Monster Hunter: From Environmental Creature to King of the Elder Dragons

Well, the first few chapters were alright, but the plot after rescuing the Thunder Wolf Dragon cub became a bit hard to swallow. Leaving aside whether the Slug could even steal the Zinogre's egg, especially one that was almost hatching, the protagonist snatched it from the Slug and immediately hatched it, perfectly timing it.

Let's see how you write next. If you keep writing abstract plots, then you can just keep writing for fun.

For super-large-scale games, I hope the ecosystem is interesting. Is there an ecosystem where hunters can sneak in and gather materials while the main character is sleeping? Or is there an ecosystem similar to Titan that is beneficial to the environment and attracts creatures like the fluffy pheasant to climb on its back?

These latest images are a bit abstract. What level are you at now? You dare to mess with rich women? Aren't you afraid of death? Or do you think the author can make the protagonist not die?

As a fan of Monster Hunter/Nekogami novels, I think this book ranks among the top few of the Monster Hunter/Nekogami novels I've read (although there aren't many Monster Hunter/Nekogami novels to begin with). Those who like Monster Hunter/Nekogami novels should definitely check it out. A detailed analysis of the pros and cons follows (no spoilers).

What kind of garbage have you been writing in the last few chapters? It's completely changed style. You could have become invincible by gradually developing your strength, but you insisted on courting disaster. Was it ghostwritten?

Is Zhu Pei Niang's name really that awful?

I finally understand why I abandoned it; it was because I had the habit of raising cubs—I raised a baby Zinogre.

The writing is quite good, and the plot flows smoothly. However, there were too many specific data points shown during the battles in the beginning. It would be better to avoid showing detailed data such as a single palm strike having several tons of force.

Among Monster Hunter novels, this is the only one I've seen that uses the theme of environmental symbiosis, so the subject matter is a strength. Other authors have already pointed out a few minor flaws, but they don't outweigh the overall merit. The biggest issue with this book is its update frequency; if the update frequency increased, its performance wouldn't be bad.