Tomb Robber: I Really Am Not a Rice Dumpling.

These new chapters copy the original text 😰

The protagonist you wrote is too imaginary. In order to give him motivation, you added a lifespan limit to him, but his behavior is not a behavioral pattern that cares about lifespan. There are a lot of monsters in Genting Palace that can be farmed, but he doesn't go back to farm them when he has time. You talk about adventure. For explorers, the biggest treasure of Genting Tiangong is behind the bronze door. Your protagonist has no interest in it. Money is the same as life span. Famous, didn't see him caring. I couldn't see what he wanted to do, what he wanted, I just thought it was what the author wanted him to do, so I just made an excuse and went with it. The whole creation was very empty.

Nowadays, there are primary school students, junior high school students, and people who have no hope of taking the college entrance examination everywhere, writing books. Their writing style is childish, incoherent, and their thoughts are childish in the extreme.

It feels very much like the original version of Tomb Raiders. And the writing feels smooth👍👍

The writing is clever and thoughtful. . . Don't always add naive ideas and reasons. Be mature.

Chapter 2 Directly persuades you to quit, no brainer

There's nothing wrong with the writing and plot, I'm just worried that the update will be discontinued. Come on, brother 👍👍👍

I saw Mrs. Huo competing for the stage of style thunder. The protagonist is not very strong and has no sense of presence. It is still a nanny story and there are no women. I don't know how I persisted in watching it. I wish there were so few people watching. The author is immersed in his own world, which I found so boring. The protagonist's strength is suppressed too hard, and the protagonist is too weak.

The writing is okay, please give two monthly passes to encourage the author, and then I hope that the protagonist will be more cautious, and there are some things that do not need to be explained. For example, those centipedes escaped, and the human-faced birds stopped attacking and ran away. The protagonist does not need to explain, and the protagonist can also be greedy for money, because readers are ordinary people. Seeing a protagonist who has no desires and desires will reduce the sense of substitution

I watched it a long time ago, and now I have finished it all at once. It's true, but the ending just doesn't have that flavor anymore.

It's very well written. I've read a lot of Tomb Raider fanfiction, but it's rare that it's well written. I can't stand it until halfway through. The previous life limit was a bit discouraging, but it got much better in the middle and later stages. The data in the book is also too bad. The author is a ruthless person if he can persist! I guess I will return this book after I finish writing it, right? But I still hope to continue to publish new works about tomb robbers or ghost blows. The combination of the two will be better. A longer story will be fun to read. I don't know if the heroine is difficult to write. The pure iron triangle is still too popular. A little emotional line is more comfortable.

There was really no need to show it at that time. All three of them could do it at once until they were stunned, and then pull out. There was no particularly big poison point before, but this gave me a 50% chance of being persuaded to quit. 😵

I can't stand it after reading Chapter 5. The author's plot treatment really makes my head hurt. If you write a Tomb Raider Notes fanfic, haven't you noticed that the Tomb Raider Notes itself doesn't have much ink on character conflicts? People can explain the conflict between characters in just three or five sentences, but you have to use several paragraphs to describe it repeatedly and emphasize it deliberately, which creates a situation where the strong supports the weak and the weak dominates.

I wanted to watch it, but Goldfinger introduced it and I was scared by the setting that a corpse still has a lifespan. Zombie Zongzi~

The level of the second volume is much higher than that of the first volume. It's a bit interesting. Come on.

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It's a very innovative fanfic. In addition, the protagonist's past life settings don't need to be increased too much. Multiple skills will be very interesting.

As the title states, I don't know if it's a gift for a daughter. I haven't read it any further. You can see the first few chapters of The Babysitter at the beginning.

Are there no female protagonists?

Very pretty

Will Audio-Technica know about the protagonist later?

I feel like my brother was very surprised when he saw it and wouldn't say "Oh my God"