Dazhufeng Laoqi, the Strongest Alchemist

Although it is said that paragraphing can reduce the number of words and make reading easier, which teacher taught you to segment it in this way? ! Messing around, repeating, randomly dividing into paragraphs... It's too terrible to read. If this problem is not solved, I am afraid it will be difficult to maintain a job as an online writer. Please take it seriously.

There are too many sections, at least for listening to books! Incoherent tone. The author makes great paragraphs and sentences

Alchemy, back and forth, over and over again, the old lady's foot cloth, nonsense literature taken to the extreme, not yet on the shelves.

These three or two words in one line are awesome, and I don't even know where they go together. It's the first time I've seen someone write a book like this.