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With this quality, there are still people who pay to see it. I admire him. He is a pure breed among the great injustices. He is silent at first glance.
On average, there are dozens or hundreds of typos in a chapter without correcting or mentioning them. How can you pay for it when it has less than 60,000 words? Do you want to make money and do it three times? We readers see these IP fans as generating money and paying for it for love. Are you trying to take advantage of this IP? If you want to cut leeks but the quality is not good, why not cut them three times?
It feels like it comes from an assembly line
I haven't read a few chapters before coming up with Level 34 Fulong Xiangtian. Is it okay to write a fanfic and respect the setting? 🙄
Let's start again. Nine out of ten full-timers will join Happy. Isn't it strange that Ye Xiu wouldn't be able to write without following him? And the content is basically the same, as discussed with her mother.
The emotional part is too watery, and it's annoying to read. I came here to read the game competition article, but what the hell is it?
Defeating Ye Xiu at the beginning depends on understanding The value of a single-professional silver weapon is not less than the Thousand Chance Umbrella, what are you doing? Level 1 Ice Formation Level 34 Fulong Xiangtian Bullshit
I suggest changing the name "baby" 😃 so that readers will feel better.
There must not be a female protagonist. If there is, there can only be one at most. It must not be Mu Cheng. Ye Cheng cannot be separated. The relationship can be like the original one, or of course it can be closer (the above is purely a personal opinion, you can ignore it)
By the way, who is the heroine of this novel?
Doesn't the skill of releasing ghosts require time to chant?
What a big failure
I don't quite understand why the heroine Tang Rou was tortured for several games. After the protagonist said "The main force is tired, I am the substitute", the protagonist raised his head and became stronger than the original work. After the training of the protagonist, he became stronger than the original work, and was beaten by the captain of the Pheasant Team. If I had to write about losing streaks in a row and being beaten violently, even though my companions had strengthened, I still couldn't beat him. It really put the protagonist and the title-level player who was defeated by the protagonist at a disadvantage.