Zhenguan First Criminal Case Officer

The previous chapter on solving the case was very well written, very good! Brother, be sure to hold on tight. We will solve the case as soon as we write to solve it. Don't let it slip into governing the country and managing the world in the middle of the process.

Each chapter is too expensive 😢 The writing is very good, but if you look at it like this, it will go bankrupt. Can you make it cheaper for those of us who support the original version?

Although there are many inner dramas of the protagonist in it, it is not the essence of solving the case. It is the details of solving the case. It is easy to think that the ancients had a low IQ in solving crimes, and the protagonist needs to unravel the mystery bit by bit. It's a pity that there are too few chapters. If you like solving crimes, you can check it out. You won't be disappointed.

It is said that this can make you a good person? 😜😜😜

Disadvantages: The biggest shortcoming of this book is the addition of a female protagonist, and the emotional scenes are too awkward, especially the interactions with the heroine from time to time in the plot, which is really embarrassing. Secondly, the political description is too simple, but this can be tolerated. Finally, passers-by occasionally give the protagonist a wave of embarrassing compliments. The author might as well not have written these three points, which really gives people the feeling of hiding shit in the rice. Advantages: The content of investigation and solving crimes is very well written, and it is top-notch in this aspect. However, I really can't stand this emotional drama. I am really tired from watching it.

This book has evolved from young boy Bao Santian to young boy Liu Yitian! ! In order to speed up the tempo and solve the case on the same day, I would like to ask you how to arrange the next book? Can it be faster? Can Kobe be saved?

I found two pictures of Chang'an to compare the locations in the plot, which is clearer and easier to understand

Following this path, if the murderer has been identified, the only woman related to the case so far is Princess Changle. King Changle messed around and then activated the princess's second dark personality.

Although the case was good, the emotional drama was as boring as ever, and it made my toes clench to the ground...

The pace is too fast, many major cases have been solved, several places have been visited, and the chapters are almost 300. The result is that the time travel has been less than half a year? Isn't it possible even in modern times? It won't be that when the novel is finished, it won't even be a year into the past 😁

Pei Ji is Li Yuan's number one confidant. It's good that Erfeng didn't liquidate him 😎

"Chapter 85, my little brother was caught and I want him to apologize." It only took me 0.01S to guess the author's gender. You can try it too.

Everything else is fine, it's just that the "cold and glamorous work" always makes me a little nervous

If the boss in the end is Li Yuan, it would be inappropriate 1. Anyone who has read historical articles is familiar with history. Throughout the late Sui Dynasty, Li Yuan was mostly indecisive when leading his troops. Yang Guang commented on Li Yuan's mother-in-law face, and Sima Guang commented on Li Yuan's indecisiveness. Would an indecisive person use the bones of a child to make a game? 2. Li Yuan basically spent the rest of his life regretting his efforts to establish virtuous people and establish leaders. Would such a person do this?

Are you good at solving crimes? Brother, your requirements are too high. Most of the books written by great masters only have good plots and mediocre writing and characters. The only shortcoming of the author is to update more. I didn't find any good books this month. I'll give you 5 monthly passes.

Make a bet on how many chapters this book can be written 1. Within 50 chapters 2. 100-200 3. More than 500 chapters

Although I have been nitpicking in this chapter, I really feel that this is the best online book about ancient detective stories that I have read. This kind of subject matter is really rare, and if it is well written, it can really be adapted into movies and TV shows. The author's writing is really good, but there are some routine problems. For example, basically every case has someone to do something, but the person doesn't understand, and then the protagonist explains: "Don't worry about it now/I don't know how to explain it to you, do it first..." Etc.

It's okay and pretty good. It's good as a crime-solving novel. Don't read it as a historical or official novel.

Purely modern words like "technical content" and "logic", even foreign words, would not have appeared in the Tang Dynasty.

It doesn't feel like it was written by the author of Zhenguan. The opening pace is too tight.

I felt something was wrong with the fictional criminal investigation story that was disguised as the history of Zhenguan. From the beginning, I felt that there was something wrong with black powder. Where could there be black powder in the Zhenguan Dynasty? There were also mirrors. At the industrial level at that time, silver mirrors were the most common. How could such a clear mirror be used to refract the scene of a fire? Since we want to cover up the history of the Zhenguan Dynasty, we should restore the situation of the dynasty at that time instead of using modern things to impose it.

