abandoned our original intention of reading this kind of book. I think that since you want to write what players want to see and like to see, at least you should be a real and sincere player.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​     But I refused to make any changes to the original version. I knew something was wrong when I had to move the original version online, so I ran away decisively, and as expected, the eunuch died, but I really didn't expect that the ​​eunuch died so quickly. I originally thought I had some talent, but most of the books I abandoned have been discarded. They either became eunuchs or their grades plummeted. Thinking about it now, it's not that I have talent, but that my tastes and interests are normal, so most normal people don't read the books I don't like. In the past, I would be criticized by some die-hard fans when I posted comments or posts saying something was wrong, "The majority are those who read silently, and the minority like you who constantly criticize are the ones who like to read or not. You are the only one who has more." Looking at it now, it is true that the majority of people are silent, but they are just like me. I just like to say something, and the others just leave.

New books must squeeze the author hard and squeeze out every drop of the author.

The third chapter just updated feels a bit like the way of the system's black technology Internet cafe, giving the cultivating natives a little game shock I hope the new book will give more plots about the players' lives, please refer to This game is too real or Super God Mechanic I hope to write about the state of mind of people from other worlds when playing games like the one we played in the first place, refer to the Almighty Game Designer It's just that Xin Yuan (what's the pronunciation of the word) in the last book was very well portrayed. I hope that there will be several or more scenes in various game types to portray the top players with fullness and depth. The kind that can impress people, and write the feeling of group portraits, refer to the reality. The boss is 43 years old and played the limited machine International Invitational Tournament. I really shed tears And please keep pure love, Laba Garlic! Laba garlic!

He wanted to do it all on his own, and the setting was confusing from the beginning. The world view was so small and customized, and in the middle he also came up with the setting of Destiny Child. In the end, he couldn't hold it in his head and it was ruined. As long as it is a world of cultivating immortals with normal settings, don't make those private settings. At most, add a Western Fantasy patch. There is not so much nonsense.

Pure lung mist, the pig standing in the wind really thinks he has the strength? Poor writing style, poor character, self-absorbed, the author is really arrogant and conceited, this is what you should have achieved