Basketball: My Brother Is a Veteran

The writing is too messy and cannot be put together at all. The reading experience is extremely poor. My evaluation is not as good as AI. Moreover, the literary youth is very ill. It feels like motion sickness when reading. Retreat!

Can the author stop talking so much nonsense? More than half of it is popular science knowledge.

Let's change the beginning. What's even more outrageous than the star experience card is that the beginning doesn't include the key points. There are so many words in the first three chapters, isn't it just one chapter, time, place, protagonist's situation, golden finger. Have you deceived people into the job and started the whole thing? Which editor did the signing? I'm so suspicious that his hands are shaking.

Brother, you are writing songs, making games, and investing. Do you want to play basketball anymore?

How to say it. This book looks like a shit was shoved into my brain 🧠

It's so well written. There must be half of the chapter filled with water.

Too much nonsense, my head hurts from reading it

It's a bit like AI, there's a lot of nonsense

There are too many bad jokes and they are too offensive. It's not that they're bad, it's that they really don't understand readers' tastes.

This way of writing is a style from a long time ago, the kind of self-talk😰

The idea is good, starting from the NCAA, but it is too literary, the pace is too slow, the progress is too slow, there is too much nonsense, it is too watery, it is not interesting, and it cannot attract readers.

Author, your writing is quite good. When I first started reading it, your writing was too bad at the beginning. I also criticized you, but in the end I found that your writing was smooth and deleted the previous comments. Your book was too messy at the beginning, so I didn't get the bonus. Now the results are very poor. If you can't persist, you can start a new book. Your subject matter is quite good, but your system's entertainment is too exaggerated.

You see, the writing has been pretty good recently. Some popular science is covered in one stroke, no need to be particularly detailed. It would be nice to write more about competitions, and then intersperse some simple daily life, and your book will be up and running, right?

Please change the beginning, it's too broken, don't commit the literary youth syndrome.

I can't cut it, it's full of verbosity. Maybe the author thinks it's humorous. There's very little content that actually describes basketball. It's so bad now that I can't even think of putting it on the shelves.

Rubbish novel. So much waste! ! !

The new book is a masterpiece and has been finished, but the Qidian editor has left it unfinished.

Find a new book and click on it. Updated 13 days ago. It's awesome.