Broken, the Game I Played Came True

There is a female protagonist who chases her 😍😍😍

The author can look at the male protagonist's self-cultivation and want to see the protagonist confront Wen Yiqian

It's well written, but I tried using the phone on myself. If it's not good, just hide behind the scenes.

This plot arrangement still feels a bit baffling. At the beginning, the position of network security was assigned, and then the job was transferred to the criminal police in such an unreliable way. It seemed that the captain of the criminal police wanted to drag people over at first, but was unwilling. This feels like the reader is forced to lower the favorability of the protagonist. From a practical point of view, these are indeed accidents, and they are made up for in desperation, but when you write a novel and design such a plot, it feels like it is not hard work. Originally, the job change was mediocre and had no impact at all. It was just a point that would not be paid too much attention to. I had to write a plot of deceiving the boss and then begging for help in a low voice. When it comes to a profession like the police, normal people are willing to read something positive.

Is the author a newbie? The story is okay, but the writing style is a bit lacking. Please work harder.

The idea is good, the subject matter is okay, but the author's writing skills are insufficient. Some originally complete plots are not described in detail, resulting in inexplicable blank links. The reader's perception is extremely poor, and it is not to say that it is intellectual, it is simply that the writing is not that perfect. The author has a complete story line and scenes in his mind, but he can't do it when retelling it to the readers. I hope the more he writes, the better it will be.

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Two chapters were wrong, I adjusted them (manually funny)

It's too bland, nothing exciting, and not suspenseful enough.

I read it in one sitting, it's great, but it's too little.

Nothing outstanding. Hodgepodge

In these chapters, the names are mixed up. After becoming Yu Feng, there are still people named Yu Feng and Lin Qi.

It's pretty good-looking. It may have some minor flaws but it doesn't cover up the flaws. Why are there so few comments in the comment section?

It's very interesting. Is it a new author?

To summarize: Xiaobai's article 1. The author doesn't know how to write about female protagonists, the first 20 chapters are okay As soon as he gets involved with this female protagonist, the plot starts to get smart😑 2. The protagonist has now traveled to a parallel time and space, and he also has a copy that can affect reality? The introduction of the time travel background is not concise enough, and the writing in the previous dungeon is vague. 3. Because the dungeon directly affects the real world, there are many logics that do not make sense. The author also wants to write one after another (urban novels must have basic logic). Moreover, the protagonist is Sir. In addition to containing the protagonist (dungeon), Sir's other function is to wash the streets. The subject matter is well chosen, a bit like (crisis management game). Unfortunately, lack of experience, the writing logic cannot support the plot

I want to ask the author? Can't you go back? He was actually kidnapped. Why don't you just back off after the free prostitution message, and save your teammates by the way? Why not take advantage of it? Catch those people by the way.

It's very awkward, the logic doesn't make sense, and it's a bit forced to create a plot.

So the last thing left in this copy is why hallucinations occur

Can the intermission be marked as ending?

Write slowly, I will have time to read it later

Author, your update speed is so fast now, with 10,000 updates per day, but I feel that the advancement speed is a bit slow.

A very uncomfortable point is that the villain has a gun, but the protagonist always shoots with bare hands.

Chapter 59: Here, how did the protagonist of Superboy get touched behind his back?

Come on

Very well written👍👍👍

One chapter has been blocked...

The writing is smooth and the characters are vivid. Then there are no advantages, the plot advancement, the growth of the protagonist, etc. Are a mess. This is how you can write short copy well, even those who write long-term copy don't know how to say it. There are also a lot of criminal investigation novels and film and television works that I have written. Forensic Qin Ming is the one I see most intuitively. It is a good reference but has no merit.