NBA: Starting from Participating in the Draft with the Base Team

It was hard to play without you, and it was still hard to play with you here, so what's the point of having you 😰😰Every time, the winner is decided at the last moment, and people who watch it are a little tired of it.

In fact, I really like this kind of basketball article that is not about yellow people. Unfortunately, the author's writing is too boring. More than half of the chapter is introduced, and a lot of common sense needs to be introduced.

Too watery. . . . . Really, I participated in the event before the summer league and played more than ten chapters in singles. Also awesome

I'm still trying to suppress my combat power, but I also want to give the protagonist a chance to defeat me. I have to give him skills with a lot of restrictive preconditions, which is really awkward.

After reading it, tell me your feelings. In terms of the overall writing, it feels like Che Lunlun is talking back and forth, oh well, it's verbose. I don't know if it's the numbers intentionally or the writing style is just like that?

Repeating the word "water", it's plain and simple, I can only say, you can see it! Author, you 🤔 come up with the results? Still writing it for fun! There is only one chapter every day, no communication, no promotion.

It's been over 200 chapters, and the second season is over. The protagonist still doesn't know how to pass the ball. He's even better than Kobe in terms of picking off the pass button.

The author's writing is a bit verbose, and it looks very much like a running prose recording a person talking to himself. No ups and downs~~retired

The novel is fine, but I suggest the author write more about daily life. Every chapter is a competition, and I am tired of aesthetics.

The preseason started in Chapter 30. The first thirty chapters can be said to be filled with water to the extreme. He had explosive statistics in his high school career, but because he was robbed in a convenience store and ended up killing two people, his reputation was not good. What kind of plot is this?

I'm still speechless. Will I still fight next year?😅

I finally read a basketball article that is not Chinese.

The writing is a bit bad, it's too undercutting the Knicks, this lineup shouldn't be so rubbish.

I didn't want to write it at first, but at the end I just made a few sentences and jumped to read it. The author must have checked a lot of basketball information, which is quite good. But it may be related to my personal reading habits. I feel that the author's writing power is not enough, and the writing seems long-winded and not smooth enough. Some things can be explained in one or two sentences, but the author writes a long list, which seems cumbersome. Let's look at the rest later.

A whole chapter is filled with analysis of various matchups and tactical responses before the game, and then tells you the result of the game and the process of the game in one sentence: Omitted, brother, you should change your career as soon as possible

Could you give me a little more introduction to your book? A sentence of dialogue is followed by an introduction to the characters' relationships for most of the chapter. Am I here to check the information? If I really wanted to see it, wouldn't I look it up online? I can't tell the difference at all.

It's well written, the protagonist's personality is pretty good, and it fits

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Fourteen chapters were written in one week and I didn't finish a regular season game.

When writing the chapter about the competition, can I shorten my name by a few characters? For Pat Riley, just write Riley. For Alan Kidd, I can write Allen. Regardless of the protagonist or supporting character, they all have their full names. Is the number of characters calculated based on the name? It was written with the help of AI.

This author seems to like to show off his grammar and feels that he is very good at writing this, including: burying an inexplicable baggage at the beginning that took several chapters to uncover, introducing Marbury's attributive words in three paragraphs before finishing, and explaining the protagonist's thoughts must be analyzed from a third-party perspective. . . . . It's too tiring and boring to read, and I don't have any sense of empathy at all.

Running account, go practice writing more! There are too many words like this in one paragraph.

Brother, please give me more trouble. Write well and write more!

It's a bit of a running account... It doesn't feel as satisfying as it should be.

I stopped watching when I saw the coach was replaced by Larry Brown

Although I know the title of this book is Kidd, I caught up with the latest book. In addition to being a cousin of Kidd, Kidd has no role at all in this book. . . I feel like the author, if you changed the title of your book to "Hang on the Wall, Beat Jordan to Team Up" or "Rebirth, I Am Jordan's Nightmare", it would be better than what you have now, right?

Do you need to learn more about basketball when reading basketball articles? There is a lot of popular science in the game. The game is sparse and there is no sense of enjoyment at all.

The writing is good at the beginning, but it just stretches my crotch at the end.

Do you want to be the protagonist and have Nash control the ball in the core style of play? Nash hasn't defended yet, so the protagonist comes to play without the ball?

I really like the main character setting of this article! Even if you speak with the modal particle "Fuck", it's too much!