Hunter: Puppet Master

I have to say that it is a bit redundant to say that the reading ability is too buggy and it is not a system in the introduction. The release system, operation system and power shown by the protagonist are far stronger than the characters in the original work. As for sticking to the clouds, not to mention that sticking to the clouds is a bit unreasonable. Even if the clouds can be regarded as real objects, with hundreds of them, the height of the clouds requires the power and power of telekinesis that is not reasonable. As for the operation system, the power and difficulty of controlling the doll are a bit ridiculous. When releasing the system and adding the operation system, you need to consider breaking the defense, and when releasing the system and adding so many roots, it is even more important to consider breaking the defense. Just like the Tianjin rice clone's power to defeat Wukong is obviously reduced, and the power of Maggie's mind line is also reduced due to the lengthened length, and it cannot even be released easily. The golem is similar to Catwoman's puppet, but Catwoman's control of the puppet is not only imperfect, at least what Catwoman controls is basically a corpse, but also requires the consumption of manifest energy, and at the same time, Catwoman's minimum gas guarantee is 750,000. Therefore, the protagonist's manipulation is a bit ridiculous. If he specializes in puppets, the number must be extremely limited, and it will decrease as the control flexibility increases. As the number increases, it is characterized by coercion, so there is a high probability of being controlled and causing serious damage. For example, Ilmi's Needleman is destroyed at the same time as it is controlled. Another example is Chrollo's theft. The person who was stolen from was as easy to die as if his head was dropped. Based on the current King Selection chapter, especially the semi-awakened characteristics of the Ninth Prince's private soldiers, even if it meets the prince's telekinesis ability, there is a distance limit. Obviously, when the Ninth Prince shoots an arrow, the private soldiers who are not present will not be affected. A more suitable operating system and puppet is the wedding of Ilmi and Hisoka, which is probably similar to the shackles of President Biyande. If you read it in conjunction with the following, I feel that the author's understanding of the ability to read is too wild and unrestrained, which is somewhat incompatible with the rigor of the original work. So I still made an obvious problem. If I want to write without cheating, I don't have a system, but my understanding of the original work and my ability to develop it are not suitable. But I dare not say that this effect is obtained by cheating, it is extremely awkward.

To be honest, it would be better to just let the protagonist eat the thread fruit, which is more reasonable.

As mentioned above, the operating system can only develop 40% of the change system. The strength of the thought thread can be hung on the clouds and move people around. It's outrageous.

The veteran author has collected less than 300 books within 13 days of publishing. Three books have been put on the shelves. He has written 1.5 Million words and is still a lv1 writer. What about grinding the iron pestle into a needle? What if the code is written to a million words and turns scrap metal into a master? I have recently started writing hunter fan fiction, and I feel sad. I don't mean to be sarcastic, at least two of your books have been put on the shelves, and this one has been put into storage. I am a newbie and have collected 30,000 words and 11 TATs in 6 days, which is a cross. The agreed-upon fan fiction will bring its own traffic. The agreed-upon writing of the fan fiction will be 30,000 words. How about just one or two hundred collections? When the cross is hooked, I will cut it and go back to drill the screws safely. Come on, author.

He was offered a reward of 100 million for not killing anyone and silencing him. In desperate circumstances, he ran to the telepathic people of the gray and dark forces. He was also known to have a reward on his head and was not afraid of being killed. Don't let the devil protect yourself. ＜Also explains that mortals can't kill you, and those with telekinesis will not kill you unless they catch you＞What kind of brain is this? Mortals can't kill you with weapons or martial artists or numbers of people, and telekinesis people can't kill you. <I thought 100 million anime coins are very few, but 100 million is a lot. Those with telekinesis will be tempted, let alone mortals＞It's written as a low-intelligence article

The enemy, the troupe, and all kinds of hunters all attach great importance to money. On the contrary, the protagonist written by this author does not care about money. Although the protagonist has the attributes of a bandit, he cannot write it randomly. <The author also said that money is only slightly better than toilet paper. Wait for a stupid idea. Can you buy toilet paper without money? You are a person like Wo Jin who doesn't need money and relies on robbery for everything. If so it would make sense.

Why does it feel like Doflamingo's ability?

This is the same old routine. The author has feelings for the brigade! The bandits in the brigade should not have feelings, and there is no need to hate them. It's better to take another way

It is said to be a normal work, but the writing is completely abnormal. The six major system diagrams were created The author should like this and this, but in fact it is irrational and abnormal. ＜Say one thing and do another＞

People in Meteor Street don't respond to laxatives, and laxatives don't work. People in Meteor Street only have antibodies to various bacteria. <Killua is fine because the enemy has a system to resist various poisons. Killua has been given antibodies since he was a child. Strong masters of the enhancement system like Wo Jin, or special practitioners, were all poisoned to the point where they could not move. ＞Is there any reason why Meteor Street doesn't respond to taking laxatives? At most, it's better than the average person.

It's just that when I write hunter novels, I always write about young hunters, and I only know a little about them. He doesn't even understand the binding oath, so he is writing it randomly and using it to develop powerful telekinesis abilities. The restrictive oath can only be made by strengthening existing abilities, and by internally accepting the constraints and believing that you will abide by them.

