Clan Cultivation: I Prove Immortality Through the Chaotic Dao Realm

Just based on what you said in your introduction, you will live forever with Daolu's children. If you can write the book well, I will stand on my head and eat flying.

I started out with a lot of stories about family upbringing and farming, but ended up writing about having no daughters and no children. I was really convinced. The parents sacrificed themselves to heaven, and then inexplicably dedicated themselves to a group of clan members and then died. They are all friends, right? I didn't understand what kind of family story this was. I felt so moved. If you don't know how to write a love story, you can just have a woman without being mainstream. The family story focuses on farming and raising a family. You can do it without a heroine, but you can't do it without a woman. I really admire it. Although the author of this book has many flaws, he at least knows that there is a woman. It's good and worthy of encouragement.

Some Taoist friends said that it is only reasonable to eliminate erysipelas through vomiting through the body. That means cultivation depends entirely on resources. I beg to differ. Otherwise, if there are elixirs available, just eat them to death. If there are too many erysipelas, stop taking the elixirs for a period of time. Just meditate and breathe out to get rid of the problem. Those disciples of high-level sects, the true heirs of thousands of years of family history, no matter how bad their qualifications are, there is no need to worry. Anyway, I think this setting is more unreasonable than the setting in the book. The setting in the book is that you must have certain qualifications and can only take a certain number of pills to assist your practice. If your qualifications are too poor, too many pills will cause a more serious bottleneck and make you unable to advance. Just like the common settings we see in cultivating immortals, some that can increase lifespan, improve qualifications, and improve important attributes can only be effective after being taken for the first time. In Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, if the same elixir is taken too much, it is not emphasized that single erysipelas will be produced, but it is also emphasized that it gradually loses its effect. This setting is reasonable. Cultivation of immortality pays attention to balance. Pills can improve cultivation. This effect is extremely unnatural. How can you take it arbitrarily and then have very few or even no restrictions? It is very unbalanced.

Well! The author writes very well and very delicately, but the 500,000-word chapter is almost 200 chapters long and the protagonist is still in the period of Qi training! It's just that the writing is too detailed, giving the impression that the main character is grinding through things and has no patience anymore, so I'll just keep reading for now.

If the settings are not consistent and too deviated, it will be very difficult to watch. See Chapter 8 to eliminate erysipelas, which is poisonous If elimination of erysipelas is so difficult Elixirs will not play such a big role in cultivating immortals It should be metabolized by the body. A large amount of erysipelas can be discharged through breathing and breathing spiritual energy practice Then a very small amount of stubborn erysipelas slowly develops resistance and requires special elixirs to wash the essence and cut the marrow to be discharged.

I suggest that you don't write much now. I changed it before. Will there be spiritual roots when struck by lightning? And revealed it directly. . . . The main character is really great. . . I'm really not afraid that my family will skin you, cramp you, and torture your soul.

Now comes another Secret Realm of Ten Thousand Beasts, where the protagonist has to drag on to build the foundation. After entering, it is nothing more than fighting monsters, getting treasures, taking risks, strengthening the foundation, and then a boring plot with near-miss life and death crises. I went out in the early stage without making any noise. Although there was foreshadowing in the early stage, the author used the outline and it was difficult to change, but it was too grinding. You can definitely advance to the foundation building and then rely on the golden finger to sneak in and kill.

Breaking through to the next level of qi training is written like becoming an immortal. How do you make up the breakthrough to form the elixir? Such an awesome golden finger is used to show off every day.

It feels a bit strange to have a double holiday to give your wife spiritual roots, and in the future, others will know about their cultivation. If you don't have spiritual roots, you can now cultivate immortality. Are you not afraid of being spread? It's so unnatural, and pig's feet are also spiritual roots for mortals, so I'm afraid it won't cause the disaster of killing.

It's almost 200 chapters and you haven't even established a foundation yet. You continue to push the boundaries.