China Entertainment: I Am 18 Years Old and Surrounded by 85 Flowers

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After reading it, I would like to give you some suggestions: First, improve the character of the protagonist. Don't be funny and flirtatious everywhere. It's a bit awkward and can easily give people a frivolous feeling. Two, don't incorporate too many memes. The memes are there to polish the plot. Don't write a plot just for the memes, in the hope that it can be improved later. Third, daily love and entertainment articles are the top priority. Once written, they will attract readers. For example, the plot in the movie theater could have been written as a sweet first kiss atmosphere, but instead a really boring plot was thrown in, and the whole episode fell apart.

The first line of text Yang Mi persuades her to quit. I get annoyed when I see this person

The author stops sending songs. Most readers cannot accept it

If there are too many jokes, it will be useless.

There are too many gags, and it feels like there is no main plot, and it just feels like it is always in the water. And the author himself doesn't sing? ? You can make money quickly by singing by yourself. Then only with primitive accumulation and fame can we make capital! !

Still a little flower, a little flower who is almost 40?

The 110,000-word discussion forum is all about posting pictures. Author, you'd better look at what's wrong with your writing.

The jokes in the first few chapters were quite funny at first, but after reading a few chapters, I started to get bored with the many jokes in one chapter.

I was persuaded to quit in the first three chapters, so I did it for the best.

If only the jokes in this book were cut in half and the protagonist's flirtatious words were reduced, the results of this book would be much better!

After watching it for so long, I feel like the big secret is the one who gives you money!

I just want to ask if you wrote the flower picking system.