Douluo Peerless: Starting from Summoning Mirror Stream

It's so bad. I recruited a bunch of second-game characters with unknown meanings. It's obviously Dou Er's book. If I don't write the main plot of the third game well, I'm going to fix the Holy Grail War and Dou 1😅

Ah? Do you also help people like Ma Xiaotao? Author, don't tell me that she is also the heroine.

Instead of spending so much words describing the Soul Fighting Competition in Dou Er, it would be better to use the same number of words to describe Dou Yitai Tang San.

Don't be Shrek and Huo Yuhao's bitch

The protagonist is also a hypocrite, and this is the necessary price to pay for his reputation. Just like Lai Gushi, he said he wanted to upgrade the world, but he didn't do it to gain the power of reality. He did it to Tang San, but he didn't do it to snatch the world from his hands. When a disaster occurs, it is the disaster that kills you, not me! But you can save me! It's because he can't be saved, or he's incapable of saving it. It only creates tragedy, but it actually saves us!

After reading more than ten chapters, I felt that the author wrote too hastily and summoned characters too frequently. The appearance of the original characters is also quite magical. You go from the seaside city to the forest, from the Star Luo Imperial City to the forest, and from the academy to the forest. You said that the Star Dou Forest is quite big. You guys enter from different places. You should not encounter each other. The plot you arranged here, including the later ones, is quite intellectual. There is no need to contact the original plot characters in the early stage. You are already the city lord at the beginning. Just develop yourself honestly. Reasonable plot contact can still be watched. Why do you need to write a lord story if you just want to participate in the plot?

Some of the current Douluo novels lick Tang San like a dog and torture Tang San's stallion

It's over after you finish watching the chicken, and then there's a mess. He forcibly created two enemies for himself, and asked the Black Tower to come out to analyze why he wanted to unite the entire civilization. The unity of two extermination kings would be very fast, otherwise it would take more than ten or twenty years. Why don't you live that long? It's disgusting that thousands of boneless people died for your solidarity.

Since the protagonist respects Ma Xiaotao's choice, then don't save people afterwards, because it is her own choice. At least she should be punished for exhausting her potential due to over-burning her vitality and then being punished for being the messenger of death and failing the competition (in the original work, winning the competition only offsets the merits and demerits, and is not recorded in the file)

This Holy Grail War is all about a bowl of vinegar and a plate of dumplings, and then it overturns. The protagonist has no role at all. The reason why the defense is not broken is that the author does not write about him breaking the defense.

Why do most Dou Er have Ma Xiaotiao? I really can't like her character.

The protagonist was born before Tang San. Tang San was raised in Douluo. The protagonist made a excrement-making machine.

I really can't stand it anymore. The co-author didn't even consider that the King of Extinction would be summoned as a servant, right? He didn't limit the selection of servants, and he didn't consider that the negative energy obtained by the Black Tower in the black hole would make the servants super powerful. He didn't take a look at who the servants were for the abstract reason of "surprise"?

It's really been shit since the beginning of the Holy Grail War. At the beginning, I still resisted watching it, but later I saw that I couldn't bear to let Huanhuang go. He also said that he wanted to integrate and be the benchmark as the savior. What's the difference between you and Tang San? It's disgusting 😰😰

You can make a patch. The characters are embodied, and full realization requires more real power. Therefore, if the characters are weakened, they can be strengthened with the power of reality. This way, frequent embodiments will not lead to too many characters and it is impossible to describe each one.

The protagonist is seeking death, and he has no ability to finish the story. In the end it just blew up with a bang. The protagonist's growth rate cannot keep up with the strength of the version! The floor tiles in the fantasy world of Douluo Continent are first Huo Huo's parallel world, and then Huo Huo's main world. The intensity is too high. If Douluo Continent's Douluo is one, the blackened ones will be at least five. So many disasters can be dealt with by the two gods Alicia. The main world has collapsed, and the combat power is unequal. Although they are all projections, Xingxiao and Huanhu are the real envoys. You have to rely on Jingyuan and Feixiao to deal with at least Marshal Hua!

Add settings everywhere and introduce a bunch of new characters to bulldoze. Oh my god, it's so exciting. It's so exciting. I just need to fill in the main storyline and emotions with my feet.

TMD it's finally not Huo Yuhao. There are 10 peerless books and 7 Huo Yuhao books. They are all the protagonists. TMD you Huo Yuhao is useless. You were the king of cheats in the first place. However, all the time travelers like soul-transportation. Huo Yuhao also added various cheats. With so many configurations, even dogs can play with them.

It was fine in the early and middle stages, but it was chaotic in the later stages. It was so chaotic that I didn't even know what I was looking at. I couldn't figure it out at all.

Don't the author think there are too many characters added? The more you write like this, the more useless it becomes, right?

This book is almost finished. Hurry up and update it. You can't finish what you're writing now.

The solitary wave algorithm, whose formula is written all over the surface of the planet, was solved by Heita when he was about 14 years old. Douluo gave Heita a year and took off with the protagonist.

Are you okay in the early to mid-term? When I hunted for the first soul ring, I clearly felt that the author's writing skills were not good - When I saw Jiujiujiu, you could say that he was superficial and civilized, but he said he was very respectful When he was praised by Xu Jiujiu, he was very humble When I saw the description of these two scenes, I could tell that the protagonist could not be written well - let's describe it this way, the protagonist in his writing The character will never have the domineering look of a king, but after being humble, he still has to explain that he is arrogant (it cannot be reflected, so he started to explain in voice-over) In the later stage, he can clearly label himself as a fun person and create an army of annihilation, just to watch the drama, but in the end he has to be the savior - haha Here I recommend reading the Lord of Spirits, the book about Bai Erta. They are very good - when they say they want to be Hogus, they write it clearly and do not add a narration to show off themselves The gap between the two books is definitely a bit big - for example, when I see that the protagonist's martial spirit is the Black Abyss White Flower, with the power of destruction and creation, I always think of the God King of Destruction and Life - but in that book, the God King of Destruction does not like Bai E because of Bai E's own power of destruction, but because of Bai E's own power of destruction. In order to create a better tomorrow with the concept of destruction, I fell in love with Bai E - in that book, Xiadie was not favored by the gods of death and life because of the power of death, but because of his respect and love for life and his tenderness towards death.

The first time I invested so much🤭🤭🤭

What do you call Huo Yuhao and Xiao Wu's child? This is really too weird.

One is that the Shit Pit War has too much text and the protagonist cannot control it; the other is that the death of the Yakuza is too hasty and not very enjoyable to watch.

Robin

Well, the protagonist is not completely bad, and the good is not pure, Chihiroji is second. The author has always liked to write about accidents, making things complicated again and again, and then forcing things to come back. He has become immersed in his own world. The little Douluo Star is short of an omnic natural disaster, so why write Douluo II! Wouldn't it be enough if you just write Bengtie fan fiction?

Jin tide

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