When I First Entered College, I Became a Part-Time Nanny.

The author's writing style is very good, and he also writes well in daily life. emm.. As an old married man, he also likes mature women, as long as they are neither green nor turtles. But if there are many women around mature women, it will still be a bit awkward! From a somewhat macho perspective, the protagonist is Chu Ge who has never experienced emotions at the beginning, which is a bit unfair to him after all. Although in reality, ordinary people only need to have it, but this is a story written in a pen after all, and I think there should be some balance. Jiang Wanyi can be the heroine, but she is not suitable for reversal and reshaping, unless you are willing to change the details of the previous article, but if you have no obvious foreshadowing, the reader's impression cannot be changed. As for the theme of raising children, it is completely possible to use interaction to enhance daily fun. For example, Song Jianian interacts with Xiaomili, Fang Youning interacts with her nephew, etc., All of which have natural conditions.

The first thirty chapters are more eye-catching. New era style.

Additional refinement

The writing is smooth and the plot is natural. It is a daily novel that is very comfortable to read. There are many small plots and no big breaking points. The day 13 is not active. Children may be confused by the settings related to mothers and babies. Old bookworms should like it more.

A mother who has given birth to a child writes like a high school girl who has never been in love. You think it is her first love, and then she keeps dragging the progress and playing ambiguous. No wonder you read so many books

I hope the author will express his position. It can be an outline or how you want to write it. There is only one female protagonist, but as of the latest chapter, less than 10% of the content is about the female protagonist. What kind of heroine is she? The story is about a nanny, but the overall plot is not much. The little boy wrote a few chapters and then temporarily went offline. Mi Li did not write it separately, but basically brought some in each chapter (in fact, the content of the student union, dormitory classmates, external relations department, and even the driving school can be omitted at all, free of charge) Chapters don't matter, but if the paid chapters frequently appear in the whole chapter or if the content is updated in one day, it will easily lose the subscription). As a female supporting character, at least 60-70% of the content of the entire book is related to her. As one of the supporting characters, her role is too high. Readers are actually divided into several categories. Some simply like to watch and raise children, some like to watch the interactions of a single woman, and some like to watch a harem of multiple women. If the author cannot set the main character in the early stage, then the book will not do well even if you want to write a long novel. Now that it is a paid chapter, many readers will pay to read the follow-up plot, because there are very few such articles and the content is also very good. But it won't take long, probably about a week, or maybe half a month if it's longer. If some readers feel that the main line is not what they like, they will enter the book-raising stage. My current starting point for reading is divided into four categories: consumption_temporary storage_eunuch_completed. This book is currently in my consumption group. Every time I open the starting point, I will check which book has been updated in the consumption group, but there will also be situations where it is obviously updated, but I feel that I don't want to read the book now. If I don't subscribe to read it for several days in a row, then I will put the book in the temporary storage. When there are no books to read, I will go to the temporary storage to look for books to read. But for me personally, less than 10% of the books I put in the temporary storage can enter the consumption group twice. A reader who likes to read books and consume them will go to the rankings, Sanjiang, new book lists, and even look for books in the daily guide every week. In fact, there will always be books, but once the subscription for a book is stopped, unless the book is really decided to be saved for 3 days and 5 days to be read at once, there is a high probability that the book will not be continued to be read. So I hope the author can make a good decision on how to write this book later, because I really like this book now, but after subscribing for several days in a row, I always feel that it is a little bit inferior and does not meet my expectations. Qidian has thousands of readers. Others can order 10,000 and 100,000 orders, which shows that there is no shortage of readers. I searched for books similar to "Daddy" in the AI ​​search, and it seems that there are no books with "100,000 orders", but there are books with 10,000 orders, so the author does not have to worry about writing about "Nanny" and no one will read it. As long as the content is attractive, readers will naturally have it. Whether it is a single female protagonist or a multi-female harem, I hope you can make it clearer, so that you can retain readers better, and avoid dissatisfying both types of readers.

Gua! This is a novel that real men should read!

Author, resist the pressure. I feel very good. As long as you don't write a bad book, I will definitely order all of them.

Does the male protagonist really like to take over as his father?

I haven't read the last dozen chapters. Mainly because I can't stand having multiple female protagonists and having a pure love female classmate.

