Dayan Immortal Clan

For the family flow, the author is smarter in weakening the reading threshold and simplifying and renovating many settings of the conventional family flow. Overall, it looks very smooth. Combined with the popular Golden Finger, it solves the shortcomings of the family flow, and the new book issue has achieved pretty good results, which is a direction worth studying. In addition, the plot has always had a strong sense of crisis, and the sense of anticipation has been raised. The group portraits are also well done. It's just that compared to the previous family series, the depth of the plot is relatively lacking. If we dig deeper into the characters, it should be possible to extend the original plot length limit.

Food and grass, no water, everything has been written down, but the level of improvement is too slow. The initial starting point of the Qi training family is better. If the level improves faster, I think the results will be much better.

Each character has distinct characteristics, such as the four heirs, some are physical practitioners, some are swordsmen, some are geniuses, some are mortals, and the second child died fighting for the family. This one is very good if it can make people remember it. I can't tell the difference when looking at other group portraits. The story line is also very good and clear. When I saw the refuge in the small world of the Five Elements, I am going to wait for a while before continuing to read it. I am optimistic about this book and the author will continue to work hard!

Overall, it's not bad. It's just that the pace has obviously sped up a lot since it was released. It's not as steady as it was before it was released. There are fewer golden fingers. I feel that the pace is too fast later and the combat power is easy to collapse. For the Sword Immortal, I still prefer the affectionate and righteous Li Chijing. Mingwu's true heart is the real Sword Immortal. It's difficult to control the pace. If it's too slow, it's too slow. If it's too fast, it's easy to collapse. Come on, author.

I would like to ask, where did the system go for a book written by the system? I looked at dozens of books and it didn't appear a few times.

This kind of world is a world where one's life is like grass. How can one survive in such a world without any means of self-protection? After so many years, he is still so naive.

I did some genealogy, character relationships, personality preferences, major exercises, achievements, and contributions to the family. Important figures and historical nodes are color-coded Everyone is welcome to guide and communicate The picture will be compressed and cannot be seen clearly, save it locally and enlarge it for a look!

Didn't the protagonist learn martial arts for the first half of his life? The rest of my life will be spent raising children 😠

I would like to ask if the protagonist's relatives and friends in this book have experienced illness or death. There are also many family stories where as long as there is a relationship with the protagonist, it is like automatically getting the immortality buff. It is so difficult for other people to practice cultivation and it always feels very disconnected. How about this book?

Tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away

Friends who have read it, can you tell me, is it a family story in which the entire clan sucks the blood of the protagonist?

Hu Yufen is not suitable to be the heroine of this book. The protagonist has a long lifespan. Hu Yufang, a mortal, is destined to die of old age. Without martial arts and spiritual roots, I don't know if there is anyone who has spiritual roots and is older. Her lifespan is destined not to be as long as that of the protagonist. Is a person who cannot accompany the protagonist on his journey qualified to be the heroine? After Hu Yufang dies, will the protagonist still marry a wife? If you marry, there is no need to be devoted. Marry more. Use wives and children as tools. Upgrade the system level to get a higher bloodline, so that you can practice immortality.

No, I can't accept the ending of the second child's family 😭. Zhao Xuan didn't do anything wrong. Why should she be so miserable? She couldn't practice cultivation in the first place. She was a widow for more than ten years and finally faced such a miserable ending. The husband whom she missed so much took a concubine outside and died without leaving any letters or messages. I'm really sorry. I can't bear it. Although he is a mortal, it is already very difficult to cultivate immortality. His husband does not love him, and his son is stubborn and paranoid. After waiting for so long, he has waited for such an ending. Why is it that hemp ropes are cut only at the thinnest places, and misfortunes only seek out the poor? Can't the protagonist be stronger and find a way to maintain the whole family? Reality is already very painful, can't novels be more beautiful? Hey... If possible, I hope the author can change the fate of some people and have a happy ending.

I suggest the author create one or two outstanding female characters later on. This is a male channel after all.

Congratulations on getting it on the shelves. There is a lot of blood in the family. The protagonist of this book is the most emotional. He does not put his own interests first, others are pawns. Even though his son has feelings, he is also the first. The protagonist of this book is willing to die in exchange for his son's life, or die an ordinary death, but he also wants to make money for his son to practice martial arts. This is the most different thing about this book. I really like the character of the protagonist.

Traveling back in time just to raise children? ? ? ? ? Not for yourself or for her, but for the sake of your children? ? ? The last one was empty?

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you watch the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace.

