Demon Slayer: From the Start, I Inherit Wolverine's Template

By the way, isn't Wolverine's ability the one that Onimusi Muzan wants most? It can be called the final form of a ghost.

In the acceptance speech, the author said that this book did not do well. I personally feel that this is reasonable. After all, it is really easy to be thankless when writing fan fiction using original methods. When I read fan fiction, I want to see the protagonist and the original character interact, get along, have a chemical reaction, and work together to find the optimal solution. I also understand that when writing about Demon Slayer alone, you need to rely on originality to expand the world view and add depth to the story. However, the original characters written by the author took up a lot of the scenes in the early stage, and can even be said to be the prototype of a new protagonist group. I originally wanted to leave here, but the author's writing style made me still have expectations. After all, princes, generals and ministers, would you rather have the seed? As long as you give it some time, the original characters will be recognized as they become more fleshed out. Saboma Iori and Yoshikaku Morning Duel, their future can be looked forward to. As a result, the two people, who were used as tools to stimulate the protagonist, died one after another before they were completely shaped. Perhaps it is true, as everyone said in the chapter, that the author is suffering from literary youth. Of course I feel sorry for their passing, but in my eyes, it is more the author who touches himself. As for the chapters where Fang Hechen died in a fight, the author explained in the chapter description that because no one wanted to see it, the character was finished as soon as possible. Oh, it turns out that it didn't even move me. Then I have to ask the author, what do you think of human life? I don't understand. Do you have to die? I'm too injured and have difficulty breathing. I can't hold a knife. Will I be able to work in logistics in the future? Does the protagonist have to grow up if someone dies in front of him? The result is that the protagonist is burdened with the lives of his companions and is extremely depressed. As a reader, I feel aggrieved. It was written like this with a hook, and it wasn't very satisfying before it was put on the shelves. It also cost two people, so can this book achieve good results? Well, maybe it's because I don't like watching tragedies, so here I want to express my subjective feelings after seeing it now. I'm sorry that I went too far. I'm definitely not as good as the author when it comes to writing novels. Maybe there are some secrets to the plot hidden in the outline that haven't been shown yet. I sincerely hope that the story can be brighter and the situation clearer, otherwise the protagonist will look like this picture posted by a netizen in Zhangshuo:

Is the recovery ability of old Wolverine so weak?

No, bro, after describing so many original supporting characters, you took them offline so hastily? Originally, adding original characters to a fanfic is an act that needs to be considered very carefully. It will filter out some readers who don't like to read original characters. Then, the supporting characters who have been read for a long time and have been accepted by the readers are directly written out like tools, just to serve as a stepping stone for the protagonist. This is really unpleasant. How many people read the fanfic to watch the tragedy? There are many other ways for the protagonist to grow, but it is so simple and crude... But fortunately, the writing is not bad, but the plot design really needs to be reconsidered.

This way of writing seems a little bit literary and youthful.

I got the introduction, haven't read it yet. But why doesn't your profile title mention unlimited streaming at all? If it weren't for the fact that your profile is too big, and you are both 2B and a wolf, Wolverine is obviously enough to be singled out, but it feels wrong. I looked at your tags and found out that there is Zhutianliu 😅

According to this progress, I think the author will write hundreds of chapters. How can such a strong golden finger become so weak when placed on the protagonist? It feels like if placed on a pig, it will be destroyed in a few years.

The mental journey is too long, more than a hundred chapters, two friends have died, has the soul not completely transformed yet, has it always been so depressed? Originally, this world view, and the comparison with the ghosts' combat power, are enough for the underworld, but you are still wallowing in a dark corner and can't come out 😐

When reading fan fiction, readers tend to be more tolerant of the characters in the original work. Because everyone already knows the personalities of these characters and has expectations. Take the "Tsundere" character as an example. If it is a tsundere character who appeared in the original work, even if he only shows the "arrogant" side at first (such as being tough-tongued and losing his temper), readers will know that there will definitely be a "tsundere" reversal later on, so they are willing to wait and see how the plot develops. But the original characters are completely different. The female supporting character in this book is the author's original tsundere character. The protagonist saved her several times, but she didn't even say thank you, and always said that the protagonist was a fool and a brat... Even if readers could tell from a few words that she meant what she said, the author also clearly wrote that she saw the shadow of her younger brother in the protagonist, but everyone didn't see the "coquettish" part after waiting for a long time. Because they didn't understand, they couldn't tell when her character would become coquettish, and their patience quickly ran out. I just find this character annoying. It can be said that whenever she appears, many readers in the comment section are complaining about her. Two suggestions for the author: First, when she appears in the early stage, add a little "coquettish" details, such as letting her secretly blush, or hesitantly say a half-hearted thank you, so that readers know that she actually knows what she is thinking, and is just being tough (if she can't write this kind of thing, add a little more straightforwardness) psychological description); secondly, if it is really difficult to change her character, let her appear less often and don't take up so many scenes from the beginning... To be honest, when she appeared on the scene, I thought she was just a sidekick, but I didn't expect her to be played so frequently (I believe this gap in expectations is also one of the reasons why readers are annoyed with her). Besides, it involves spoilers, so please do your best, author.

I've got an update now. Currently, 7/10. Let's talk about the things that are a bit unsatisfactory to me here 1. The supporting role, Ghost's Memories, is a bit long and does not match the web text carrier. It's not that the author's writing is not good or his writing style is not good. It can be seen that the author has carefully read the comics and animations of Demon Slayer, and he also wants to express the obsession and regret after people become [ghosts]. However, in this regard, it is a bit too imitating the feeling of Demon Slayer - I will talk about this later - as far as this is concerned, it is not suitable to be published on the Internet. Readers will not want to know too much about the emotions and experiences of the dead ghosts who are indifferent to the sword of the protagonist. It is just that hateful ghosts must have pitiful qualities, and the supporting characters are given too many scenes, and the emotions of the climax will inevitably be inadequate. If you, the author, really want to write, then after it is put on the shelf, I suggest you integrate it at the end and then explode at the real climax. Don't have memories while fighting monsters. 2. Furthermore, let's talk about the memory killing scene that imitates Demon Slayer's killing of demons. After all, Demon Slayer is a Japanese comic. To be honest, the emotions expressed are relatively small. And if nothing else, everyone here should have read the comics. After this kind of ghost is killed, the gentle influence of the protagonist can regain the emotional quality of the person. I have learned too much, and the protagonist is from China, we are also from China, and the author is also from China. I just want to say now, if possible, please jump out of the category of small happiness and write our own values. In fact, I just finished the last book written by the author. There is a bit of a lack of good writing about the world in the end. Maybe I can make up for it now. 3. The processing of Goldfinger is a bit... What should I say, inheriting the character's talent is very cool. But now I'm basically getting beaten up by 2b. There was no communication. The author could have written a lot of content, but he didn't write it. Author Haji, you guy really moved me😭. Overall, it's a bit too unpretentious. I hope I can have more interactions with my cheats The above is a simple idea. Only represents personal views