You have retreated, and there is still no real progress in publishing Chapter 30. Are people here to see you having an affair?

Can you write mainly the part about the nanny? I think the impression of the nanny part is better. I really don't want to catch a cold about the campus part. My personal opinion is for reference only.

Eunuch writing is ambiguous. . .

Brother, to be honest, I have skipped all the school plots and only watched the drama about the nanny. The tone of this book is about the nanny. You can write the campus plot in one stroke and write more about the nanny and the nanny.

Author, you have to understand that the core of your book is daddy stories! Daddy stories! Daddy stories! The plug-ins are all about daddy skills. I only feel comfortable reading when I write about Jiang. As soon as I enter the campus plot, I feel like my hips are stretched, and there are too few plots about my daughter. Now it feels like the author just doesn't have an outline and keeps going back and forth between home dad stories and campus youth stories. But the campus article is not interesting at all. If you just write about family alone, it will be easy to finish. So I suggest the author to cut off the campus as soon as possible, and focus on career for these scenes... The most suitable role for the protagonist is actually to be a training teacher. Replace stay-at-home dad + campus with stay-at-home dad + career

Have you ever written a novel? Just write a novel

Cheating is a time-displacement cheat that was very popular some time ago. Although the empowerment and money-making types are quite ridiculous, it is quite consistent with the plot at the beginning, and the entry is not bad. It has created several different types of female characters, which looks okay. Although some women are a bit too stereotyped in their routines, they are still quite likable. After starting a business in the later period, it entered the garbage time. Basically, it was all about making money and running between a few women. The urban stallion novel's monster-fighting and upgrading routines were not interesting anymore, and some places were forced to reduce intelligence. The three views are not very compatible. Hiding and setting up a harem is not my favorite type in the first place. It is not very moral. The stallion stories I like are basically about the protagonist looking for what kind of woman, or they have a single heroine but no heroine. This kind of thing will not refuse the comer. Hiding and tucking is a bit crooked for me, so I prefer a harem with the position of Jiang Wanyi and the female CEO (although taking over is a point deduction, if you don't plan to give points in the first place, it will not be deducted if you partner up with each other), but how do you give points to two school beauties? It was a little bit poisonous for me to hide their love from each other. I thought that the two school beauties would be ambiguous until the end of the book. Originally, the male protagonist's needs could be solved by the two divorced wives, and then the two school beauties would be ambiguous until graduation and end at the Shura Field. I think it's pretty good. The problem is left to the reader's imagination at the end. And when the protagonist cannot solve the identity problem, in my opinion, it looks like these two school beauties were deceived by a purebred scumbag PUA (if the school beauties If you don't accept co-husbands, then it's a purely legal column), which doesn't fit my three views. Because the protagonist is not sincere enough, I don't think there is any problem in starting a harem. I also read harem stud books. Either the heroine asks for a stake, or she opens a harem without concealing it. The protagonist's behavior in this book is too bad, which does not agree with my initial expectations for the protagonist. I think people who focus on the maternal and child field and like children must have a certain degree of self-moral restraint. However, the progress of the later plot shows that there is no such thing.

A good collection of cute baby babies, you turned them into Neptune's harem alive, I gave up 😰😰😰

I've watched more than 10% of it. What can I say, it's quite good-looking and I'm motivated to read it, but it's a little itchy. I feel a little itchy, but I can't scratch the itchy place. In this system, you can give money, if you give more than one thousand, you can give it. You said giving skills is only for infants and young children. There is no way to show off in school, just like pretending. Whether you feel good or not, you won't be able to get up or down. Secondly, the same goes for female characters. Song Jianian is a replica of Feng Nanshu's character. It's okay to play the good friend game. Jiang Wanyi has already played it and is still aloof from the long psychological description. It's very uncomfortable. Please hurry up.

This book is very well written. Why are my grades so poor? Is there any problem behind it?

Song Jianian

Why is it a harem?😭

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I feel that the system should reward a medicine or formula that can extend lifespan, so that there is no age gap, and it will be more comfortable to read novels. After all, medicines that extend lifespan are not divorced from the urban background

Don't look at the title of the book, look at the content and laugh out loud.

Father's love is like a mountain🙂🤓😭😭🤐😐😁😅😐😆🤭🤤😟😡😠😏

Start taking solid food at eight months? It's nothing but random writing about daddy?