I can't stand Xuanjian Clan of Immortals, but I can continue reading this book because this book has a protagonist. The protagonist of Xuanjian is just a pendant, with no entry point and no sense of substitution! It looks dry, but at least I know that Shen Yuan is the protagonist of this book, and there is a perspective. The writing, plot, etc. Are all very good. Come on, author.

Shen Li is a female character who has a relatively large number of roles in the book. It's okay if the master dies, but the death method of having his blood drawn for refining is quite unacceptable. Refining can be classified as a demonic act. Moreover, Master Shen Li was trapped and killed when he came over after receiving news from the Shen family. Can Shen Yuan put aside his position and say, "Zhenjun Daying is firm in his pursuit of Tao?" His mentality is quite good, and his words are correct, but such a character has no personality charm. The other party wanted to kill your son, and also used magic means to kill the person who came to help you. This person is also your granddaughter's master. Not long ago, he almost killed you at the door of your house. It is impossible for the protagonist of any book to say "put aside his position". This person has a very firm heart for seeking truth.

I've seen a lot of comments saying that the protagonist doesn't look like a time traveler, etc. It's really ridiculous! ! I am just curious, what should a time traveler look like? ? ? Practice martial arts? If the money you have saved for more than ten or twenty years is not enough to practice martial arts for one year, a whole family can't survive, right? (If I remember correctly, the protagonist's tortoise shell was also just picked up. He didn't even have a system before, so it's good to be alive.) Some people also say that making money by relying on the time traveler's consciousness... It's even more ridiculous! In this kind of world, wealth is linked to strength. If you have no strength or background, isn't it just a way to get rich that is courting death? Lai Lai talks about time-travelers. From a God's perspective, do you think time-travelers are awesome and powerful? Ask yourself, if you were transported through time, could you survive three episodes? PS: There is also the matter of prices. Some people always compare the Ming and Qing dynasties. I went back and looked at it. The author didn't seem to say what dynasty this was, right? In an imaginary world of cultivating immortals, does it have to deduct these details?

1. The writing is not bad, 2. The concept is good 3. The setting is also reasonable.

The author wanted to write too many things. He wanted to write about immortality and various arts, he wanted to write about good and evil cultivation, he wanted to write about family hegemony, and he wanted to write about the love between children. He even added some poisonous points to try to reflect the feeling that there is a right and wrong path to family development. The result was that all kinds of poisonous points disgusted readers in the early stage of the classic, and then everything had to be written to suppress the protagonist's level. Later, he found that the plot was too open and he could only finish each line hastily, and finally gave up and ran away. Writing about the feeling of a family cultivating immortality, basically all of the above pitfalls cannot be avoided.

Due to the hard work of the author, there are some contradictions in some parts of the article. When you read it, you may remember one of the statements. I made a compromise and optimized it when making the sketch. I apologize for any problems when reading the sketch😁😁 It took me about three hours to make a picture with such little information. The author should pay me quickly - 2000 words plus updates😡

I read this book for the first time yesterday and it suited my taste very well, so I ordered it all. Thank you to the author, come on! 🙂

1. The son of the protagonist, Shen Wenyan, casually created the Tao of Literature. He did not have a strong talent but he established the Tao in a short time. You must know that the world of immortality has been passed down for countless years. There are trillions of mortals without spiritual roots. There are probably many who are better than the son of the protagonist in terms of talent and family background. It has been a long time. Li Wendao had pioneered it long ago 😅 2. The protagonist is often incompetent and furious. I remember that one of my relatives was killed by Baishou Mountain. He was so sad that he asked the son of the Sword Immortal to go to Baishou Mountain to die. It is really brainless [f n=14] 3. The protagonist is forcibly reduced to intelligence and appears to be a waste. The time traveler is as careless and scheming as a traditional farmer. He doesn't even understand the law of the jungle. The protagonist has never thought about becoming stronger to solve problems. When something happens, I will be very sad, let my son send it off, and then rely on the halo of the protagonist to force it to happen I have never thought about encouraging the family to have more children to make good use of the golden finger. I have never thought that the weak family should just grow up. I don't know what can be offended and what cannot be offended. In summary, the family's survival depends entirely on the protagonist's halo. In fact, with normal logic, the Hundred Beasts Mountain has already destroyed the protagonist's family.

He can't really be a eunuch, right? He tried his best to suppress the protagonist's cultivation in the early and middle stages, and when the finale was almost over, he directly filled the body and skipped the infant transformation and directly transformed into a god... It was really a failure.

Now I can only read slowly.

The author is officially blocked today 🤓

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