Simultaneous Time Travel: Man Strikes Hard in the Heavens

You use telekinesis to control chakra lines, and then control Senbon 😰. Why don't you directly control Senbon?

Don't write red in Pirates. I don't understand why so many pirates wear red. It's not necessary. Why did a cow and horse travel through time and become a sage in the past life? It can't be replaced. Isn't it good to be a powerful and unified feudal monarchy and become the emperor? I don't believe that what you dreamed about when you woke up was not to be ordered by heaven, but to unify the wasteland. . . How can serving the people and protecting my people be the same? The former even sacrificed his own life to be kidnapped by morality. Which emperor of the latter would be kidnapped by morality?

Niu b writes that the main character is missing

It was good at the beginning, but what happened to the protagonist after dozens of chapters? His eyes would turn cold at every turn, his mouth would twitch, and his words would become cold. What does the author think, can't the protagonist be normal?

The writing is a little bit literary and youthful with a running account. When writing this kind of mindless and refreshing article, I suggest you just write Wushuang. If you are writing about literary youth, just write something original, okay?

The author's preface does not match the postscript. In the previous Journey to the West world, Sun Wukong was clearly not trapped in the Five Elements Mountain. Later, Sun Wukong was directly trapped in the Five Elements Mountain.

It's better to change the name of this book, I will rebel in the heavens

What are you writing about? I didn't even see the protagonist behind me

Inconsistent plot😒

What Zhe Tian wrote is not as good as Douluo. What the hell?

The recommended version has been revised, and the author is confused about it, but it is still very important to follow up on it. I would like to trouble you brothers to do some follow-up reading. In addition, let's talk about the length of the world. In order to ensure continuity, it is usually twenty or thirty chapters, with newcomers from the new world mixed in. Some of the things that are not written focus on will be given in a few chapters or mentioned in the dream space. I have also read a lot of works of the same type. Some of them change the world after a few chapters, and are basically not written down, because there is no need to write later, which is equivalent to giving up the potential of the book in pursuit of gimmicks or fast pace. The author still wants to make the story long. For example, a rebellion like Naruto/Pirates will definitely not be regarded as a rebel/rewarded/rewarded from the beginning. What's the point if there is no foreshadowing in the early stage? Then you are not a "rebellious ninja of Konoha" at all, but just a "ninja who is hostile to Konoha". How can you have a sense of substitution? You have to live in Konoha first, and even be favored by the Hokage, and then you have the contrast of rebellion, right? In this case, the pace will not be particularly fast, so it will be very unfriendly for reading. Some book friends pursue a better experience, so they just read it for a while and then read it in one go. But in the new book issue, it is really important to follow up. Book lovers who have time to spare should really follow up with the author, otherwise it will be too difficult to bear. In the future, movies, TV shows, novels, etc. Will also be added (it is difficult to add in the early stage because the combat power of general novels is too high, and we don't know the audience situation of anime and novels yet.). In short, the standard is to see if everyone likes it. I think the background data will be adjusted in time. Finally, please, let's do some catch-up reading! ! !

I haven't read the book, but I came here specifically to watch the quarrel. As long as it involves Journey to the West or the Zhetian trilogy, the fighting power will definitely be stirred up.

It's so messy, and it's quite boring to watch later.

The biggest problem with this kind of multiple time-travel novels is that the combat power rises too fast. As you write, you will end up in Journey to the West, but the problem is that it is boring. The interesting parts are generally in relatively low-end worlds, such as Naruto, Death, Hunters, LOL, Warcraft, Harry Potter and other movies and animations. When we read this kind of multi-travel or co-travel novels, we just want to see the worlds interacting with each other, having fun, and making fun of them. But it would be no fun to go to Journey to the West and become a god. It would be easy to jump into and readers would find it boring. I couldn't watch it anyway🤦.

Someone needs to be replaced later! What is written.

Was it Uchiha Itachi's fault that the Uchiha clan was wiped out? If this plot is true, it is a slap in the face to Uchiha Itachi. You can laugh at him for being ignorant, but you can't think that Itachi is not responsible. From the moment he reached an agreement with the village and started to take action, he left everything to the village and Sasuke, waiting for his brother to come and collect his head. , The village is at peace, and his younger brother has grown up. The plot of Uchiha Itachi finally reverses. It is probably this kind of heart. If you dare to bear the sin of genocide, Uchiha Itachi will be the first to kill you. Sasuke's hatred is the final chapter of Itachi's life. Maybe Uchiha Itachi agrees? The next second he ran to Sasuke and said: My lovely brother, there is an Uchiha loach outside, sooner or later it will be over.

Dou Po Douluo didn't want to watch it at all, even Journey to the West

Let's take a look!

Eat it and see what kind of grass it is. Why does it smell like cultivating immortality?

When will Douluo World be finished?

Hurry up for updates and take a look at it slowly