Three conditions are required to develop telekinesis ability: 1. The total energy capacity may also be more strictly the displayed energy volume. How much manifested energy does it take to activate a telekinesis ability? If the continuous manifested energy is not enough, how can it be developed? Two: It is memory. Memory is brain capacity and IQ. In reality, if people exceed the capacity of their brains, their brains will crash. Three: Understanding of mind. One: In addition to the various conditions for activation, the conditions are naturally extensive, and the more stringent the conditions, the more powerful the telekinesis will be. Two: Systematic understanding of developed thoughts and understanding of physical sensations. Three: Reduce the function and power of mind ability, which means creating more shortcomings. ＜It is absolutely impossible for the author to activate his telekinesis ability, and his understanding of telekinesis is a novice＞

The absolute time for development is to add the cost of conditions to the ability before developing the telekinesis ability. It requires awareness and recognition to add the cost of activating the ability, which reduces the difficulty of development and increases the power. A restrictive oath must be observed voluntarily. It can be breached, and you can accidentally forget to observe and activate the ability. If you breach the contract, you will have to bear the price of backlash, and you may lose your telekinesis.

There are normal hunter novels that are good-looking and have reasonable logic and IQ, and even hunter fans who spend hundreds of dollars are not disgusted at this time. Why do you think the current hunter novels are so juvenile, with abnormal logic and IQ and low juvenile? Memory: The memory of ordinary hunters is too small and the four major skills are not good at basics. Naturally, they cannot develop the second thought ability. That is, most anime hunters have one kind of telepathy ability. There are also people who have developed the ability of first thought, but they cannot use it at all, so they use other methods to use the ability.

The novel is also abnormal. The author's IQ is not good, he makes the protagonist look stupid, and uses complex reading skills that he cannot even use, and the plot is rubbish. Let's start from the beginning of Chapter 50, about the Dark Continent and the five major disasters.

I can't do it anymore. This book friend's crazy output of 20

The enhancement system is not good: the enhancement system has a single ability and is not suitable for repairing other systems, otherwise the strength will be reduced. The operation system is not good: the operation system is not suitable for frontal combat, and is more secretive. It would be boring to fight head-on like Ilmi and Xia Ke. Not good at the transformation system: It is difficult to practice the transformation system. Killua has been using electricity since he was a child, so it is too difficult to give him the nature of qi. I don't know how to add too much non-context to the added ability of the present system, and it is not suitable for writing about direct battles. The release type is simple, can fight head-on and can fight at medium and long distances, is easy to write, and the telekinesis ability is not surprising. In addition, the memory of the time traveler writing and devouring souls has greatly increased. The three-level telekinetic bullets of the training release system are made by digging vertical mouth-like shapes in the center of both palms to increase the launch speed, and then strengthening the self-strengthening system to increase the power: the third layer is a fixed bullet with five ping pong balls, and the second layer is a fixed bullet that is larger than the Leza bullet or the size of a basketball. In the first level, the Ant King fires the accumulated telegrams and then turns them into light beams to keep the speed from slowing down. Someone has done these animations before, and they won't be surprising. Nian beasts cultivate five auxiliary functional Nian beasts with different attributes. This will not affect the release system training, and the memory knowledge will not pimp each other and affect the upper limit of release. The lack of power and accuracy of other systems does not affect combat. It is a auxiliary function and does not require continuous training to increase power and development. <The release system is based on position exchange, and the strengthening system is based on healing ability. If you can add accelerated treatment before developing the ability, which will consume life span, that is also okay. The transformation system is a mind beast that assists daily practice. Operate Ito to fuse with the Nian Beast and manifest the Ito Flying Sword into a semi-automatic and semi-remote controlled flying sword that can seat three people. In the manifestation system, the released telekinesis beast is connected to the leopard-like telepathy space, and the telekinesis beast's mouth is used to suck people into the space. The telekinesis ability can resist the inhalation, and the stronger the strength, the more resistant it can be. If possible, connect the ears and eyes of the mind beast to the space wall. Let the people inside see the sight and hearing of the Nian beast, and release the Ito Nian beast to connect the space. This Nian beast also joins the replacement of dead objects, but it cannot be more than twice its own size, and cannot be replaced less than half its size. Suitable cobblestones can be stored in the space, and can be replaced and escaped by spraying it from the mouth. Because the coordinates of the Nian beast's death and instantaneous space are unchanged. <These mind beast abilities must be single and simple, otherwise they cannot be developed. Naturally, telekinesis beasts cannot be developed in one step. If the ability is attributed to the special ability of the telekinesis beast, it will not affect the memory too seriously, nor will it affect the subsequent growth of the telekinesis type. …

No. 1 And No. 2 Can only be turned into three cards. After clearing Leza, Leza will leave. It means that there are only three cards No. 2 And cannot be refreshed. Maybe Greedy Island can allow up to three people to pass the level. It is also possible that one person cannot pass the level after clearing it.

This plot is actually illogical. How could a mortal gain such power? Reached the 200th floor so quickly. ＜This was written by the cartoonist without thinking for the sake of the plot> Later, when Gon Killua entered the game and did not practice to increase his energy, his sudden increase in energy was also needed by the plot. In the Chimera Ant chapter, he had not mastered the scissors and paper guessing skills, but when he went to practice with Kate, he suddenly knew how to use scissors and paper. The increase in strength was also needed by the plot. According to the anime timeline, Bu Nao said he was practicing in the game, but he didn't write it down. I can't find any reasonable reasons or details {"LinkId":"35694","LinkName":"Red envelopes from the sky Post a plan to get rich!","LinkUrl":"QDReader://ataru. Qidian. Com/noah/457808657?_Viewmode=0&page=draw"} There are problems with the strength growth of the entire four-person protagonist group, and other problems.

Every Hunter fanfic has a problem, that is, they are going to the Dark Continent. Once they are written, they can basically be cool.

If there is a score, I think it is unqualified, and the ability setting is complicated. Although it is said to be a battle of wits, in many cases, you just set the difficulty for yourself. It doesn't feel like a victory brought by a battle of wits at all 😅 And the demon still retains its independent thinking, which is a failure. It would be more interesting to simply set the demon to become a clone that one can control.