I Join the Chat Group from All over the World

The author, the follow-up labor thinking has been frozen. Alas I only think about various contents that I think are very detailed, but in fact many of them are messy and not necessarily necessary. The main line has never been completely clear Obviously many small things have been brought over in one go to create more interesting and exciting plots But I have been stuck on those few small things and cannot get out. And it is said that they are from the same story, but in fact it is just one person The others can only be said to be other people with this name They have their own thoughts, and they are all wrong with each other, and they all want to suppress each other and be the boss The same goes for the protagonist, which gives people a very small structure and a very boring feeling. Some have been separated from the original intention of the article And the combat power has been stagnant in the early stage and has been unable to improve According to this situation, it will definitely collapse in the later stage Because if the combat power in the later stage is still very slow to improve, no one will read it So the combat power in the later stage will definitely improve very quickly, and then it will collapse after being unable to hold on I can only say that this book can only be used as a trial work, accumulate more experience, and strive to do better in the next book

The characters of some supporting female characters are too different from the original work. Chapter 45 was so disgusting that Wang Xuan had to tell those people in a nice voice that the female swordswoman here is so cute. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha 🤭

You dare to go to the other side of deep space and have an affair with Wang Laoliu's wife. Do you think Wang Laoliu is a vegetarian?

I don't really like angels. Especially after seeing Super Beast Arms. I really want to destroy the angels like Hades. 😜Personal opinion, please don't comment.

I regretted it a bit after I ordered it all. I originally came for the clone stream and the chat group, but the other clones didn't have any plots. They were all fan stories about the other side of deep space. The whole book could be read as a deep space fan. I regret it, I regret it extremely, sorry.

If you look at your colleagues, you are usually interested in your colleagues. Are you disgusting? What's going on? Taking advantage of people's popularity ruins people's books. The most annoying thing is people like you

The protagonist in Deep Space is not going to get anything, so let his subordinates practice first.

So far, there is no book on this subject that surpasses the Patriarch's journey through 99 worlds at the same time. The most popular one is this one with a chat group setting. The chat group is really a failure. It is not as concise as the founder's setting. It is really useless except for the word count. There are also the allocation of roles in each world that many authors wrote without thinking.

It's disgusting. The protagonist always steals the original protagonist's woman... It's disgusting. There are only a few women in this world, right? They have to take other people's women.

Author, please make the chapter names better, and author, why don't you bring in the Holy Ruins? The breathing method seems to be usable in deep space, right? And don't you build a melting pot?

It is not recommended to read. As a fanfic, the plot progress is too slow. The author is too ink. It took 180 chapters to write before Chaofan. In this way, I might as well read the original work. Many things in the front are not necessary to be written in such detail. Is it necessary to keep the word count? I skipped and read part of it. When I saw the breakthrough to Chaofan, I stopped reading. It is not recommended to fall into the trap.

Set the appearance of a chat group to forcibly raise the world level! To uproot the entire world when no one in the group becomes a boss, this setting might dissuade a group of people... Right?

The group is gone. Isn't he unhappy about the battleship hitting the Immortal? Does the water plot mean? Is this how top chaebol heirs operate? The heavens should use all methods to achieve their own goals. They should either fight to dominate the world, or they should just keep doing what they want and wait for the wind and cloud. I've been watching it for several days, and it's just two words: boring 😒

This mutation is very painful. All the worlds will undergo mutations, which makes me feel that this chat group is relatively low-key. The Taoist tools in the eternal life are not so loud when they cause trouble.

I suggest changing the title of the book. I have written more than 100 photos of Deep Sky so far. My assessment is that I have no desire to read it. I was writing the previous free chapters. What is the purpose of this chat group? I really didn't see it. When the world changes, I will subscribe to two more and see what happens.

I think the eternal sky boat in the world of Wu Tomb is the most suitable for the protagonist. Without the powerful foundation of the Eternal Sky Boat, it would be dangerous for a mortal like the protagonist to be able to open the giant whale in the interior. When the Extraordinary Center arrives, it will not only be people like Fang Yi who are targeting them, but also other terrifying entities. In the original work, Wang Xuan almost died when he encountered Fang Yi and the Dahei Tian Dao, not to mention the even more terrifying situation now.        ，，，， The weapon spirit of the Eternal Sky Boat will not transform or betray. If the protagonist dies, the weapon spirit will die as well. In case of danger, it can be directly transferred to the Eternal Sky Boat. The Eternal Sky Boat can not only open up various units, integrating offense and defense, but also does not require people to activate it. It has an energy pool and there is no limit to the energy source. Important family members and laboratories can be placed in the sky boat to prevent enemy destruction. Tianzhou's promotion is not limited by the master's cultivation level, and only requires resources. When advancing, he can also feed his master and improve his cultivation qualifications. You can open your own virtual market and collect all kinds of rare treasures. The unnecessary ones can be resold, auctioned, etc. The most awesome thing is that it can issue its own "Hongbi" Eternal B. Monks can also use Eternal B to practice and control the finance of the cultivation world.