Monthly pass😌

One case after another, with no time in between, I felt very pressed for time and very tired from watching. I feel that the shell of the Tang Dynasty is hard-wired. It feels better to take out the shell of the Tang Dynasty and replace it with an urban background. Being guilty beyond reasonable doubt is the current legal understanding. In ancient times, it was beyond doubt. This crime could kill many people.

I am also ranked second

The novel is still very well written and fascinating. I hope the author can maintain his condition and complete this novel.

I have read two of your books. To be honest, they are really good, but the pace is too fast, and the pace of advancement is too fast. It ends after one or two daily intersperses. I think if you can combine the main plot with daily writing, I think you will definitely have a big breakthrough. I read the one about Zhan Zhao solving the case. To be honest, I think that book is average, but he writes well and his writing style is very sophisticated.

I just can't stand it anymore. Overall, it's still good enough, but the people around me are too smart. In order to set off the protagonist, I'm trying to be smart. Before the protagonist appeared, all of them were excellent people. After the protagonist appeared, their temperaments changed drastically and they even lost their brains. From Du Gou to Cheng Chumo, to the first-rank officials and even the emperor, they are all shocked tool men. When encountering a certain setback, they become frustrated and furious, and then show off their protagonists and shock everyone; When we arrived at the villain's place, the villain casually said, "You don't have direct evidence, it's a slander." The NPCs nodded one after another, looking hesitant, as if they were possessed. They ignored all the previous reasoning and auxiliary evidence, as if you, the protagonist, would turn around and help the villain the next second if you couldn't produce direct evidence. God, why are the soldiers brought by the protagonist suspicious of the protagonist... The logic of the main body of the case is basically smooth, the technique is reasonable, the writing style is good, and the overall situation is good, but it still can't stand it. It's okay to set off, but if you don't set off, it won't highlight the protagonist's awesomeness. But using this method over and over again makes it difficult to read. Especially, it's not just a certain paragraph or chapter, it's an entire chapter. I don't know how to jump to a chapter...

How to say it? I have just read the fourth case. The reasoning, modus operandi, and logic are all good. It is still readable as a pure mystery novel, but the others are a bit hard to describe. Like the first book, there are too many descriptions of the eyes, and there are countless things like the gleam in the eyes of xx. Then he kept calling Du Nu "Wuzhuo" and so on. You must know that "Wuzhuo" was a despicable industry in ancient times. The families of those who were "Wuzhuo" could not take the public examination for several generations. If you say "Wu Zuo" to the left and "Wu Zuo" to the right, it is equivalent to insulting people. It is almost equivalent to saying that a certain countryman is a rare person. And the protagonist really has no edge at all. He is like a wild dog on the roadside that anyone can step on. Especially in the fourth case, Qian xx is just a relative of Pei Ji. What kind of hook is Pei Ji? Li Yuan's confidant is not Li Shimin's confidant. He is about the same as the National Army in 1949. If he dares to bury a few pieces of armor in his house, there will be a lot of people to help him. You can replace this person with Chang Sun Wuji, but it is Pei Ji. In the first case, he was scolded like that, and it ended with a light apology. If I had been scolded like this, I would have sneaked into his house at night and twisted off his head. As a modern person who is so good at solving crimes, shouldn't you be able to carry out an ancient version of the perfect crime in ancient times? The protagonist is shown to be useless except for solving crimes. Then the interaction with the heroine didn't feel sweet at all, only awkward, very embarrassing. I suggest the author not write a new book without a heroine, and then the protagonist can stop being such a jerk, and can he still be called a young man without being frivolous. Mystery novels are a niche genre, but this is the genre that values ​​logic the most. Any illogicality will be magnified infinitely, because those who like to read reasoning will naturally think along the plot. Come on, author

Having said everything else about pacing, I think there is a very serious problem. This book has not improved much, it just isn't fun enough! ! ! This solved the case, with less slaps in the face, and it was okay for the villain to ride on his face. At most, he could just apologize without any pain. It was so frustrating to watch. . . . You have to be slapped in the face at every step. If you slap the face, just give it a slap. What are you doing?

The author, you have clear ideas for solving suspense cases and great leverage. It is best to write more. I am not satisfied with reading. Please vote for it. Come on.