Dragon Ball: Reborn as a Saiyan, No Regrets in Life

I have never seen a fan write about her, I need some imagination

Don't write any combat power system. The most suitable thing for the protagonist in your book is to improve his sexual ability. In just 30 chapters, you already have 4 horses. Is it enough for you? Why don't you write a system to give yourself a few more tricks? A good second dimension allows you to write about nothing but the lower body, right? Is this what you think of the second dimension? Do you watch anime just to see women? No wonder the reputation of the second dimension is so bad. Do people like you have nothing but sex?

The innocent heart is Wukong, the strong one is also Wukong, and it has nothing to do with the time traveler.

No. 18

Bulma is the main heroine, what about the other little wives? Also, do you accept No. 21, Bados, Kesi, Markarita, etc.?

I've only read three chapters, so let me tell you my opinion. The idea of ​​this book is good, but the author's writing style is a bit clumsy, and the protagonist looks like a loser. It is not suitable for readers who like to watch Jinba. The protagonist looks like a plug-in tool.

There is a way for the protagonist to become stronger quickly. If the five harems are pregnant and hand in hand, they can become a super Saiyan god.

Sure enough, our ancestors were right, don't meet too stunning monkeys when you are young, so Kakarot is considered a monkey and there is nothing wrong with him. When I was little, I only cared about watching monkeys...

I really thought it was to make up for the regret. Is the author's regret not including all the heroines?

To be honest, I rely a little too much on the system. I rely entirely on the system to obtain skills. In my opinion, the first three skills can actually be learned from Gohan. Dance Air Technique can be easily learned after controlling a little bit of Qi. Turtle style Qigong can be learned from Gohan. Qi You can also go directly to Gohan. The little bit of combat power that is rewarded is not as good as the reward. Arrange some rewards for improving talents. In the original book, he died long ago before he had time to teach, but this book is still alive now, which gives people a very bad impression. The only thing I am looking forward to is to have all the female protagonists.

Title: Saiyans who have never seen a woman

To be honest, personally speaking, when you travel to Dragon Ball, you would think about getting a girl. I don't like it either as a reader or if you actually travel through time. MD, I only watched it for the fighting, and you ended up doing this to me. Isn't this funny? If I want to accept girls, why don't I just go and write about other worlds On my personal opinion, to be honest, when I see a lot of people who want to accept girls or a bunch of girls, I feel like, "Is this still Dragon Ball?"

The plot has been really boring recently. The gap between the protagonist's normal combat power has not been widened. Now it's almost the same as the original.

Is there any brave man who makes a wish to the dragon? "Shenlong, I need you to marry me and be my wife" From now on, you don't need to look for the Dragon Balls, just let your wife fulfill your wishes.

Does the so-called "no regrets" mean not to let go of any female character in Dragon Ball? You might as well change the name of the novel to "Ribei Dragon Ball"

There is really no need to transform into Sun Wukong. You have grown up step by step from an inferior Saiyan. You really are not that capable as a time traveler.

There is no need for a system to be reborn as Sun Wukong. He already has great potential, knows the plot, knows the direction of training, and has the help of Dragon Balls. You don't need a system to have smooth sailing.

As a time traveler, the protagonist has no priority at all. Wukong is the protagonist. The author needs to distinguish clearly, Super Red and even Super Blue break through together with Vegeta, it feels like. There is no sense of satisfaction at all. The original Vegeta gradually became equal to Goku in Super, but this is a fanfic in which Goku is the protagonist. The author has to make Goku stronger and more talented. For example, in the Super Blue section, it would be great if you made Goku transform a few months earlier. In the Super Red section, you would make Goku look more talented in fighting compared to Vegeta, and so on. It's all very good to be ahead of the curve, but how can you keep up with Vegeta? When I talked about Metal Gula earlier, I mentioned that the Muppets chapter is actually just the same as the original work in a single level. First of all, it is not any better than the original work. To be honest, I am a little disappointed. Yesterday I gave you a monthly vote.

A bigger problem is that we can't distinguish between priorities. Is the protagonist Krillin or Sun Wukong? What's the use of having the protagonist when Krillin has taken all the limelight? As a result, the protagonist looks like a dry book with no sense of satisfaction, and it has stepped on a fan minefield.

I haven't read it for so long that I'm hallucinating. This article gives me the smell of a childish plot of a pornographic film. I feel like I want to write it but don't dare to write it in depth because of the review. It's nothing.

Super 4 vs Super Blue

If you don't leave any regrets, don't let down the good girls and don't let the bad girls go.

No, angels won't be eliminated, right? I saw Bados said that even if the universe is eliminated, angels won't have any impact.

I feel like Naha and Raditz were so hasty in getting off the line, even though they have always been the ones doing the trick.

Hey hey

I have read a more enjoyable Dragon Ball collection to realize my dream, Xidu: Many Children, Many Blessings, Starting with Bulma

Why don't you post it somewhere else, like the picture above?

It has to be a harem, not bad, not bad

The first few dozen chapters were okay, but later on it felt like the original Sun Wukong, the "innocent heart" Sun Wukong

After reading it, does the author have any new plots to write? It should be almost done now that I feel comfortable with it?