Swallowing the Starry Sky: Starting from the Fox Demon to Trading in the Heavens

I really can't stand it anymore after reading chapter 130. The way the protagonist is portrayed feels very awkward. Maybe it's my fault, maybe I've read too many Shuangwen 🤔

It doesn't matter if the progress is slow. There is no quantification at all in Goldfinger. To put it bluntly, in the beginning, you were trading hundreds of people a day. Your talent has not changed much. Without quantification, it is convenient to control the combat power and plot, which is boring. . . .

This kind of deal is a deal, don't let the protagonist help because of the plot.

What I dislike most about Zhu Tianliu is the "sudden change in painting style". Hot novels, different novels by the same author, American comics and TV series, Japanese and Chinese comics, etc. It would be nice to specialize in one type of world, the style of painting will be more similar.

The description of the Devouring Starry Sky cultivation system is all wrong 😅

The protagonist is awkward, afraid of trouble, wants to become stronger, dislikes other people's ambitions, is it ambition to become stronger? Let's take a look after the author has finished writing. The character of the protagonist is difficult to describe in one sentence.

Spending so much space on the character Liu Ting is really a failure. If you ask readers how many of them like this character, most of them will skip it. The female character in the original work must be beautiful and famous, or strong enough to help the protagonist. And Liu Ting is not stubborn at all.

Shield——This is my boyfriend Haha, this plot knows how to screen readers

Does the author only write love rivals to support the plot? The worst thing about Swallowing Starry Sky is the story of a mentally retarded love rival.

Zhu Tianliu hates the plot being protracted.

It's only chapter 30, and I'm already writing about love... Man, man, a woman with a family business is usually not on the same page as you. Then just because you entered a state-owned enterprise, they started to approach you. He even came directly to your home the next day... Wearing training clothes and inviting you to run (Chapter 47)... Oh my God, is this a plot that anyone can write? Dude, have you ever been in love?

Author, your plot progress is so slow

The character of the protagonist is the expression of the author's character. It is difficult for a person with a dark heart to create a cheerful protagonist

Cultivating genetic energy in the world of matchmakers?

The writing is so bad that the only thing you can trade is to trade with a beggar or a trace of one of the three choices and an original character. You can make a hot and beautiful girl with a specific image but don't do it. The author knows how to make his grades bad.

They are still fighting over each other. The pressure is too strong. The water is like the sea. Thousands of people draw talents every day, but nothing changes.

There is actually a supreme demon in the copy? Would you like Lu Shengmon to come over and have a bite?

Wherever the protagonist goes, something happens. The protagonist is the same as the broom star.

Can the world of the fox demon Little Matchmaker cultivate the star-devouring gene source energy system?

Zhutianliu, every world must have cultivation support (core) and emotional help (beauty) for the protagonist. Some Zhutenliu novels where the protagonists are already very powerful go to worlds such as Legend of the Condor Heroes and are written in large lengths. Such unclear novels are dead without exception. In each world, it is necessary to refine the parts that readers like, such as those that can help the leader improve his cultivation and satisfy his beauty. If you can, don't write about other parts. The length cannot be too long, otherwise the novel will die.

All actions in the trading world are based on making the main world faster and stronger. But for the trading world, it's hard for me to understand without going to an elite training camp?

The author neither understands the fox demon matchmaker nor the swallowing starry sky. It is completely unclear about the combat strength of the two parties. The idea of ​​the fox demon matchmaker is too naive, and the plot doesn't quite match up. I guess I just have a general understanding.

The article is okay, not as good as the previous ones, but more than better than the lower ones. This kind of comparison is in the free novel software, gold mining in shit is in the middle and upper reaches. But in this kind of paid starting point novel, my evaluation is average. The plot is draggy and a bit cliche. In some places, it seems uncomfortable to read with your mind. 😔

I read the paid chapter, and thought it could be written better, but it turned out that it was not as satisfying as it was exciting. The protagonist also had many enemies, and it was the same in both worlds. It was disgusting, and forced to be brainless. I saw the shadow of the classic son-in-law, Dragon King novel.

The plot is slow, and there is no rough number for those talents. Hundreds of people can't come up with ten. The author has never understood the devouring setting when the battle force is so fierce.

There are huge problems with the setting, the character of the protagonist, and the writing style. I will never watch it again!

Looking at the introduction, there is actually a Jidao Demon?

I recommend a book by the Devouring fan "Swallowing the Starry Sky: My Comprehension Has No Limits". It's really good. I highly recommend it.

The ending is bad, but the book is not well written. The introduction is okay, but there is nothing left in the strokes.

I felt pretty good after reading the introduction, but something went wrong in the first world! I could never get out of it, digging too deep into the plot. As a result, it didn't even go out after it was put on the shelves. In the end, it was still in the world of fox demons after being cut off. If you really like fox demons, you might as well just write a book about fox demons in the main world, or just write a fanfic about fox demons.