
Douluo Peerless Mo Jia Yuhao
斗罗绝世之墨家雨浩
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- Ongoing
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- 451k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The more I look at it, the harder it gets
Anyone who is qualified in ideological and political education and has no love brain can become a life mentor in the Hydrogen Continent.
I came here to read the story. The author really told too many truths, which made it boring.
It is known that Mozi traveled through modern times, so he must have seen various isms. So will Mozi's thoughts be innovative this time? After seeing socialism, would Mozi lead Huo Yuhao back to the feudal imperial society? Or add more good ideas to your own ideas and infinitely converge towards socialism? I think this is one of the highlights of this book. It depends on whether Mozi in this book will stick to his point of view or go further after reading Das Kapital and Selected Works of Mao Zedong
Also, I find that "benefiting the world" appears at every turn Although this is your core idea, if it appears too frequently, it will cause aesthetic fatigue, and it is cumbersome to read novels without listening to what you say. I think it can be better said in more modern terms. After all, someone who is around you every day and "benefits the world, benefits the world", you are right to spread your thoughts But there is a problem if you write it all. Just write two examples. It will be boring if it takes too long. And when I read it, I didn't feel any crisis, or everything was very bland. It is undeniable that your current situation is indeed bland. But the protagonist or the reader must have a certain crisis, so that the reader can be involved. Otherwise, it will always be from the perspective of a bystander, and there will be no sense of substitution at all. This is boring.
Recommended by station b. It started with the Mo family + Huo Gua, but the result became more and more bland as the writing progressed. Where is it weak? There is a lot of fighting, but there is no plot. The emotional line is only reflected in the male and female protagonists "reading the script like children playing house", which is boring and boring. Although the writing of Douluo World Tang San is very sweet, I have to say that his fighting scenes are very outstanding and set off the martial arts system very well. Even if it is constantly patched later, it is enough to support the core system of Douluo. Furthermore, it is the emotional plot that has been criticized. Although it is very funny, the emotional development line is obvious, and the story has ups and downs and rhythm. These three points will make this book a hit for you. If you ask me to make a critical review, your book is just a discussion article with a funny and refreshing style. But if you look carefully, you will find that the discussion is average and the plot of the discussion is also bland. You just do what you think. You can only evaluate it as a pure YY discussion.
It is actually very difficult to teach Mohism directly, and it can easily lead to a narrow path. Without a leader who is absolutely convincing, Mohism is too prone to extreme ideas and internal struggles and divisions. It is better to teach Mohism directly and see it step by step. It is better to have three or five friends talk about ideals and revenge together, and to teach the experience and ideas of governing the country and the world, cultivating one's moral integrity in each story. Buried The seeds of the theories and hopes of hundreds of schools of thought allow the Douluo people to enlighten themselves and allow their thoughts to regenerate and adapt to the times through self-evolution. Otherwise, the ideological foundation will be too weak. Furthermore, the Mohist theory itself is not tolerated by the feudal monarchy. If you publish your thoughts directly, you may not be chased to the ends of the earth by the four empires. You still need to pay attention to these things.
I feel like it has that kind of smell. It's really nice.
Principles are good principles, but stories are not good stories Only tell great principles, not good stories Read the first seven chapters
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Let's change the wallpaper and go up. From the outside, I thought it was just for fun 🙂 If I hadn't come in and saw that the monthly ticket is quite a lot.
I only read the previous point, but I think that the protagonist is too pretentious, or he is too egotistical, which is a bit contrary to the theory he preaches. It gives people the feeling of an emperor going to the countryside. Although he looks very "people-friendly", he actually feels that what he does is special, a sense of superiority of a superior.
Optimistic about the 300,000-word eunuch 😁
This is a second-rate novel that only focuses on plot. How can Shrek reach the finals without Huo Yuhao? The second team, which didn't even have a Soul King, still had two Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus and Xuanming Turtle who had to work hard to evolve their martial souls. Do you really think that other teams don't use soul guides? Moreover, the rule is that soul masters cannot use soul guides above their own soul master level unless they make them themselves. Then even a pure soul master team cannot lose the soul king to the soul sect who uses soul guides.
I thought that the protagonist would recruit a few more apprentices to spread his disciples all over the world in order to practice the Mohist ideals. Unfortunately, he only accepted Huo Yuhao and Ye Guyi, which was a bit deliberate. Secondly, it is a good thing that you want to reform the law and serve the country and the people, but the political drama involved is like child's play. For example, the struggle between the Xu family and Huo Yuhao is a bit... Petty. There was basically no fighting, I just slashed with my sword, and then the enemy sent it. The emotional drama is also very abrupt. The Xu family father and son forced a marriage to win over Huo Yuhao, but the result was a huge commotion, and they were not human beings inside and outside I think (personal opinion) that the Xu family, as the new emperor who came to power in a coup, cannot be so petty. Since a marriage is not possible, it is better to let nature take its course and make Huo Yuhao and Meng Hongchen a couple. Also, Sun Moon Academy is an imperial asset, and the original Jing Hongchen and Mingdetang only have a relatively small amount of autonomy. For example, they can remain neutral in terms of political stance, but not much. On the whole, Sun Moon Academy still has to take orders from the royal family and cannot be independent. In addition, as one of the great points of this article, the soul fighting competition ended with negotiation. It was really a punch on cotton, which was not exciting enough and even a little aggrieved. The early part was okay, but unfortunately the entire second part was devoted to Taoism, which made me tired of reading it. It is good to learn from Lu Xun, but just by studying and imitating, you lose the soul of your own book. It is like painting the skin without painting the bones, which looks weird.
The writing is quite interesting, and it can be regarded as a rather unusual type of Douluo writing (The Tonic Eunuch)
Tasteless
It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.
You can talk about your ideals, but you have to actually do it to let others see your ideals.
When describing how Huo Yuhao and others view evil soul masters, I made reference to Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba. The reason why evil soul masters are evil soul masters is that their hands must be stained with countless blood debts. No matter how many unspeakable secrets there are, the blood debt that has been committed will never be repaid. Before evil soul masters become evil soul masters, they can live as humans. It's just that they didn't choose to be a human being, but turned into evil ghosts in human skin. People are people, ghosts are ghosts. No matter how miserable the evil ghost was before he became an evil ghost, that evil ghost has destroyed countless families. So try your best to kill the evil ghost, which is the best relief for the person who was not an evil soul master.
A big problem with this book is that the content is often written from beginning to end, as if the thesis has lost its place of discussion and has lost the skeleton of the book.
I recommend a novel, "The Peerless Tang Sect: Dai Luoli's Road to Godhood". It's super good. You can click on my profile picture to read it directly. If it doesn't look good, feel free to comment.
Ah, what's going on? ? ?
Why is there no QQ reading?
The writing is very good. I feel good after reading more than a dozen chapters. I will read it again when I have time. Add a bookshelf first