Zhutian: Sharing Talents Starting from Chicken Island

The book can be a novice or a no-brainer, but if you play Douluo, there is no need to read it. The protagonist can defeat most immortals. You tell me that you can't beat Tang Hao. Wow, goodbye.

If you are not very good at emotional dramas, write less. Follow Duke's example and focus more on your kidneys and less on your heart. Use less of the kind of female characters that are popular with the audience. This way, you will be less likely to get into trouble.

The combat power is not quite right. The protagonist's strength is about 1,000 pounds. Is it a bit weak? In the country of St, the power of those robots inside cannot be less than two tons. Even if you have internal strength bonus, their peak technology should start at least ten tons, and it is possible to have thousands of tons. Shouldn't your strength be increased by more than ten times, otherwise the combat power will not be matched?

If the author has not finished writing the book, in the end, do not listen to other people's opinions casually. It is difficult to adjust the opinions of others. After making changes to cater to some groups, the original idea will not be as smooth as the original idea, but the quality of the work will easily deteriorate.

It seriously overwhelms the combat power. The Immortal Sword can defeat Demon Zunzhenglou, but it turns out that Douluo may not be able to defeat Titled Douluo. It's funny.

I really don't know how beautiful the female characters in Assassin 567 are. Plum Blossom Thirteen is not beautiful either. Why do you think she is a beauty? ? I don't understand whether it's my aesthetic problem or the author's aesthetic problem.

I read a few chapters and the writing was average, but the rest was okay. This kind of novel is basically an invincible novel. Either there is no role for the female protagonist, or the female protagonist's role is well written, and the original male protagonist's role is snatched away to seduce the female protagonist, which is very blunt. Wu Liuqi even kissed her at that time. Will the male protagonist also have a kiss later? It's really boring to rob the female protagonist using the same tactics as the male protagonist.

What did the person at the back write? Why would you use such rubbish words like Taoist priests in troubled times and monks in prosperous times? At present, one person and each sect may have their own calculations, but in times of national calamity, they basically fight for the country. There is no sect that retreats in the comics.

The description and performance of combat power in each world are unbalanced. I am speechless. The person who can defeat Demon Zunzhenglou only has the same combat power as Titled Douluo in Douluo? The combat power of the Demon King Tower cannot be easily pushed around in the pirate world? This brain is really not suitable for writing a book.

In Chapter 29, I'll chop Chiya to death, okay, okay, comfortable.

1. Black-hearted Tiger: No dispute, the strength is equivalent to 6.5 Swords. 2. Hei Xiaohu: It is also undisputed, and its strength is equivalent to the four swords without the later Hongmao. 3. Crazy Sword/Wrathful Sword single body: Black Heart Tiger's strongest caring guard, whose status is no less than Tiao Tiao. As a central official, he is definitely much stronger than the local officials Zhu Wujie and Niu Xuanfeng. Their external and internal skills are both good, and together they are even more invincible. 3. Golden Snake Jianma Sanniang: After all, she is the leader and deputy leader of the sect. Her external strength is strong but her internal strength is not as good as that of Zhu Wujie. Her battle record of losing against Zhu Wujie in a head-to-head fight is really shameful, but intrigues are also part of her strength. Personally, I think it's better than Tiao Tiao without using the Green Light Sword. 4. Tiaotiao without the green light sword: the second hall leader and the protector. During the Demon Sect period, Tiao Tiao could only fight with an ordinary sword, but his Qinggong was so good that he could defeat Niu Xianfeng without a green light sword. 5. Zhu Wujie: The Fourth Hall Master, his strength is good in the early stage and he has many big moves. If he is weakened in the later stage, he will only be equal to A. In the early stage, Zhu Wujie might be worthy of running with water and fire sticks if he was serious about it, but in the later stage, he was defeated every time he fought in a duel, and the whole team was now plotting. 6. Niu Xuanfeng: The third hall master is slightly stronger than Zhu Wujie in terms of hard power, but his strength is too limited. He and Zhu Wujie had both been singled out against Da Ben due to lack of intelligence. Niu Xuanfeng was unable to defeat Zhu Wujie without any plotting and his performance was even worse. . . 7. Five Elements Ninja alone: ​​too weak, only Golden Ninja and Wood Ninja are stronger. Without the five of them, Hei Xiaohu might have died at Five Swords Combined. 8. The Thirteen Taibo: The animal prototype of the Thirteen Taibo is a monkey, but because it is Hei Xiaohu's personal army, it is far stronger than the jumping monkey soldiers. And in the end, out of the Thirteen Taibao people, only one person was killed (caught to death by a mink). 9. Tiger Soldiers: Far inferior to the Thirteen Taibos, but stronger than other arms, including the Black Warrior, the Magnet Formation, and the most obvious one is the Seven Star Sword Formation. The leader of the Tiger Soldiers directs other Pig Soldiers to attack Da Ben. 10. Pig soldiers, ox soldiers, monkey soldiers, horse soldiers: ordinary miscellaneous soldiers should be stronger than most of Hongyong's people.