When you update two chapters a day, you wrote six or seven chapters for one battle. You really challenge the readers' patience. If you have the guts, just continue.

Why does the protagonist Mao have to compete with himself in other worlds for dominance? Unless it's the kind of relationship that's set up to be antagonistic, would most people still compete with themselves?

After reading the latest chapter, it's generally okay. Let's talk about some of the problems I saw First of all, in terms of plot distribution, the author chose a primary and secondary allocation method, but the problem is that this primary and this secondary are much different. In the secondary world, there is no problem with Zhe Tian and Chao Shen, but in other worlds, there is no plot at all. As for the main world of Deep Space written by the author, do you think the readers want to see those broken battle scenes? You can write several chapters about the actual combat experience, and it is not a traditional cool article. The readers of this type of novel know that strength is to crush the enemy, and there is no excitement at all The second is world selection. I really don't understand the author why you added mixed martial arts and healing games. I summed it up, there are two interesting things about novels in the same genre, one is the invincibility in the respective worlds after sharing power, and the other is the chemical reaction produced after the collision of multiple world systems. Since you, the author, chose a chat group without power sharing, then you are choosing the second option. Since this is the case, then when choosing a world, it should be at the same level. So, what help can healing games and mixed martial arts bring? This also leads to the plot distribution problem I mentioned earlier. What is the use of the mixed martial arts world? Even if it is a fairy, it is at the level of a battleship at most. What is the use of healing games? I only read the beginning of this book and don't know what it will be like later on. Maybe it's not weak in strength, but it probably doesn't have any skills. Even if you like the author, you can write it in the later stage. In the early stage, I'm just a pushover. I don't know what the use is. There is also Zhetian. Although the author noticed that the Zhetian method does not work in other worlds when you wrote it, the problem is that other world exercises such as Yi Jin Jing should not actually work. Since the author has patched the pre-Qin root method to be universal, then the root method should also be able to run the Zhetian method. Hurry up and write it out. Otherwise, I feel that only Deep Space and Super God are useful in the group, and the rest are just bastards As for the last part (I wrote too much before and forgot what to say, let's talk about a little problem), the heroine, since the protagonist is afraid that Wang Xuan didn't want to marry Zhao Qinghan, then the protagonist still has so much ambiguity with her? And that Zheng Ling, people who watch this kind of fanfic don't really want to watch the original heroine.

I started writing not long after Goodfellas finished. If nothing else, I'll support it first and then watch it this time next year.

I haven't read Deep Space yet, so I barely read a few chapters, but it's all in vain. . .

The chat group was eaten? What did you write? This is so bad. A big mecha can write more than ten chapters.

Emmm, I suggested changing the title of the book to The Other Side of Deep Space and I joined countless of my chat groups.

It's okay, but it's just a bit watery. The author writes some solid information. Don't be watery. Not many people read it. There is no one in the water.

I had already guessed that it would be discontinued. (This setting is equivalent to writing another book.

If my group is gone, the world will be boring and destroyed.

I feel cheated, and I completely miss the essence of the clone flow.

First of all, I have only read 9 chapters and the table of contents, so this cannot be regarded as a negative review. It is just a personal mark. I personally feel that it is very inconsistent if the simultaneous time-travel stream cannot be shared. In addition, the group member world at the beginning is complicated enough except for the variety of martial arts except for covering the sky. Adding that the other two are novels that I have never heard of personally, it feels like I am listening to a pirated new original work, which is very inconsistent and embarrassing. In addition, one of them is the main world that accounts for the most content, which makes me have no desire to listen to it. That's about it. I will withdraw it first.

There is no Chendong flavor at all, and the other side of deep space is not interesting. The pace of the original work is too fast.

If you have enough water, the improvement in the front is extremely slow, so forget it...