Type-Moon: I'm Barely Human

The smell of certain fungi is too strong. It is not recommended to overdo it to avoid getting the same disease.

For Arquette, the author should be prepared to sit on the sidelines. After all, the popularity of the moon is not high, let alone Tsukihime. I hope you can stick to it

The last time I saw the protagonist flying to the world of Four Wars, I started to raise it. Today I finished it in one go. Let me talk about my feelings. After I posted a post last month saying that the author fsn wrote the book, I was stunned by the second half of the book. The first half of this volume is very well written. The bond between the protagonist and all the characters in FSN and the changes to those characters are written much better than the first volume. But the second half of the volume, which travels back to the Fourth World War, was too written. After the Holy Grail War was fought in one night, it would be interesting if the protagonist pushed alone. However, the perspectives of each character were frequently switched, and the battle was completely messed up. The protagonist's role was greatly reduced, and the writing was too messy. Obviously the first half of the volume is well written. The story should revolve around the perspective of the protagonist, with other people's perspectives mixed in. The content of thirty chapters switches to the perspective of more than a dozen people, which is too confusing. It is written in this way and it is completely impossible to distinguish the priority of the plot. This is a novel, not an anime, and you can't expect to switch perspectives repeatedly to express the delivery of the picture. Let's talk about relationships, why do you play galgame and second-tier games? Don't you like the female characters in the game? In the first half of the volume, you laid out so much about Rin and Sakura's feelings for the protagonist, but after finishing the whole volume, the protagonist is about to leave. Rin and Sakura suddenly have no feelings for the protagonist 🤔. You didn't lay out so much in the beginning, but at the end, their feelings suddenly disappeared. Medea gave up her feelings for the protagonist and returned to the Heroic Seat after giving the protagonist a kiss. I don't know what I read after reading the whole volume. The first volume also showed the relationship between Bai Ji and the senior sister. My last post was a waste of praise for the author. The writing is not as good as the previous volume. You might as well just drop the ruthlessness and let the readers enjoy it for a while. But in the end, there is nothing. If you don't recommend female characters as a Fate fan, why are you writing Fate? In short, I clicked into this book with great expectations, and after reading it, I left with a lack of enthusiasm. The author, please think carefully about why you play galgame. You can write each volume longer, don't write it so messily and in such a hurry. Most of the books you read are for Bai Ji. Everyone is Yue Chou. Yue Du knows why he likes you.

The author's writing style is very similar to that of Mushroom, which is very unfriendly to readers who don't understand Xingyue.

Shape moon? And the starting point is still Tsukiji? This is a rare thing

What else are you going to write? It's so messed up.

What the hell is written here? It's a mess.

It feels like the male protagonist is becoming more and more succubus, and even a female will have a crush on him. This is also the usual style of male protagonists in the Fate series, even more so. In the original work, there were still female characters who were antagonistic to the protagonist, but here they seem to be completely gone, and it feels a bit like a harem.

There is a lack of more narrative descriptions of the protagonist's growth. From the development of the article, I do not feel that the protagonist has any changes in areas other than strength. This is not good, and it is a common problem in most online novels. They set up a stage for the characters to show their talents, but ignore the expression of the core of the characters. Every novel in my memory that I feel can be called a good one, whether published or online, has an impressive protagonist. The protagonist reveals himself as the plot develops. You can always have the same character, but the core of your character must be revealed. I hope this can be supplemented in the following article. Having a distinct protagonist can also add a lot of color to the article.

I've seen the latest chapter. The author's fungus style has already been developed for eight years (it's delicious, I love eating it). I just feel that writing this way will reduce the traffic a lot.