I haven't been able to watch it since Five Elements Mountain. I feel like you're here to take a shit, Fairy Sword? I heard that later Douluo can't defeat Titled Douluo.

The first few volumes were okay, but the plot of one person in the latter part started to become toxic. I couldn't stand it. I wrote it in such random ways and even changed the character. It was so toxic that I couldn't stand it anymore. I said goodbye. There was no logic. I probably didn't even read much of the plot related to one person. Xiao Zizai's master Jiankong was written as a despicable character. Damn, this author is using something personal 😅😅

The writing is mediocre, I can't tell what the pig's feet are trying to do, it follows the plot like a stream, and kills all the enemies that 567 beats. At first, he said he didn't want to cause trouble, but he was so reckless, and he took the initiative to get into trouble. At first, he said he wanted to improve his strength, and then he took the initiative to join in. He had no idea what he was doing. It was like he was trying to get into the main plot of 567.

The character of the protagonist is simply explosive. Everyone is drunk but I am alone, cynical and a typical egotist.

You can point out the mistakes in the main one without reading this chapter, but I just won't change it. Many of the words used also make people feel weird. For example, in the dialogue of the characters in the book, when a mouth opens, it may not be xxxxxx. Is this the word "maybe" used in this way... It's like AI...

I'm leaving. I felt good after watching Five Six Seven. I'm looking forward to the next one. I wanted to see one person, fox demon, etc., But it took me so long to write an animal world.

What the hell is this written under one person? He changed his character randomly and still believed in the words of Taoist priests and prosperous Buddhas in the troubled times on the Internet. What was going on in Longhu Mountain at the beginning can be known by looking up on the Internet 🤫

Demon Zunlou is not as good as Douluo. It was written based on the TV series.

The writing in the back is so bad, it feels like an earthling from Dragon Ball. He took a small pistol and killed the super god and super Saiyan Kakarot with one shot. He was still stupid and pretending to be B. It was so embarrassing...

It's too fake. You can beat Emperor Tian at level 99. Hasn't the author watched the second part?

The review is correct. The front is okay, but the world in the back is too much. The dialogue is useless, not to mention the combat power. It's a pity.

The word count is starting to get low, and this chapter of Fairy Sword feels very twisted.

There is a bit of fandom flavor in the front, but something is wrong as I write it. The removal of the CP is extremely stiff, and the mounting smell is too strong. Wouldn't it offend the fans of the original work by simply discarding the figure? It would be weird if someone who likes stallions doesn't scold him when he looks so green and healthy. What do you think the author is thinking if he offends both sides? ? If you don't clean up the finishing touches when you're pretending to be cool, you'll just turn into pretending to be a slap in the face. I like to see the protagonist's normal development, so it would be weird if I don't make a fool of myself!

According to my opinion, the plot quality of "The Legend of Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit" is really not bad. If the orcs can be removed and replaced with normal humans, it can be on par with most anime. If you add some childhood points, it can be as good as "Nine Dragon Balls"!

The first part is okay, but the second part is seriously watered down. The fights are tedious, and there is no initiative at all. It just waits for others to come to you. The number of words is bad, and the emotional scenes are also crappy.

Judging from the author's writing style, he should be considered a newcomer, right? Just write according to your own ideas. In the early stage of writing a book, you must pay attention to your mentality. After all, everyone has different opinions. As an old bookworm, I can only give verbal encouragement.

I met a 32-year-old sister on the Internet half a year ago. We got along very well. She was like a confidante in ancient times. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated. I said you have a family and I didn't feel comfortable meeting her. But she said it was fine and we were just ordinary friends. So I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty and had an S-shaped figure. In fact, she was not far from my city. We made an appointment. We met at a coffee shop and did not choose to meet anywhere else. I was mainly afraid of meeting an acquaintance. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for about an hour. While I was waiting for her, I looked at her photo and thought it was a "car rollover scene." She looked much prettier in person than in the photos, and she was my favorite type. She also recognized me and didn't know what to say. In order to break the awkwardness, she suggested hugging me. I said yes. She smelled particularly good and warm, and her heart rate was a little fast. After sitting in the coffee shop for a while, we went to eat. She basically didn't eat much. The whole process was She peeled shrimps for me, picked out fish bones, and when we walked out of the restaurant after dinner, she held my hand and I didn't break away. She said she would take me home. I said I would take a taxi back, but she insisted on taking me back. When I got off the car, she said give me a hug. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in my pocket, which said: Update ten chapters to unlock subsequent content.

Can't you finish writing one plot and start writing another?

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?