People Are Traveling to the West, Investing in the Heavens

It sounds like your writing style is quite fun and interesting at the moment, I hope it won't happen in the future. Break update

The author dares to add the Great Love Immortal Lord. Investment before Fang Yuan's first week is useless, and investment after his blackening is invalid. Especially at the end of the first week, he refines the time Gu and lives out the second life. At the beginning of the plot, it can be said that Fang Yuan has been assimilated by the world. He is a Gu. He fights desperately just to survive. After investing, Fang Yuan has the ability to bite you to death immediately.

I looked at a few of the previous ones and it was okay, but when I saw the Investment Immortal Lord, I didn't know anything, and I couldn't see the other party's specific information. So I just believed whatever the other party said about the protagonist? He said that one game is only one game. Do you really believe it? The protagonist has no strength and dares to go directly. That is a flaw in logic. Otherwise, it will be refined instantly.

The author's outline is not handled well, there are many settings with logical loopholes, and the protagonist's character design is not handled well either.

In his first life, Fang Yuan would rather starve his own Gu insects to death than deceive, kidnap, and steal. However, he was later driven crazy by the Gu world, and he couldn't live without going crazy. When he met Xie Muhan, he no longer wanted to live. In the end, he realized that the world really deserved to die, and he became obsessed with it.

Your profile looks like Xu You, but I don't know who is Boss Cao in the profile.

In fact, I have always been curious about why Journey to the West was labeled as a calamity by the Internet prehistoric novels. Is it a calamity that killed a few wild monsters with no background? Fengshen, your online novel is labeled as a calamity with conspiracy theories. Is it true?

Let me give you a suggestion. You should start to downplay Gu. You should open a new world for investment, or enter a new world and be someone else's grandfather. Writing about this world of Gu will be thankless. The protagonist of the Gu world is such an extreme thing. No matter what you write, those Gu truths Human readers will not buy it, because they all think that the protagonist will definitely not be able to suppress Fang Yuan. Generally speaking, it is better to downplay the Gu world. Other book friends said that you can let the group of friends go to the new world to play by themselves. You can also write about a world that is popular with the public, at least it will be popular.

That queen is so uncomfortable to watch, she feels a little white, or a little licky? Forcibly creating opportunities for Xiao Yan put yourself too low. Just give her a golden elixir. But you said that the golden elixir is unlimited, then I will forget it.

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is really hard to read.

Drive high and go low 📉, I've read a few books and it's always like this, it's really numb 😟

I don't understand why Zhu Tianliu's novels in every chat group expose themselves to Yaochen, and even tell them about having a chat group. It's just a suicide attempt. Human nature cannot stand the test. Sometimes one more person knows the danger, and others may not be able to seize the opportunity, but there is a high probability that they will do bad things out of jealousy.

I'm off topic. Why do you keep writing about Gu?

It's just that you can't write it like this. Otherwise, you can do it one world at a time, and all the protagonists go to one world, one world at a time, pretending to be world by world, and leveling up world by world. Otherwise, you write two pages for this world and two for that world, whoever is in the mood to read it, or everyone will say that your writing is relatively plain, and you have to write about Dou Po's original form. Dou Po is very well written, but suddenly you turn a corner and write about Journey to the West, and write three chapters of Journey to the West, especially Devouring, a hammer to the east, a hammer to the west, and everyone will definitely not be happy to read it. How about you just designate a world, and each group can come in, visit the world, and upgrade the plot? Wouldn't that be enough?

Now that the main character has developed, if I continue writing like this, it will become a pure nanny novel. When will there be investment feedback?

Isn't Fang Han the door to eternal life? How did reincarnation become the door of creation?

This is no better than the future of my group member next door 😁

The key is that if you don't practice, you are also drunk.

Journey to the West has different realms. There is no need to forcefully set a unified realm. You are just writing it without poison!

Anyway, I don't quite understand the classification of the protagonists. Author, this hasn't been updated yet.

The author has not been very good at updating these days. I feel like I am updating one page a day. Is it appropriate to take a leave?

This book looks pretty good from the beginning! Although the protagonist's qualifications are a bit low, the system is powerful and he has a good hold on him (too good). He just pretends to be half-assed and then stops pretending. He is neither good nor bad! I won't know later! Because there is no limit on exemption. 😰

Damn it, the first place in the contribution list was taken away 😭😭😭😭

It came from QQ, and it started to get popular after it was put on the shelves.

I just want to say that this is the most enjoyable meal our old devil has ever had.

Can the author tell me which chapters are mysteries? I'll order these

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?