The Evil Sect

Concept: The writing style of Wu Zang Temple is eye-catching. The weird style and constant small crises are very eye-catching. This is very good. It can be said that the nearly 100,000 words in the beginning are excellent! Learned. Characters: Xu Xingye's character descriptions are quite apt, consistent with the reality of time travel, and have a sense of caution. Each character in the previous five-viscera view is also just right. I just send it as it should. I like it very much. Plot: The opening chapter is a very standard Golden Chapter. In fact, I personally think that if we can continue the writing method of the Five Zang Temple and continue to expand its content, the results should be very good. Unfortunately, after leaving the Five Zang Temple, it feels a bit out of touch with the core main line. The plot is a bit jumpy and occasionally distracting, and it is too rushed (but there is no need to say it is too slow). I originally thought that the world view was biased towards weirdness, but after I came out, I entered the situation of traditional literature. Maybe my personal expectations were a bit high. I really think that there is no problem with the 100,000-word masterpiece at the beginning. Come on!

There is a female protagonist chasing me 😍😍😍

I was so depressed when I walked out of the Wu Zang Gate. It turned out that I could still see through it only so-so.

The book ends when we return to Qixingmen. It is divided into chapters and chapters. Are there ghosts in Qixingmen? It's also inexplicable after it's gone. The protagonist was forcibly dragged away by the author as if he was speechless and unable to ask questions.

Starting from the chapter about killing the master, everything collapsed

The book is good, but the author is a newcomer and his reputation is too low to promote it widely.

The beginning was really good, but after leaving the Five Zang Temple, I felt a little anxious. The plot was a bit too fast and too jumpy.

Alas, Erya is still dead. I thought the protagonist could save her, but I felt uncomfortable watching it.

Come on, author, becoming a great god is not a problem

After the film was released, all the plots had too many coincidences. They were all deliberate coincidences and were not handled well, making people feel weird. . . It was pretty good before I started school

I just finished reading it and voted for the monthly ticket. Why did I decide to cut it?

Even if you cut it, fill in these holes 😅😅 Otherwise, how can people dare to read your book in the future?

The previous style was very different from the current style. It was like two different styles.

Shennong is here. I visited this place and decided it to be a masterpiece. I have seen 40 chapters so far.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Shennong is here. This book is okay and I can read it smoothly. There's nothing poisonous about it either.

The author is also a talent. With only 130,000 words, I want good results. You are a newcomer with this account. You have no foundation and no platform to start. It is normal to not have good results. Many popular novels also have poor previous results.

It's too tiring to follow updates every day, too few

Keep writing, what's going on? After writing this, won't there be some fans and readers? Don't think about making a fortune from one book (it's better to buy a lottery ticket, which at least costs less). Authors worth tens of millions only make a fortune from a few books.

This book is very good, so why didn't I write it? How can I invest in it so that the author can continue writing it?

By the way, the author has quit writing online?