Douluo from the Auspicious Beast of Luck to the Dark Side of the Moon

Did the female channel come here? Your writing style is not suitable for men's videos. For me, fighting is fun. Almost all fantasy fairy novels must be inseparable from fighting monsters and upgrading. I don't know what you want to write in the first few chapters. You have been portraying the protagonist's psychological activities for the sake of portraying. And the writing power is not enough, I feel like a newbie, unable to grasp the direction of the story, I use a This is not the case with the Douluo who escaped from i. A good Douluo fan chapter 1 is to analyze the current situation clearly and clearly define your own development direction, arrangement of opportunities, ultimate fighting state, detailed portraits of the group, and the performance of the combat power system in the world view. Both the villain and the villain must have a certain IQ. Not many people are willing to spend money to watch brainless love on the Qidian male channel. For example, what is so cool about Douluo? First, the confrontation with the Tang San Group, second, the main line is clear and can be innovative and the upgrade battle route is acceptable to the public, third, the heroine of the Douluo series, etc., The most interesting of which are the first and second, and then interspersed with some plots of female characters, and if you are not good at writing, you can't write a domineering name for a spirit beast. In reality, jellyfish, octopus, whale, the original Douluo has the demon soul Great White Shark, Emerald Swan, Purple The Brilliant Destroyer Tianlong, the Deep Sea Demonic Whale King, and the Golden-Eyed Black Dragon King. Comparing the two is really unsatisfactory. There is no trace of the original work of Douluo. It feels like a cloud, just a trap. Then I will read a p. My suggestion is to read the original work of Douluo. If it is not possible, find a few high-quality Douluo fanfics to see the direction of the story and the arrangement of the characters.

There are two poisonous points. The first one is that the protagonist's adoptive father wants to be the protagonist's wife in the early stage. Later, the protagonist becomes his biological father. This is considered a poisonous point. The second protagonist's soul is eaten by God. God takes the main character's soul as the main character. The big one eats the small one, and the small one takes priority

Although the heroine novels are not necessarily all female channels, this novel is indeed a female channel.

The protagonist of Crimson Moon should not be a great evil god and let 99% of the people in Douluo Continent mutate into monsters

Come on, keep an eye on you😁

Growing upafter

It looks like this.

I want to know more about when this messy reincarnation will end?