A Guide to Building a Primitive Tribe

It's not good enough. I suggest you read Ancient Gods' Search for Scriptures. "Primitive War Chronicles". I don't know if this book is still available.

Newcomers bravely enter the original stream, support you

If you choose Totem Spirit as the protagonist, you don't have to worry about lifespan and have more time to develop the tribe.

It is as plain as water, describing the primitive tribes as being too friendly. Although prehistoric humans did not have as many conspiracies and intrigues as today, the strong will survive and the weak will die between tribes. Except for a few tribes here that are aggressive, the other tribes are completely loving each other and a family. Moreover, the protagonist is an extremely holy mother, and as a tribal totem consciousness, when he comes into contact with others, they are slightly resistant to his apology, and he even apologizes for his bad thoughts. If you have advanced technology that you want to pass on to the tribe, but you feel that the tribe needs to develop independently and cannot rely too much on him, then you traveled to the past and became a mascot?

It's too warm. I don't know if the author did it on purpose. The current descriptions in this book are too harmonious and warm. There are no conflicts between different tribes, it's all warm.

Since the protagonist is a totem spirit, we should prefer group portraits. The pace may not be so fast. The main focus is on war. Don't go one after another. It is too fast and cannot reflect the changes in the tribe. 70% Is about daily life and the progress of civilization. If there is no chat from the protagonist's perspective, write the perspective of the tribesmen, especially Little characters, the perspective of native tribesmen, the perspective of tribesmen integrated from outside, and recently a perspective of the growth of newborns can be added, which can occasionally appear until they grow into the pillars of the next generation 🤓 Of course, these are all my ideas, and the author still bases them on his own ideas

Three years to unify nearby tribes, five years to unify the world, and ten years to go to the universe...

This is the first time I read a primitive book like this. I read the latest 97 chapters in one go. There was no skipping chapters. The writing is smooth and the plot is well controlled. The protagonist of this book travels into a totem-like fantasy primitive world and guides the fantasy primitive people to engage in farming and cultivation. It is a bit like "Xuan Jian Xian Clan", but better than Xuan Jian Xian Clan. The review is different. I also saw reviews of other primitive books in the book review area, so I read them all, such as "Primitive War Chronicles". The original war chronicles tells the story of the protagonist traveling to a relatively primitive world, taking risks, fighting and growing up. It belongs to the fantasy hero adventure genre, not to tribes. The writing about cultivating and developing farming, and "My Primitive is Amazing" also belong to the category of fantasy heroes. There are also very few descriptions of farming, and the writing is more childish. It is completely different from this book. I haven't read "I'm Not a Savage" yet. I will read it again when I have time before making a comment. I compare I like farming, so this book is more suitable for me. It doesn't seem to be toxic at the moment, but the author's writing is too idealistic, and the characters are a bit stereotyped. Man is a complex animal. Some people may criticize me for saying that man is an animal, but if you expand the world view to the universe, man is just an animal. It's just a race of things. People's thinking will change with time, environment, interests and other factors. Therefore, people's hearts are weird. Wherever there are people, there are rivers and lakes. The author should write more about the multi-faceted nature of each character and the succession of tribal roles, instead of all being for the tribe and the protagonist. They can all become saints, so it will be difficult to write the following plot. I am afraid that the protagonist will appear as saints, and the supporting characters can only be supporting roles. In a group portrait novel, every character should be the protagonist, and each character can be a separate book. The role of the protagonist in this kind of group portrait farming novel should be to only grasp the big picture of the tribe. Rather than the protagonist eventually becoming a fantasy hero, the growth experience and ending of each character in the tribe are the highlights of this type of book. Maybe the author has already finished the outline, and I just have some suggestions. In fact, the author has written it so far, and it is really good. I hope the author can read it well. Don't ruin the book. According to the current author's level, I will vote for this book with two monthly votes each month. My financial ability is limited. I hope friends who also like this book will spread the word and vote for subscriptions, so that the author can work hard to code and give us a different world!

Yes, it has the feeling of a primitive war record, but why did the tribe name be changed to Zhu? Doesn't Yu sound better, and it goes better with the totem text. To be honest, the name Zhen Zhu is a bit incompatible with other tribal names. At the same time, the characteristics of the tribe are not reflected. For example, the shamans of the Yan tribe can control rocks, and the warriors have harder bodies. This is the characteristic. When I first saw the performance of the leader, I thought that the characteristics of the Yu tribe warriors were their body. The body is lighter and can jump between branches like Qinggong. I didn't see this performance later. When I moved, I still thought that the tribe would find a place with steep terrain where the characteristics of the tribe could be developed. I even thought about inventing bows and arrows in the future, and adding light functions to human-handed bows and arrows to kill the enemy. Unfortunately, there was no such thing. Relatively speaking, the tribes in the original war records have more characteristics. This can be improved and it will be more attractive.

There are very few people who dare to write original texts.