Konoha: This Uchiha Relies Entirely on Technology and Hard Work

Five-star writing style, this is called a time traveler. Come on, come on, come on!

In so many Naruto fanfics, the main character's kaleidoscope ability is the most useless thing I have ever seen.

The author is too anxious and wants to provoke everyone. It has only been less than 40 chapters. How many people have appeared, how many maps have been switched, and a one-year time period has been set for the protagonist to force the protagonist to increase the rationality of his actions. The pace of this article is too poor. Due to the fast pace, the character control is also very poor. Thanks to the original work, I can still read it now. If I continue writing like this, it will collapse sooner or later.

This kaleidoscope eye technique is too powerful.

In this way, if the fourth generation still dies, this book will be gone. Obviously, it is best for Uchiha and Konoha that the fourth generation does not die.

In the later stage, you can try to use the moon as a base station to display the infinite gods, radiate the entire ninja world, and engrave the ideological stamp of "love science" and "loyal to yourself" in everyone's hearts. Then he used the Infinite Tsukuyomi to open the virtual metaverse and directly instill scientific knowledge into everyone in the entire ninja world using the method of instilling knowledge in the Matrix. Then using cloning technology to clone Bai Zetsu as a productive force, and the people of the ninja world as per capita scientists, use the infinite Tsukuyomi's virtual metaverse to link everyone's brains to form the prototype of a synaptic condensation machine (brain computer array), and call on computing power at any time to serve scientific research work. Under this model, I don't believe that the technology tree cannot reach the Otsutsuki Civilization. 😏

The Sharingan is the eye of the mind, analyzing the process by which the three magatama become kaleidoscope, and then reversing the process. Then study Zero-Tail's ability to absorb negative emotions. When the time comes, you can have whatever abilities you want, a weakened version of the power of I Xunsi 🤓, and then study and copy a large number of three magatama, and then merge them into planet-level ones. Use the developed ability of zero-tail to absorb emotions to penetrate and travel through the obsession of the world. Can you wake up? A kaleidoscope ability that can travel through time and space? See if you can embark on the infinite flow of the heavens 😏

The author's sense of rhythm is too bad. The protagonist keeps changing pictures, and nothing is fully explained. The book uses a lot of changing events to try to cover up the fact that he wrote a running account.

Wouldn't it be better if you set this setting directly to [Inherent Temporal Control]? Not only is the intensity adjustable, but there is room for upgrades. If it doesn't work, [Random Money Removal] + [Interior World] can actually be used.

The protagonist Kaleidoscope can look for the Ten Fist Sword and the Eight-foot Mirror. The lines of the Uchiha brothers fighting Orochimaru and Black and White Zetsu mentioned that they were separate artifacts. It shows that Naruto's spiritual weapons can be integrated into Susanoo. I don't know how to integrate them, but Kishimoto's biological father is treated like

The giant blood chakra eye is so troublesome to carry around, so it is better to make the protagonist resonate with the giant blood chakra eye remotely. You can remotely use the power of the giant blood chakra anytime and anywhere, and then refer to the reincarnated eye chakra mode to create the giant chakra mode to awaken the giant chakra eye's exclusive pupil technique.

As for the protagonist's imagination of the kaleidoscope, the protagonist's current kaleidoscope seems to be a bit low to be honest. Don't say sorry, the unique eye technique is not even comparable to the ordinary kaleidoscope. How can he have the nerve to occupy two eyes? However, I can also understand that if he is given an awesome eye technique from the beginning, and the protagonist also has Bai Zetsu to supplement his eye power, then he is basically invincible. The only thing I can do is, in terms of development, add more burdens. First of all, it is a thinking acceleration. I hope the author can understand the awesomeness of thinking acceleration. This ability is actually very awesome when used in combat. When I played shooting games before, I tried to adjust the game speed to 0.5. Enemies and levels that I couldn't beat before can easily pass with full health. Also, what is thought acceleration? It is the adjustment of human perception of time. What is this? The sense of time is the seventh sense, and the ability of Chakra can actually be affected by human thinking. The most common one is the change of the five attributes of Chakra. Ninjas only give these changes to Chakra by imagining that Chakra has these attributes. But in fact, if you think about it carefully, you will find that Chakra can actually change any attribute. I don't know if the author has seen the animated version of Saint Seiya. In fact, the animated version of Saint Seiya's small universe is more like a sense of time. Their moves are to increase their sense of time to the speed of light, and then use it to launch attacks, so their moves cannot be defended, so Saint Seiya will not be defeated by the same move for the second time (so you know, author...)

Uchiha Hikaru's ability is the Eight Thousand Spears, and Tsukuyomi and Amaterasu said it was given to him by the clan. Can the protagonist incorporate the ability to clone eyes into his own eyes, including Kakashi's divine eye?

The Uchiha family is full of time travellers.

Uchiha don't cause trouble. Is he worthy of being an Uchiha?

If you cultivate a few die-hard Uchiha fans with higher talents, you can't remain savages forever!

Why don't the books I read participate in the activities? If you want to get a title, you have to invest outside! Well!

Not bad, but the description of the confrontation between the protagonist and the enemy makes the protagonist seem timid and cowardly. Although not really a coward. Come on.

Why has no one compressed Susanoo's body size?

It is a farming novel, and there is no substantial plot advancement in a few chapters.

The update is not good, it's short

Orochimaru is really difficult to kill. Either the Ten Fist Swords are sealed to prevent him from being resurrected, or he is subdued. If there is no conflict, you might as well try to subdue him, but just because he is causing trouble for the protagonist every day, you can only relieve your hatred by catching him and sealing him with the Ten Fist Sword.

So when will Orochimaru be eliminated?

Let's write about the Deep Space fanfic. Your previous Deep Space fanfic was pretty good, but some of the worlds in the group are too biased. Healing and super gods are niche among the astronomical worlds, or they don't fit in with Eastern fantasy and martial arts genres like Deep Space. The Other Side of Deep Space has little pressure from fan competition, and even if it attracts a few readers of the original novel, it will still generate a lot of traffic. Deep Space fans write less, and everyone is more tolerant!

I can't choose words to form sentences. They all look like, although, but, after all, because, so, if, but... It gives me a headache just looking at these starting sentences. Some plots are written like an assembly line, and the sentences are too short.

Single and long, no? If you don't reply, there will be a pitfall by default.

Come on, update. How many times have you voted for the monthly vote?