Why Should Young People Be Afraid of the Rising Sun?

Advantages: The writing style is there. Overall, the writing is smooth and the plot is very smooth Disadvantages: It is impossible to tell what the whole story is about in the first chapter. The pace is too slow. Nowadays novels require a fast pace. How can we have the patience to listen to you slowly telling a story when everyone lives so hard. The beginning of the chapter should be about crisis, create conflict, and let readers get involved quickly. It is recommended to start writing directly from being sold by human traffickers. As for signing a contract, if you write 100,000 words, few editors will be willing to sign it after reading it. If you want to sign 6,000 words, you will sign it. Instead of advertising on Writer's Assistant, it is better to think carefully about signing a contract as soon as possible. The above are all authors, not your target reading group.

It's a bit confusing and I don't know what I wrote. You can make an outline so that you can know what you want to write about in the novel.

The name of this novel... Is hard to comment on. Why don't you change it? It's hard to attract others. I suggest you change it.

Why hasn't the author updated recently?

Why is there no character introduction in this novel?

The author writes very well👍👍, keep up the good work. As a reader, I am honored to read it, and I would like to give some suggestions to the author: For example, you can set up an outline and give a rough plot and character introduction, which will attract readers more. At the same time, you can also add more content such as environment and psychological description of the characters.

The square saw your point of view and came to support you.

I'm from the square, buddy, your book is a bit traditional, isn't it? 😠, most readers come here for the cool articles.

Faster and faster. Why is the author typing so slowly? I can't wait anymore. I write too little and it's not enough to read. It is recommended that authors post their works on Douyin to attract traffic.

I may have to stop updating here for a while. The author went to investigate cases of school bullying at night and has no clue at the moment. Sorry!

There are quite a lot of the author's emotions in the text, which can actually be included in the author's remarks. Try to control as much as possible. The dividing line can actually be replaced by a horizontal ellipsis. Come on

The feeling of AI is too strong. I suggest you save more manuscripts, but don't rush to post them after you finish them. You will find out after you look back in a few days.

1. It's too confusing. Please divide it into short sentences. 2. There is no need to show off your writing skills all the time. What everyone comes to read is the story itself, not the characters that describe the story. 3. Chaos is chaos, no one will read online articles with the idea of ​​reading One Hundred Years of Solitude. 4. The introduction is a bit mysterious

While reading "Why Should a Boy Be the Rising Sun" written by this young author, I was deeply attracted by its unique charm. The opening chapter, "A small boat drifting in the torrent of time," is a poetic and graphic statement that instantly draws readers into the atmosphere of the story, setting a deep and exploratory tone for the entire text. The author focuses on Hao Zhe's portrayal of the truth of the world. In Hao Zhe's eyes, the emptiness behind the prosperity, the loneliness under the lively appearance of people on the streets, and the falsehood entangled by interests in interpersonal relationships are all described in detail, showing a profound insight beyond his age. These descriptions are not empty preaching, but make readers feel the same through vivid scenes and pictures. For example, "How the invisible hand of time mercilessly crushed all the good things and dreams under the wheel of reality, leaving behind a lot of devastation and helplessness." It makes the abstract time and dream shattering concrete and enhances the emotional impact. Although it has only 47,000 words, it has received more than 600 recommendations, which shows the appeal of its words and the appeal of its story. The author is able to create a profound mood of the protagonist and create a thought-provoking atmosphere within a limited space, which shows his ability to control the rhythm of words and stories. I hope that the author will continue to maintain this meticulous observation of life and precise control of words in subsequent creations, and continue to explore the potential of the story around Hao Zhe's experience. I believe that this work will shine even more dazzlingly.

A good book deserves our appreciation. Don't pay attention to those who don't understand literary works. They will only talk behind their backs. Just be yourself and realize your dreams, step by step. I believe in you. I am the same. The author of the poem and I also fell in love with each other because of the work. I hope you will do the same. We can communicate with each other in the form of works and encourage each other.

Wang He? This name doesn't look very girly either!

It feels like a real thing. Come on, author. I have already donated my vote.

There are too many long sentences, which affects the reading experience. Please give me a point.

I saw it in the square, come on!

Do you have a name for the novel, and a good introduction? The author couldn't think of it. Thank you all in advance.